The Midnight Visitor
A Chilling Tale of Secrets and Shadows

The clock struck twelve, and the rain poured relentlessly against the windowpanes. Sarah sat alone in her dimly lit living room, a half-finished cup of tea growing cold in her hands. The storm outside rattled the old house, its creaking floors and groaning pipes making her uneasy.
Thenโ**a knock. **
Three slow, deliberate raps on the front door.
Sarah froze. *In this weather, who would go outside? * She wasnโt expecting anyone. Her heart pounded as she crept toward the door, peering through the peephole.
No one was there.
Just as she let out a shaky breath, the knock came againโ**louder this time. **
๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ญ๐ซ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ซ ๐๐ก๐จ ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐๐ซ๐๐
Against her better judgment, Sarah unlocked the door and pulled it open. The wind howled, sending a chill down her spine. The porch was emptyโฆ except for a single, weathered envelope lying at her feet.
Her name was scrawled across it in jagged handwriting.
Hands trembling, she tore it open. Inside was a single sentence:
**"You shouldnโt have opened the box." **
Her blood ran cold.
A month ago, Sarah had found an antique wooden box in her grandmotherโs attic. It was locked, but curiosity got the better of her. She had pried it openโonly to find old photographs, a rusted key, and a note that read: *"Some doors should never be unlocked." *
She had thought nothing of itโฆ until now.
๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ๐ฉ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ก๐๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ฌ
Sarah slammed the door shut and locked it, her breath coming in short gasps. The lights flickered. A faint whisper slithered through the houseโ**her name**, spoken in a voice that wasnโt human.
*"Sarahโฆ"*
She spun around. The hallway was dark, but she couldโve sworn something moved at the edge of her vision.
Her phone buzzed violently on the table. An unknown number flashed on the screen. She answered, her voice barely a whisper.
*"Hello?" *
A distorted voice hissed back: **"You opened it. Now theyโre coming." **
The line went dead.
๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐๐๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ฎ๐ญ๐ก
Sarahโs mind raced. What had she unleashed? She rushed to the attic, where the box still sat on the dusty floor. But something was differentโ**the lock was back in place. **
What about the key she discovered inside? **Gone. **
A floorboard creaked behind her.
She turned slowly, her pulse roaring in her ears. The shadows in the corner of the room seemed to twist, forming a shapeโ**a figure**, tall and gaunt, with hollow eyes that gleamed in the dark.
It spoke, its voice like nails on glass:
**"You were warned." **
๐๐ก๐ ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฅ ๐๐ก๐จ๐ข๐๐
Sarah stumbled back, knocking over a lantern. The flame caught the old curtains, spreading rapidly. As the figure moved forward, the attic was filled with smoke. She had one chanceโ**the rusted key had to be somewhere. ** She searched by turning over boxes in a desperate attempt. Then she saw itโ**glinting under the moonlight**โjust as the shadowy hand closed around her wrist.
With a scream, she grabbed the key and jammed it into the boxโs lock.
A deafening silence fell.
The flames vanished. The shadows dissolved.
And the boxโฆ **was sealed once more. **
๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ฅ๐จ๐ ๐ฎ๐: ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ง๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐๐ฎ๐๐ฌ๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ
The next morning, Sarah woke on the attic floor, the box beside herโstill locked. Had it all been a nightmare?
But on her wrist, five dark bruises formed a perfect handprint.
And outside her door, a single envelope lay waiting.
This time, it read:
**"Theyโre still watching." **
About the Creator
Shahriar Shihab
Welcome to a world where the line between the living and the dead is thin, houses breathe, and shadows whisper. You've come to the right place if you like stories that get under your skin and stay with you long after you turn the page.




Comments (1)
This story's got me hooked! The build-up of suspense is great. It reminds me of that time I explored an old, abandoned house. Creepy stuff started happening, just like here.