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The Room That Opens for No One

He thought it was just a room, until it started whispering his name.

By Awais KhaliqPublished 7 months ago 3 min read

Elias Ward inherited the house on a quiet Tuesday morning.

It came without ceremony, no funeral or ashes. His grandfather had simply gone missing, leaving behind a crumbling estate tucked deep in the woods—and a single yellowed letter with the keys.

“Do not open the room at the end of the upstairs hall. If it opens… don’t go in. Leave, and don’t look back.”

Elias laughed at first. It sounded like something out of a bad horror novel. He was a man of logic—twenty-eight, skeptical, grounded in science and reason. Still, the house had a presence to it. Something old. Something heavy.

He moved in by the weekend.

The room was exactly where the letter described: end of the second-floor hall, tucked behind a door unlike any other in the house. It was made of blackened wood, smooth as glass, with no doorknob, no hinges, no keyhole. Just a cold iron plate across the center—engraved with no name, no symbol.

He pressed his palm to it.

Warm.

The first whisper came on the third night.

A soft noise, like the wind slipping beneath a door, just as Elias was drifting off to sleep.

“Elias…”

He sat up, heart thudding. Silence.

The next night, it came again. Louder. Closer.

“Elias… remember the pond?”

He froze. No one knew about the pond—not that version of the story. Not what really happened. He hadn’t told anyone. Not ever.

That’s when he started checking the door at night. It was always closed. No lock, no latch. But he began to notice little things: faint scratches around the edges. The faint scent of ash. The way the hallway grew colder as he walked toward it.

By the fifth night, he stopped sleeping.

He boarded the door shut. Drank himself into oblivion. Anything to drown out the voice that now whispered not just his name—but his memories.

“She cried for hours… and you just watched.”

He called Clara, his childhood friend—the only person who might believe him. She arrived the next day, skeptical but concerned.

“It’s just an old house, Eli. You’re spiraling. Let’s just open the damn thing. Get it over with.”

“No.”

He shook his head, more forcefully than intended. “It doesn’t open. It’s not supposed to.”

That night, Clara vanished.

Her car was still parked outside. Her shoes by the door. Her phone on the kitchen counter—unlocked, screen glowing.

But she was gone.

The door?

It was open. Just slightly. Just enough to see darkness where a wall should’ve been.

Elias didn’t sleep after that. He just watched.

The next day, he tried to break it down.

Hammer. Crowbar. Sledge.

Nothing worked.

The air around it felt… thick. Like it was breathing.

That night, the door creaked open on its own.

And something stepped out.

It was him.

But not quite.

Its skin looked stretched too tightly over its bones. Its smile was too wide, its eyes too still. A wrongness that twisted Elias’s gut as soon as he saw it.

“You looked,” it said.

“Now I get to leave.”

The thing walked past him. Elias tried to run, but the house wouldn’t let him. The stairs looped. Rooms locked behind him. The whispers grew louder.

“He opened it.”

“Now he stays.”

“One goes in, one comes out.”

No one heard from Elias again.

Weeks later, when authorities forced entry, the house was cold and silent. Dust thick as snow. Nothing out of place—except for one room.

The black door was gone.

In its place hung a mirror, nailed to the wall where the entrance used to be.

And when the detective looked up from his notes… he swore he saw something move in the glass.

A man.

Standing still.

Wearing Elias Ward’s face.

Smiling.

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Awais Khaliq

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