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The Scorpion in the Jar – A Sting from the Past

A Mysterious Encounter That Changed My Life Forever

By Noman AfridiPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
“Sometimes, the smallest creatures carry the deepest fears—and the biggest lessons.”

I never believed in bad omens—until the day I opened that old jar.

It was a dusty afternoon in my grandfather’s abandoned farmhouse, a place where silence echoed louder than sound. After his passing, no one had visited it for years. My curiosity led me back to that crumbling house, hoping to find pieces of his forgotten past. I never expected to find something that would change my life.

As I entered the creaky wooden door, a thick smell of age and secrets greeted me. The sunlight filtered through the cracked windows, illuminating particles of dust dancing in the air. I walked toward his study room, untouched for decades, filled with old books, faded photographs, and antique items that whispered forgotten stories.

But something strange sat on the shelf—a large glass jar, sealed tightly, covered with a thick cloth and tied with a red thread. Unlike the rest of the room, the jar was spotless, as if someone had cleaned it regularly. A strange chill ran down my spine as I reached out and removed the cloth.

Inside the jar, suspended in a pale liquid, was a scorpion—its tail curled upward, stinger sharp, black body preserved like a sleeping nightmare.

Why would my grandfather keep such a thing?

Curiosity overtook fear. I placed the jar on the table and noticed a note beneath it. In his handwriting, it read:
"Do not open. This jar holds more than death—it holds memory."

A part of me laughed. A scorpion in a jar couldn’t hurt me. The lid was old, rusty. I twisted it slightly… and it snapped open.

The smell was sharp, bitter, like rotting herbs. But what happened next defied every law of nature.

The liquid inside began to bubble, the scorpion trembled—and before I could react, it leapt out.

I screamed and stumbled back. The scorpion landed on the floor, alive—impossibly alive. It hissed. Not the sound of an insect, but something deeper, darker. Its eyes glowed faintly red.

I backed away, heart racing. The door behind me slammed shut on its own. My phone had no signal. The air grew colder.

Suddenly, the scorpion scurried toward the bookshelf and vanished behind it. I ran to the door, tried to open it—but it wouldn’t budge. Then, whispers filled the room. I turned—no one. The mirror on the wall began to fog from within, and then letters appeared:

“You opened the past. Now it will sting.”

I was trapped.

Hours passed, or maybe minutes—I couldn’t tell. The whispers continued. They weren’t just sounds; they were voices. Familiar. My grandfather’s voice among them: “I warned you, child. Some things are buried for a reason.”

The scorpion returned—only now, it wasn’t small. It had grown, swelling like a shadow. Its tail flicked dangerously, tapping the floor with eerie rhythm. I grabbed a chair, swung it, missed. The scorpion climbed the wall like liquid darkness and perched on the ceiling, staring.

And then… it spoke.

Not in words, but in feelings. A rush of memories not mine filled my head: my grandfather, younger, terrified, holding the same jar. A deal gone wrong. A curse. The scorpion was a guardian of something ancient, something trapped—but when I opened the jar, I freed it.

I sank to my knees. Tears fell.

“Please… let me go…”

Suddenly, silence. The door creaked open on its own. I looked around—the scorpion was gone.

I rushed out, drove home, and never returned. But the nightmares didn’t stop.

To this day, I don’t know whether I faced a spirit, a demon, or my own guilt.

But every now and then, I find scorpion-shaped marks on my windows.

And I remember that note:
“This jar holds more than death—it holds memory.”

Now, I believe it held a warning. Now, I believe it held a warning

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About the Creator

Noman Afridi

I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.

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  • ​​Aiden​​ Wang8 months ago

    amazing

  • Rohitha Lanka8 months ago

    Awesome!!!

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