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The Last Message

The Last Message

By Abuzar SiddiquiPublished 5 months ago 3 min read
The Last Message
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The Last Message


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🕯️ Introduction

The first time Ravi’s phone buzzed that night, he thought it was a dream. His small apartment was silent, and the world outside was asleep. It was 2:17 AM when the glow of the screen finally caught his eye.

A single text stared back at him:

> “Help me…”



The message was from Neha, his ex-fiancée. His heart skipped a beat.

But how could this be?
They had broken up six months ago. She had blocked him everywhere, and they hadn’t spoken since their bitter fight. Ravi blinked, rubbed his eyes, and checked again. The message was real.


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📍 The Location

He immediately dialed her number. The phone rang endlessly, no answer. He tried again. Nothing. Panic started to set in. Then he noticed something strange—the message had a location pin attached.

It pointed to an unfamiliar place:

> “Moonlight Inn – Closed for Renovation.”



Ravi’s mind raced. Why would Neha be at an abandoned hotel in the middle of the night?

Without thinking twice, he grabbed his jacket, his bike keys, and raced into the empty streets.


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🏚️ The Hotel

The Moonlight Inn was a forgotten skeleton of a building. Its cracked windows reflected the faint glow of a flickering streetlamp. The sign creaked as the cold night breeze blew.

Ravi parked his bike outside, his heart pounding.
Each step toward the hotel made him feel like he was walking into a nightmare.

The lobby was silent. Dust floated in the air like ash, and old furniture was draped in torn white sheets.
Then he saw it—a soft glow from a hallway.


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🚪 The Room

Ravi followed the light until he reached a wooden door. His breath caught in his throat.

Carved into the door was a single word:

> “Neha.”



His hands trembled as he turned the rusty doorknob. The room was dimly lit by candles placed in a circle. On the floor, a phone glowed—Neha’s phone.

The screen displayed a chilling message:

> “You shouldn’t have come here.”



Ravi froze. His instincts screamed at him to run, but something held him in place. He whispered her name softly, “Neha…?”


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👤 The Whisper

A soft creak echoed behind him.

“It’s too late now…” a voice whispered.

Ravi spun around. The hallway behind him was pitch black. The door slammed shut, plunging him into darkness. The candles flickered violently.

He grabbed the phone from the floor, his hands shaking. Another message appeared on the screen.

> “RUN.”



His pulse quickened. He turned the doorknob, but it wouldn’t budge. The whispers grew louder, circling him.


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💡 The Escape

Suddenly, a loud bang came from the hallway, and the lights flickered back on for just a second. In that moment, Ravi saw something—a shadowy figure standing at the end of the hallway, staring at him.

Adrenaline kicked in. He kicked the door open with all his strength and bolted out of the room. His feet pounded the wooden floor as the figure followed silently, only a few feet behind.

Ravi didn’t dare look back. He ran through the hotel lobby, out the front door, and leapt onto his bike. The roar of the engine broke the silence as he sped away.


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📱 The Final Message

When he reached home, Ravi locked the door behind him, gasping for air. He checked Neha’s phone, which he had grabbed in the chaos.

The phone was dead—no battery left. He plugged it in, desperate for answers. When it finally powered on, his blood ran cold.

The last text wasn’t from Neha.
It was sent from his own number.


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🌙 Epilogue

To this day, Ravi swears he never sent that message. No one knows what happened at the Moonlight Inn, or who—or what—was in that hallway.

But sometimes, when his phone buzzes in the middle of the night, he’s too afraid to look.


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📌 This story was created with the assistance of AI.

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About the Creator

Abuzar Siddiqui

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