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The Quiet Night

When Silence Speaks Louder Than Words

By Muhammmad Zain Ul HassanPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

Elmsworth was a place most would call sleepy, not for its people but for the way time moved there. Days drifted gently like mist over the hills, and nights settled softly like a blanket over the stone cottages. There was no traffic, no towering buildings, no noise—only the hum of crickets, the rustle of old trees, and the steady rhythm of life.

But one night, the quiet felt different. It was heavier, more aware. And twelve-year-old Elsie Hart, who lived at the edge of the woods with her father, felt it in her bones.

She sat on the windowsill, legs tucked up, staring at the sky. It was unusually clear. Stars glistened like tiny lanterns, and the moon was large and watchful. Even the wind was still. No fox barked in the distance. No dog howled. No owl hooted. Just silence.

Elsie’s grandmother used to say, “When the night forgets to breathe, something is listening.”

Elsie didn't quite know what that meant until now. She whispered into the stillness, just to test it.

“Hello?”

Her voice sounded too loud, too alive.

Downstairs, her father was asleep in his armchair, the fireplace dimming to embers. Elsie slipped on her coat, grabbed her flashlight, and opened the front door. The cold nipped her cheeks. The night air smelled of pine and old frost.

She didn’t know where she was going—only that she had to follow the silence.

As she walked through the garden and into the thin trees behind their house, her flashlight flickered and went out. She tapped it. Nothing. The batteries were fresh. But for some reason, Elsie wasn’t afraid. Moonlight bathed the forest floor, bright enough to guide her.

Deeper into the woods she wandered, her breath puffing before her in little clouds. The trees grew older here, taller, as if guarding something. Their trunks twisted like giant knuckles, and their roots curled out of the ground like sleeping snakes.

Then she saw it.

A faint blue glow shimmered between two oaks, hovering just above the ground. It wasn’t like a flame. It didn’t dance. It just… pulsed.

Elsie stepped closer. The moment she passed between the trees, the air changed. It felt warmer, despite the cold. The silence grew even deeper—so quiet, she could hear her heartbeat.

In the center of a small clearing, a figure stood.

It was not quite human. Tall, with skin the color of moonlight and eyes that shimmered like starlight. It wore no clothes, but mist curled around it like a robe. It didn’t move, yet Elsie felt it had been waiting.

The silence now felt like a language.

The figure didn’t speak with words. Yet a voice echoed in her thoughts:

“You heard us.”

Elsie nodded.

“Yes.”

“Few can. Fewer still come.”

“What… are you?” she whispered.

The figure raised one graceful hand. Around them, the trees sighed. The leaves began to glow, faint and green, as if drinking moonlight. The ground beneath her feet pulsed with a heartbeat older than the earth itself.

“We are what was here before the village. Before the fields. Before names.”

Elsie swallowed. She wanted to ask more, but the silence said enough. She understood—somehow. This place wasn’t haunted. It was alive. And it was lonely.

“Every hundred years, one comes,” the voice continued. “One who listens when all others sleep. One who can carry the quiet back.”

She didn’t know what that meant.

“Carry it where?”

“To the hearts of your kind. To remind them that the world still speaks in silence.”

The blue light swelled around her. Warmth spread through her chest. Not the kind from fires or blankets—but a calm, deep warmth, like sunlight through water.

“Will you carry us?”

Elsie’s lips trembled. “I don’t know how.”

The figure smiled—not with lips, but with light. It touched her forehead with a single finger, and suddenly she remembered every moment of stillness in her life:

The hush before a snowfall.

The pause between raindrops.

The breath between two pages of a book.

Those were the places where the world whispered. And she had always heard it. She just didn’t know she was listening.

When she opened her eyes, the clearing was empty. The blue light was gone. The trees no longer glowed.

But something inside her was different.

Elsie returned home just before dawn. Her father never noticed she’d gone. She made tea, sat by the fireplace, and watched the sky change color.

She didn’t tell anyone about the quiet night. Not because she couldn’t—but because she knew they wouldn’t understand. People were always too busy filling silence with noise.

Instead, she began to write. Little notes. Little stories. Poems that started with silence and ended with wonder. She left them in the library, on benches, slipped them into books at the school.

People began to read them. And, slowly, they began to notice the quiet again.

Some paused to listen to the wind. Others sat longer under trees. Children stopped running to watch the clouds drift.

They didn’t know why.

But Elsie did.

The quiet night had chosen her to remind them.

And in every hush, every pause, every still breath—

the world spoke once more.

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Muhammmad Zain Ul Hassan

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