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The Last Message in the Rain – Part 7: Echoes of the Forgotten

A hidden truth resurfaces as the storm rages, pulling Elara deeper into a nightmare she can’t escape.

By Shehzad AnjumPublished 5 months ago 4 min read

The storm hadn't gone. It never truly left. If anything, it had grown fiercer, thrashing against the walls of the house like a beast trying to claw its way inside. Elara stood on the porch, the wind biting at her skin, her heart pounding with a frantic rhythm. She had broken free from the attic. She had faced the darkness, and yet, now it felt like the past was refusing to let go.

Her fingers curled around the last letter she’d received. The paper was soaked, the ink smudged, but the words burned into her mind, even if they blurred in her hands:

"The past never dies, Elara. It waits for you to remember."

For a brief moment, she had believed—she had hoped—that the nightmare was over. But as the storm raged around her, there was no peace to be found. There was only the weight of the truth pressing down on her chest, suffocating her with the knowledge that there was more to uncover. More she had to remember.

Suddenly, a figure appeared at the edge of the yard, silhouetted against the angry rain. Elara’s breath caught in her throat. It wasn’t her father. She knew that now, with clarity she hadn’t had before. But this man—tall, unmoving—was something else, something darker.

His face was hidden in the shadows, his presence a force that seemed to bend the air itself. The hairs on the back of her neck stood up, but Elara didn’t run. She didn’t retreat. Instead, she stepped forward, one foot in front of the other. No more running. No more fear.

"It ends tonight," she whispered to herself, though she didn’t fully believe it.

As she drew closer to him, something strange happened. The world around her seemed to distort. His outline wavered like a mirage in the rain. For a split second, it felt like the very fabric of reality had torn—one moment the world was clear, the next it was swallowed by darkness.

“Elara,” a voice whispered, faint but chilling. She knew that voice. It was the voice that had haunted her since that night—the night of the fire.

"Who are you?" she demanded, her voice barely a murmur, carried away by the wind.

The man didn't speak. Instead, he raised his hand slowly, pointing toward the ground. Elara's gaze followed his gesture, and her heart stopped.

The earth before her cracked open, a yawning abyss spreading beneath her feet. From the blackness below, a pale, trembling hand emerged—long, twisted fingers reaching out.

Then, a face appeared from the shadows—hers.

Elara staggered back, gasping for breath. It was her face, but older, distorted, like a reflection in a cracked mirror. The child's eyes locked onto hers, and in them, Elara saw pain—deep, aching pain—and something more. A pleading.

“Elara…” the figure whispered again, her voice soft but heavy with an unbearable sorrow. "You were never meant to escape. You can never forget."

A scream tore from Elara’s throat as she spun around and ran, but the ground beneath her feet shifted and betrayed her. The earth cracked and buckled, sending her tumbling into the wet grass. Dazed, she scrambled to her feet, but the world around her spun wildly. She couldn’t think, couldn’t breathe. The storm’s fury seemed to grow louder, more intense, and the man in the long coat was closer now, his figure moving with a terrifying, unnatural speed.

His eyes gleamed from beneath the shadow of his hood, burning with the certainty of doom.

"You can’t outrun the past," he rasped, his voice like gravel. "It’s already here."

The words sent a cold shiver down Elara’s spine, but she didn’t stop. She couldn’t. Not now. Not when she was so close to the truth.

But the world around her was changing. The rain wasn’t just falling anymore—it was a flood, consuming everything in its path. The trees twisted into grotesque shapes, their branches clawing toward her like skeletal hands. The ground cracked open in jagged lines, the earth pulling at her, trying to drag her down.

The world was falling apart, and Elara had no choice but to keep moving, her mind racing. She had to find the truth. The missing pieces. The final answer that had eluded her for so long. The letters, the dreams, the shadows—they all pointed to this moment. But what was she meant to remember? And why had she been spared from the fire?

Then, the ground gave way beneath her.

She fell into darkness.

When Elara opened her eyes, she was no longer outside. The storm was gone. The deafening rain, the wild wind, all of it had disappeared. In its place was a cold silence, a stillness that felt wrong in its very nature. She was in a dimly lit room, its walls covered in photographs—faded, torn images of a family. A family she knew well. But the faces were distorted, blurred by shadows, as if trying to hide from the truth.

In the center of the room stood a mirror. The glass was cracked, streaked with grime, and when Elara gazed into it, her own reflection stared back at her. But it wasn’t a clear reflection. Her face was contorted with fear, her eyes wide, full of confusion. And then, as if summoned by her terror, a figure appeared behind her, shifting like smoke.

“Do you remember?” the figure whispered, its voice like a distant echo in her mind.

Elara’s breath caught in her throat. “No,” she gasped, her voice trembling. “I don’t.”

The figure drew closer, its form becoming clearer. A twisted version of her own face looked back at her, grinning, its eyes hollow and dark.

“You never left,” the figure said, its voice taunting, cruel. “You were always here, hiding in the shadows. And now, you must choose.”

Elara's heart pounded in her chest. The room seemed to close in on her, the walls pressing in with every word.

The choice was hers.

The storm raged on, louder now than ever, but within the room, the new darkness had taken hold, thick and suffocating. There was no escape this time.

To be continued...

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Shehzad Anjum

I’m Shehzad Khan, a proud Pashtun 🏔️, living with faith and purpose 🌙. Guided by the Qur'an & Sunnah 📖, I share stories that inspire ✨, uplift 🔥, and spread positivity 🌱. Join me on this meaningful journey 👣

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