The Silent Room
In the quietest spaces, the loudest horrors await.
There was only one rule: never speak inside the room.
The house had stood abandoned for years, an ominous silhouette against the darkening sky. We inherited it unexpectedly, a relic from a distant relative none of us had ever met. My sister Emily and I arrived at dusk, the light already fading, casting long shadows across the peeling walls and rotting floorboards.
“They say the house listens,” the neighbor had whispered when we first arrived, her face pale, eyes darting nervously to the second floor. “Never speak in the room at the top of the stairs. It’s how it hears you.”
We laughed it off at first. Superstition. Small-town nonsense. But as the sun set and the house groaned with age, the unease settled over us like a heavy blanket. Emily was the first to suggest we explore, her curiosity always pushing her toward what should be left alone. The room at the top of the stairs called to her like a secret waiting to be uncovered.
We opened the door.
It was a simple space—dust-covered furniture, faded wallpaper, and a single window that looked out onto the dark woods beyond. The silence in the room felt... wrong. Too deep. Like the air was holding its breath. I felt it immediately, an oppressive weight pressing against my chest, tightening my throat. Emily stepped inside, her gaze sweeping the room, a faint smile on her lips.
“Don’t—” I started, but I bit down on the word before it left my mouth. The rule echoed in my mind: Never speak in the room.
Emily’s eyes flicked toward me, questioning, but she remained silent. We explored in that tense quiet, neither of us daring to utter a sound, though the urge to speak clawed at me. The house felt alive, as if the walls themselves were listening, waiting for one of us to slip.
As the night wore on, the silence became unbearable. The room seemed to close in around us, the shadows lengthening unnaturally, the corners darkening into inky voids. Every creak of the floorboards, every shift of the wind outside felt amplified, as though the house was breathing, listening, expecting.
And then Emily broke the rule.
She whispered my name—soft, barely audible—but the effect was immediate. The air shifted, heavy and cold. The door behind us slammed shut, and the window rattled violently. Emily’s eyes went wide, her hand clamping over her mouth as if she could take the word back.
But it was too late.
The shadows began to move.
At first, it was subtle—just a flicker at the edge of my vision. Then they started to gather, pulling away from the walls and stretching toward us like dark tendrils. Emily backed up against the window, her face pale, her breaths shallow. I wanted to speak, to scream, but fear had stolen my voice.
The shadows moved faster now, swirling around us, whispering in a language I couldn’t understand. The air grew colder, thick with something unseen, something watching. Emily’s reflection in the window twisted, her face contorting into something I didn’t recognize. The thing in the glass wasn’t my sister.
I yanked her away from the window, dragging her toward the door, but the shadows were faster. They wrapped around her ankles, pulling her back, pulling her into the darkness. Her mouth opened in a silent scream, eyes wide with terror as she disappeared into the void.
I couldn’t save her.
The whispers filled the room now, louder, more insistent. They weren’t coming from the shadows. They were coming from the walls. From the house itself. It knew. It had heard her.
And it had taken her.
I ran, stumbling down the stairs, heart pounding in my ears. The silence in the rest of the house was deafening, oppressive. I bolted through the front door, gasping for air, my mind racing. Emily was gone. The house had swallowed her.
I moved out the next day, leaving everything behind. But at night, in the quiet moments just before sleep, I hear it—the soft, familiar sound of Emily’s voice whispering my name from the dark.
Would you dare speak?
About the Creator
Pride Bohjam
I enjoy crafting dark, twisted tales that explore the supernatural and psychological. I hope my stories offer the eerie, unpredictable thrills you're looking for. Thank you for taking the time to give them a read!



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