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The Terrible Town

A Place Where Fear Never Fades"

By Samrah nadeemPublished 12 months ago 5 min read
The Terrible Town
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The town of Ravens brook was not on any map. Hidden deep within the forest, it existed in whispered tales and in the nightmares of those who had been unfortunate enough to pass through it. Travelers spoke of streets that stretched on forever, buildings that shifted when no one was looking, and shadows that didn’t belong to anything living.

Jenna Cole, a young urban explorer, had heard these stories her entire life. But she didn’t believe in legends—only what she could see with her own eyes. Determined to uncover the truth, she set out one foggy morning with a backpack, a flashlight, and her camera, driving deep into the countryside until she reached an old, crumbling sign.

"Welcome to Ravens brook."

Jenna parked her car just outside the entrance, staring at the abandoned town ahead. The air smelled of mildew and something metallic, and the dense fog curled around the buildings like ghostly fingers. Taking a deep breath, she stepped inside.

The streets were unnervingly quiet. The houses, tall and narrow, leaned against one another like drunken sentinels. Windows stared blankly, their glass cracked and smeared with age. Jenna’s footsteps echoed eerily as she made her way toward the center of town.

She found an old newspaper stand with brittle pages still clinging to its racks. The headlines made her skin crawl:

"Ravens brook Vanishes Overnight"

"Missing Persons Count Rises"

"Town Mayor Claims: ‘It Watches Us’"

Jenna swallowed hard but pressed on. She entered an old diner, its stools coated in dust, plates still set on the tables as if waiting for customers who never came. The jukebox in the corner hummed softly—though there was no power.

She took a step back, her heart pounding. Then she heard it—the unmistakable sound of footsteps. Slow, deliberate, coming from the kitchen.

“Hello?” she called, shining her flashlight. The light flickered.

The footsteps stopped.

Trembling, Jenna turned and ran out into the street, breathing heavily. The town seemed... different. Buildings she hadn't seen before loomed overhead, their signs unreadable, written in a language she didn’t recognize. The streets twisted, leading her in directions she didn’t remember taking.

Panic rose in her chest as she checked her phone—no signal. Turning frantically, she spotted the town hall in the distance and sprinted toward it. Its doors groaned open under her touch, revealing a grand, dusty interior lined with portraits.

Each portrait bore hollow-eyed figures staring directly at her. The final painting at the end of the hall made her blood run cold—it was her own face, wide-eyed with terror, dated today's date.

A chill crept up her spine. The whispers started then, a thousand voices murmuring in unison. She turned to flee but froze as figures began emerging from the shadows—silent, their faces featureless except for wide, grinning mouths.

Jenna backed away, realizing with horror that they weren’t walking. They were gliding.

Desperate, she bolted outside, her flashlight swinging wildly. The streets had changed again, narrowing, buildings closing in like a labyrinth. The sign at the entrance was no longer there—there was no way out.

She ran until her legs burned, her breath ragged, but no matter where she turned, she always ended up in the same place—before the diner, the jukebox still humming that eerie tune.

Finally, exhausted and terrified, she collapsed onto the cracked pavement. The figures stood in a circle around her now, their empty faces staring down.

And as the fog swallowed Ravens brook once again, Jenna became just another whisper in the terrible town.

Jenna’s vision blurred as the figures loomed closer, their hollow faces frozen in eerie, unnatural grins. She tried to scream, but no sound escaped her throat. The air around her grew heavy, pressing against her chest like invisible hands.

Then, the whispers changed.

At first, they were unintelligible, but slowly, words emerged. “Stay... Stay... You belong here now...”

Jenna squeezed her eyes shut, willing herself to wake up from what felt like a nightmare. But when she opened them again, the figures were gone. The town square stood empty, the fog swirling lazily around her.

She forced herself to her feet, clutching her camera like a lifeline. Her instincts screamed at her to run, but the town had a way of shifting, trapping her in its maze-like streets. She needed a plan.

Looking around, Jenna spotted a flickering light in the distance—the old Ravens brook Library. If there were answers, they would be there. Summoning every ounce of courage, she trudged forward, the oppressive silence broken only by the crunch of her footsteps.

Inside, the library was eerily intact, as though time had forgotten it. Shelves towered high, filled with ancient books bound in cracked leather. A thick layer of dust coated everything, except for a single book lying open on the central desk.

Jenna stepped closer, wiping away the dust to read the faded title:

"Ravens brook: The Town That Never Ends."

Her fingers trembled as she flipped through the brittle pages. The book spoke of a curse—an ancient pact made long ago, binding Ravens brook to an eternal limbo. Those who entered could never leave, their souls feeding the town’s existence.

The final page had one chilling instruction:

“Escape is possible... but at a cost.”

Jenna’s heart pounded. She needed to find out what that cost was.

Suddenly, a soft creak echoed through the silent library. She spun around to see the shadowy figures gathering in the doorway, their hollow eyes fixed on her. The whispering grew louder, swirling around her like a storm.

“What will you give to be free?” a voice rasped from the darkness.

Jenna swallowed hard, her mind racing. "Anything," she whispered.

The figures stepped aside, revealing an old mirror standing against the far wall. Its surface rippled like water, showing glimpses of the world beyond Ravens brook—her car, the forest road, home. Hope surged through her, but then she saw it.

Her reflection.

It didn’t move as she did. Instead, it smiled, tilting its head unnaturally.

The whispers filled her ears again. “Your place must be filled.”

Tears welled in her eyes. She understood the cost now. If she wanted to leave, something—someone—had to take her place.

The reflection in the mirror reached out, its hand pressing against the glass. Jenna took a shaky step forward, feeling the cold surface against her palm. Her mind screamed in protest, but desperation clawed at her insides.

With a deep breath, she stepped through.

The world beyond rushed to meet her, and suddenly she was standing outside Ravens brook, her car exactly where she left it. Gasping, she turned to look back, but the town was gone—only a thick wall of trees remained.

Relief flooded her, but as she drove away, her eyes flicked to the rearview mirror.

And there it was.

Her reflection, grinning widely, its hollow eyes locked onto hers.

Jenna screamed, but the figure didn’t vanish. It was with her now.

And deep in the heart of Ravens brook, another traveler walked through the fog, confused and alone—another soul trapped in the terrible town.

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