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The Jinn Who Waited by the Grave

A grandson kept returning to a grave… unaware of the promise a jinn had made to his grandfather long ago.

By Noman AfridiPublished 8 months ago 4 min read
Some guardians are not human, and some legacies are not of this world.

Zayd and Naqeel: The Promise of Love

Zayd had never missed a Thursday. Since the day his grandfather passed away, he had made it his ritual to visit the grave every week. He would carry a small bottle of rosewater, a Quran, and a heart full of quiet longing. That grave beneath the ancient tree had become his sanctuary — a hidden corner where time seemed to pause and memories whispered softly in the breeze.

But peace, as Zayd was about to learn, is not always what it seems.

One Thursday afternoon, as the sun bled golden across the sky, Zayd arrived earlier than usual. The graveyard was silent except for the soft rustling of the dry leaves. He sat beside the grave and began reciting Surah Yasin. His voice trembled slightly, though he didn’t understand why. The wind was gentle, yet it carried an unusual chill that sent a shiver down his spine.

He suddenly felt... watched.

He brushed the feeling aside as mere imagination and continued his recitation, but the strange sensation lingered. The following week, the feeling returned, stronger this time. The week after that, it grew even more intense. Each Thursday, it was as if unseen eyes followed his every move.

Then came the dream.

In the depths of night, Zayd saw a tall figure cloaked in swirling blue smoke standing beside his grandfather’s grave. Its eyes glowed softly, not with menace, but with a deep sorrow.

“You are not alone here,” the jinn whispered in the dream, “and you never were.”

Zayd awoke with a start, trembling. The fear wasn’t of the figure itself — there was no fear, only confusion. He chose to tell no one.

That very night, long after Maghrib prayer, he made his way back to the graveyard alone. The moonlight draped the land in a silver glow, casting eerie shadows between the tombstones. As he neared the ancient tree, he heard a faint rustling behind it.

“Zayd,” came a soft voice.

He turned and saw him.

Not a monster. Not a demon.

A tall, cloaked figure shimmering faintly like heat rising off the desert sand. Its presence was powerful yet calm — commanding yet kind.

“I have waited long enough,” the figure said. “Your grandfather promised you would come.”

“Who? My grandfather?” Zayd’s heart pounded as he stepped back.

The jinn nodded slowly.

“Fifty years ago, your grandfather found me wounded at the edge of the old woods. He cared for me in secret, nursing my wounds and hiding me from those who would harm me. In return, I vowed to protect him and one of his descendants — whoever first sat beside this grave with the same love and devotion.”

Zayd’s breath caught. “But why me?”

“Because you didn’t come out of duty,” the jinn replied. “You came out of love. And love... fulfills promises.”

Zayd’s knees weakened, and he sank to the ground.

The jinn continued, “There is danger around you, though you do not know it yet. Darker beings are stirring, shadows that seek to harm. You will need help. I am here for that.”

In disbelief, Zayd whispered, “What exactly are you?”

“I am called Naqeel,” the jinn said softly. “And I serve those who honor the dead.”

From that day forward, subtle changes crept into Zayd’s life. The shadows that once lurked behind his house vanished as if chased away by an unseen light. Nightmares that haunted his sleep stopped altogether. He began to sense things before they happened — whispers of coming events, the faintest stirrings of danger. Where once he had been quiet and unsure, now he spoke with a strange wisdom that surprised even himself.

Yet, he never spoke of Naqeel to anyone. The secret remained locked deep within his heart.

Years passed, and Zayd grew old and frail. One night, many years later, he sat once again beside the same grave beneath the ancient tree. His voice barely a whisper, he called out, “Naqeel... are you still here?”

The wind answered with a soft hum.

“I am always near,” came the voice behind him.

Zayd smiled faintly, closing his eyes.

In his final dream, he stood beside his grandfather and Naqeel, who was tall and radiant, bowed in greeting.


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When Zayd’s family laid him to rest next to his grandfather, his youngest grandson, barely six years old, began insisting on visiting the grave every Thursday. No one understood why. But beneath the old tree, watching silently, stood a jinn — still bound by love, still guarding the promise.


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The Hidden Depths of Love and Protection

Zayd’s life had always been humble, filled with the simple joys and struggles of daily living. But his heart held a secret bond — an unspoken love for his grandfather, who had been his guide, protector, and storyteller. The stories his grandfather told of ancient times, wisdom, and kindness had shaped Zayd’s world.

After his grandfather’s passing, Zayd’s visits to the grave were not just acts of remembrance but a way to keep that connection alive. The bottle of rosewater was more than a fragrance; it was a symbol of purity and love. The Quran he carried was a shield, and the quiet longing in his heart was a bridge between worlds.

Meeting Naqeel revealed to Zayd a world beyond human understanding — a realm where promises are sacred, where love can bind beings across time, and where protection comes in unseen forms. Naqeel was not just a guardian spirit; he was a witness to the bond between Zayd’s family and the unseen forces of the world.

The promise made decades ago between Zayd’s grandfather and Naqeel was a pact forged in kindness and trust, reminding us all that honoring those who have passed is more than ritual — it is a sacred duty that commands respect from even the supernatural.


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Legacy and the Unseen Watchers

The story of Zayd and Naqeel is not merely about one man’s love for his grandfather. It is a timeless tale about how love, loyalty, and honor transcend death. It tells us that some promises are eternal, that protection can come from the most unexpected places, and that the spirits of those who have gone before us sometimes remain close, watching over those they left behind.

And perhaps, when a child insists on visiting a grave every week without explanation, it is because some unseen guardian is quietly waiting — a silent protector bound by a promise of love.

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About the Creator

Noman Afridi

I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.

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