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The Night Someone Knocked Softly on My Bedroom Door

A quiet knock in the dark. A frozen moment. And a night I’ll never forget.

By Noman AfridiPublished 7 months ago 3 min read
A dimly lit hallway, a closed bedroom door, and the sound of a knock that still echoes in my mind.

It was just after 2:17 a.m.

I remember because I had looked at the clock, annoyed that I was still awake. I was lying on my side, eyes barely open, scrolling aimlessly through my phone in the dark — that restless kind of night where your thoughts won't let you sleep.

Then it happened.

Knock. Knock.

Soft. Slow. Barely audible.

Like someone trying not to wake me… and yet wanting me to hear it.

I froze.

It wasn't the kind of knock you'd hear at the front door — no urgency, no strength.

It was closer.

Too close.

It came again.

Knock. Knock.

That’s when I realized —

The sound was coming from inside the house.

Worse —

It was coming from my bedroom door.

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🌒 A Quiet House

I live alone.

No roommates. No pets.

Just me in a small, two-bedroom apartment on the edge of town.

The hallway light had been off. The doors were shut. And I had triple-locked the front entrance like I always do.

So who the hell was knocking?

I didn’t move. My heart pounded so loudly, I thought whoever was outside could hear it.

I waited, trying to convince myself I had imagined it. Maybe something had fallen in the kitchen. Maybe the house creaked.

And then…

Knock. Knock. Knock.

Louder. Firmer.

No mistake now.

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👣 The Sound of Breath

I slid my phone under the pillow, barely breathing, and sat up slowly.

I didn’t speak.

I didn’t call out.

I just… listened.

And then, I heard it.

Breathing.

Yes — someone was on the other side of my bedroom door. Not moving, not whispering — just breathing. Slow, steady, shallow.

I reached under my bed, fingers shaking, and grabbed the mini flashlight I kept there. No weapons. Just light.

I considered calling the police, but I didn’t want to make a sound. Every instinct in me screamed: stay quiet.

I tiptoed to the door, listening.

The breathing stopped.

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🚪 The Door

I placed my ear gently against the door.

Nothing.

No movement. No shadow under the gap.

Silence had returned — the kind that makes you question your sanity.

Maybe it had been a dream.

Maybe I had dozed off, imagined the whole thing.

I turned on my flashlight and opened the door slowly.

The hallway was empty.

Dark. Silent. Still.

I stepped out and scanned around. Checked the front door — still locked. Windows — sealed.

No sign of anyone. No sign of entry.

I even checked the closets.

Nothing.

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🕯️ The Note

But when I returned to my bedroom…

There was a piece of paper on the floor.

Right where the door had been.

It hadn’t been there before. I was sure of it.

I picked it up, hands trembling.

There were no words. Just a single line, handwritten in faded ink:

> “You heard me this time.”

That was it.

No name. No explanation.

Just that haunting sentence.

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🕯️ The Days That Followed

I didn’t sleep the rest of the night.

In the morning, I called my landlord, asked if anyone had access to my unit.

No one had entered. The security camera at the entrance? Blank. No movement logged.

I asked friends. Neighbors.

No one saw anything. No one heard anything.

I kept the note in a drawer for a week before I finally burned it.

But even after that, the knocking returned — once, two weeks later.

Just once.

Soft. Familiar.

I never opened the door again.

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🧠 The Possibilities

Some nights I wonder if it was just my mind — the product of stress, insomnia, and solitude.

Other nights… I remember the breathing. The paper. The feeling that I was being watched by someone who had always been near… but unseen.

Someone patient.

Someone waiting.

And most haunting of all:

Someone who knew I was finally listening.

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🙌 Final Thoughts

We all hear things in the dark.

Most of us dismiss them.

Ignore them.

Explain them away.

But what if, just once… you shouldn’t?

What if something — or someone — is really trying to reach you?

The night someone knocked softly on my bedroom door changed the way I sleep.

And maybe, if you're reading this at night, you’ll hear it too.

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About the Creator

Noman Afridi

I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.

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