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"The Last Knock"

Every knock brings death closer"

By JanalamPublished 5 months ago 2 min read
Ali via the empty streets. He clutched his coat tighter and glanced at his phone — 11:fifty three PM. The streetlights flickered, casting strange styles at the cracked avenue. His home was simplest ten minutes away, but this night, the silence felt heavier. As he walked past an antique, abandoned house, he heard it — a faint knock. Not from in the residence… but from somewhere deep below it. He iced up. The windows were boarded up, and the rusted gate turned into chained shut. Yet, the sound got here again, this time louder: Knock… knock… knock. Ali swallowed hard and informed himself to preserve shifting. However then he heard a soft voice. “Please… assist me.” The voice became desperate, trembling, nearly childlike. Against his better judgment, he stepped toward the gate. The air grew colder, his breath turning to mist. He may want to see nothing inside, most effective darkness. “Who’s there?” he referred to as out. For a moment, silence. Then… “i will’t get out… they locked me here… please, open the door.” The chains at the gate rattled as though some thing inner turned into pulling them. His instincts screamed at him to run, yet his ft stayed rooted. He reached for the lock — however the metallic changed into ice-cold, burning his skin. He jerked his hand returned. All at once, the voice changed. “Come nearer…” It become now not trembling or childlike. It changed into deep. And hungry. Ali stumbled backward. The darkness inner appeared to move, swirling like smoke. Two pale, sparkling eyes opened inside the void. “nearer.” Before Ali should react, the gate burst open with a pressure that threw him to the ground. A shadow-like determine crawled out, its limbs too long, joints bending in unnatural angles. Its head tilted because it sniffed the air. “I’ve been looking forward to you…” Ali scrambled to his toes and ran. The sound of claws scraping the road accompanied him. His lungs burned, his imaginative and prescient blurred, however he dared not appearance again. His apartment building got here into view, lighting sparkling like a promise of protection. He slammed the door close at the back of him and pressed his again to it, panting. No sound. No claws. Maybe he had lost it. He laughed nervously and became toward the reflect in his hallway. That’s whilst he noticed it. The thing become internal. It stood right behind him, its lengthy hands soaring inches from his neck. In the mirrored image, it smiled. “domestic at final.” The

Ali stepped off the last bus of the night, the chilly wind whispering through the empty streets. He clutched his coat tighter and glanced at his phone — 11:53 PM. The streetlights flickered, casting strange patterns on the cracked road. His home was only ten minutes away, but tonight, the silence felt heavier.

As he walked past an old, abandoned house, he heard it — a faint knock. Not from inside the house… but from somewhere deep beneath it. He froze. The windows were boarded up, and the rusted gate was chained shut. Yet, the sound came again, this time louder: Knock… knock… knock.

Ali swallowed hard and told himself to keep moving. But then he heard a soft voice.

“Please… help me.”

The voice was desperate, trembling, almost childlike. Against his better judgment, he stepped closer to the gate. The air grew colder, his breath turning to mist. He could see nothing inside, only darkness.

“Who’s there?” he called out.

For a moment, silence. Then…

“I can’t get out… they locked me here… please, open the door.”

The chains on the gate rattled as if something inside was pulling them. His instincts screamed at him to run, yet his feet stayed rooted. He reached for the lock — but the metal was ice-cold, burning his skin. He jerked his hand back.

Suddenly, the voice changed.

“Come closer…”

It was no longer trembling or childlike. It was deep. And hungry.

Ali stumbled backward. The darkness inside seemed to move, swirling like smoke. Two pale, glowing eyes opened in the void.

“Closer.”

Before Ali could react, the gate burst open with a force that threw him to the ground. A shadow-like figure crawled out, its limbs too long, joints bending in unnatural angles. Its head tilted as it sniffed the air.

“I’ve been waiting for you…”

Ali scrambled to his feet and ran. The sound of claws scraping the road followed him. His lungs burned, his vision blurred, but he dared not look back.

His apartment building came into view, lights glowing like a promise of safety. He slammed the door shut behind him and pressed his back to it, panting. No sound. No claws. Maybe he had lost it.

He laughed nervously and turned toward the mirror in his hallway. That’s when he saw it.

The thing was inside.

It stood right behind him, its long fingers hovering inches from his neck.

In the reflection, it smiled.

“Home at last.”

The lights went out.

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About the Creator

Janalam

Start writing...Hey! I’m Jan Alam 😎✍️

I write all kinds of stories — sci-fi 🚀, romance 💖, or something totally weird and new!

Obsessed with pop culture 🎬🎶📚 and always busy creating something fresh ✨🔥

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