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The Last Train Home

A Journey to the Unknown

By Words by ImenePublished about a year ago 4 min read

The rain poured down in sheets, blurring the streetlights and making everything appear surreal. Alex hurried to the train station, his heart racing. He had just finished a grueling week at work, and all he wanted was to return home to the comfort of his familiar surroundings. As he dashed through the downpour, he spotted the last train of the night pulling into the station.

He made it just in time, jumping onto the empty carriage as the doors closed behind him. The interior was dimly lit, and the air was thick with an unsettling silence. Odd, he thought, for a Friday night. He looked around but saw no other passengers, just rows of empty seats bathed in flickering light.

As the train lurched forward, the rhythmic clatter of the wheels against the tracks began to lull him into a trance. He leaned back, trying to relax, when he heard a faint sound—a whisper, almost inaudible, like someone calling his name. He glanced around but saw no one. Just the empty seats, shadows dancing in the dim light.

Shaking off the feeling of unease, Alex pulled out his phone. No service. The realization sank in like a stone. He was utterly alone. The train sped through dark landscapes, and as the minutes passed, the whispers grew louder, more distinct. They were coming from all directions, weaving in and out of his consciousness.

“Help us… help us…”

His heart raced. “Hello?” he called out, his voice echoing in the hollow space. Silence enveloped him, amplifying the sound of his own heartbeat. A chill ran down his spine. Just as he was about to dismiss it as fatigue, the lights flickered, and the train came to an abrupt halt.

Through the window, he saw fog creeping in from the darkness outside, swirling around the train like a living thing. Fear gripped him, and he considered leaving the carriage, but something held him back—a feeling of foreboding that whispered to him, urging him to stay seated.

Suddenly, the train doors swung open with a creak, revealing an empty platform shrouded in mist. He could barely see a few feet in front of him. A figure emerged from the fog—a woman in a flowing white dress, her face obscured by shadow. She approached slowly, each step deliberate and ghostly.

“Help us…” she pleaded, her voice hauntingly familiar.

Alex felt a strange pull, as if he knew her. He stood up, his legs shaky, and stepped toward her. “Who are you?” he asked, his voice barely a whisper.

The woman lifted her head, and the dim light illuminated her face. It was beautiful yet sorrowful, and her eyes were filled with unshed tears. “I am lost. Like many others,” she replied. “We were taken by the train, just like you. We never made it home.”

Panic surged through him. “What do you mean? What happened to you?”

“You must choose,” she said, her voice growing fainter. “Help us or be consumed by the darkness.”

The train jolted violently, causing Alex to stumble. The lights flickered and died, plunging the carriage into darkness. Heart pounding, he fumbled for his phone, praying for a glimmer of light. Just as he found it, the lights flickered back on, revealing dozens of ghostly figures surrounding him, their eyes hollow and pleading.

“Join us! Don’t leave us behind!” they cried in unison, their voices rising in a haunting chorus.

“No! I can’t—” Alex yelled, his breath quickening. He turned and ran toward the back of the carriage, desperate to escape the clutches of the lost souls. He stumbled and fell, the ghosts closing in, their icy hands grasping at his clothes. He scrambled to his feet, but the figures surrounded him, their faces contorted in anguish.

Just when he thought he would be overwhelmed, a blinding light erupted from the front of the train. The figures recoiled, their wails echoing in the confined space. Alex pushed through the throng, rushing toward the light, heart racing with a mixture of fear and hope.

As he burst through the door at the front of the train, he found himself back on the platform. The train was gone, leaving only silence in its wake. He staggered away from the tracks, his heart pounding in his chest. The fog began to lift, revealing a familiar street—the one leading to his home.

He sprinted toward it, the night air fresh against his face. He felt the weight of the spirits behind him, their cries fading into the distance. As he reached his front door, he paused, glancing back. The platform stood empty, the darkness receding like a bad dream.

Inside, Alex collapsed onto the floor, tears streaming down his cheeks. He was home. But the memory of the lost souls lingered in his mind, their haunting whispers etched into his memory. He vowed never to forget them, to share their story, so they would not be forgotten.

As he lay there, staring at the ceiling, he felt a profound sense of gratitude wash over him. He had escaped the darkness this time, but deep down, he knew that the last train would always be waiting, lurking in the shadows for its next passenger.

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About the Creator

Words by Imene

My journey has shaped my belief that everyone has the power to transform their lives and reach their full potential. Through my writing, I aim to empower my readers to embrace change and cultivate a mindset of success and resilience.

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  • Uzman Aliabout a year ago

    Your storyline is so outstanding.

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