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The Quiet Deep

The snow came down, and with it, a silence that wasn't natural, a quiet that swallowed more than just sound.

By HAADIPublished 17 days ago 5 min read

Arthur grumbled, a low, guttural sound lost in the growing roar of the wind outside. The old house, a collection of groaning timbers and sighing eaves, usually put up a good fight against the elements. Tonight, though, it felt like it was giving up. The windows rattled, not just with wind, but with tiny, insistent pellets of ice, the vanguard of the coming storm. He poked at the fire, a meager orange glow in the hearth, throwing long, dancing shadows that stretched and warped on the walls of his study. Another winter, another stretch of lonely nights up here in the sticks, same as always. But this one felt different, somehow. Colder, maybe. Sharper.

He’d seen the forecast, of course. A real monster, they’d called it. Thirty inches, maybe more, by morning. The kind of snow that shut down roads, snapped power lines, and made you feel small, insignificant. He’d stocked up on whiskey and canned goods, just like a good hermit should. Still, the wind outside, a banshee wail that had been steadily climbing in pitch for the last hour, was starting to get under his skin. It wasn't just noise; it was a presence, pushing against the glass, trying to find a way in. He picked up his book, a worn copy of some pulpy detective novel, but the words blurred. His eyes kept darting to the window.

Then, a shift. Not a sudden quiet, but a smothering. Like a thick, wet blanket thrown over everything. The rattling eased. The shriek of the wind dulled, then softened to a whisper, then to nothing at all. Arthur frowned. He strained his ears, listening. Had the storm passed? No. Impossible. It was only just beginning to build.

He stood up, the old armchair groaning in protest as he did. The silence was heavy. Not just an absence of sound, but something active, pressing down. It was the kind of quiet that made your own heartbeat feel like a drum solo, your breath a rushing river in your ears. He walked to the window, pulling aside the heavy velvet curtain. Outside, the world was gone. Replaced by a swirling, impenetrable white. Snow, big, fat flakes of it, falling so fast and so thick it looked like the air itself was dissolving into powder. It was beautiful, in a terrifying, all-consuming way. The porch light, usually a comforting orange eye, was now a weak, fuzzy orb, barely piercing the storm.

The silence grew. It seeped into the house, absorbing the usual creaks and groans of settling wood, the low hum of the refrigerator in the kitchen. Even the fire in the hearth seemed to burn with a muted crackle, a whisper instead of a snap. It wasn't peaceful. It was *wrong*. The kind of wrong that made the hair on his arms stand up, a primal alarm bell ringing in his gut. He tried to think, to rationalize. Just heavy snow. It absorbs sound. That's all. But his mind wouldn't latch onto it. It felt like the world wasn't just muffled; it had been *erased*.

He walked into the living room, then the kitchen. Every room was steeped in this profound quiet. His footsteps on the old wooden floorboards, usually a familiar creak, were now unnaturally loud. He listened, really listened. No distant rumble of a plow, no wind chimes from the neighbor's a mile down the road, no howl of the stray dog that sometimes wandered onto his property. Nothing. Just the vast, empty space of the quiet, and his own strained breathing.

He looked out the kitchen window, towards the thicket of bare oak trees at the edge of his property. The snow was piling high, reshaping the familiar landscape into soft, undulating mounds. And then he saw it. Or thought he saw it. A shadow, darker than the falling snow, moving slow, deliberate. Just at the edge of the tree line. It was gone as fast as it appeared, swallowed by the ceaseless white.

Arthur squeezed his eyes shut, then opened them. Nothing. Just the snow. It had to be the snow. His mind playing tricks. He was isolated, cooped up, no wonder he was seeing things. He tried to laugh, but it came out a choked, dry cough. He needed to check the generator, make sure it was ready if the power went out. A task, a focus. Anything to escape this crushing stillness.

He grabbed his heaviest coat and a flashlight. The cold in the house was seeping into his bones now, a damp, penetrating chill that the fire couldn't fight. Opening the back door, the blast of frigid air was a physical blow. The snow was already knee-deep. He plunged into it, each step a struggle, the powder swirling around his legs like hungry ghosts. He squinted into the white abyss, his breath misting heavily in front of him. The world was a canvas of pure, unbroken white, stretching out into the dark, formless night.

He reached the shed, fumbling with the frozen latch. The shed was just as quiet, the air inside still and stale. He checked the fuel tank on the generator, topped it off. Done. A simple task, but it had taken him longer than it should have. He turned to leave, his hand already on the latch, when he heard it. A sound, faint but distinct, from within the shed. A soft *thump*. Not outside. Not the wind. From *inside* the small, enclosed space with him.

Arthur froze, his hand still on the latch, cold metal biting into his palm. He held his breath. The sound didn't repeat. He slowly turned, shining the flashlight beam across the cluttered shelves, over tools, old lumber, sacks of seed. Nothing. Just shadows and dust motes dancing in the light. He tried to convince himself it was just the house settling, a branch hitting the roof, anything. But he was in the shed. The house was a good twenty feet away. And the silence, the absolute, smothering silence, made every nerve in his body scream that he wasn't alone. He swung the flashlight beam around one more time, slower this time, stopping on a small, dark shape pressed against the back wall, almost hidden behind a stack of old paint cans. It wasn't there before. It was small. Too small to be anything serious. But it was there. And it wasn't supposed to be.

The world outside the shed was just white. A blank sheet where sound died. He took a hesitant step towards the shape, the beam of his flashlight trembling. His heart hammered, a frantic animal trapped in his ribs. Another step. The air in the shed suddenly felt colder, sharper, a metallic tang on his tongue. He knew, with a certainty that chilled him to his core, that whatever was behind those paint cans, it was the source of the unnatural quiet. It was the thing that had swallowed the wind, the house, the world. It was waiting. He raised his flashlight, the beam unwavering, then the shed door behind him slammed shut, plunging everything but that single, trembling circle of light into absolute, impenetrable darkness.

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