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🩸 THE HOUSE THAT WHISPERS

Part 1 — The Arrival)

By Corey foxPublished 2 months ago • 1 min read

The first time Mara saw the house, it was almost dusk.
A slow, blue kind of dusk that made everything look older than it was.

The realtor had called it a “historic fixer-upper with character.” What Mara saw was a crumbling Victorian crouched at the end of a dirt road, half-swallowed by trees. The windows were dark, like eyes that had forgotten how to blink.

Still, the price was right. After her mother’s death, Mara needed distance from the city — from the sympathy, from the noise. The house was supposed to be her escape.

But even on that first day, it felt more like the house was waiting.


Inside, the air was heavy with the scent of dust and iron. Floorboards creaked under every cautious step. The realtor’s heels clicked briskly as she walked through the hall, her voice unnaturally bright.

“Original woodwork! See those hand-carved banisters? Oh, and the previous owner left a few pieces of furniture — authentic, 19th century!”

Mara barely listened. Her attention snagged on the whisper.

It was faint — just a breath at the edge of hearing. Like someone sighing behind the walls.

She turned, pulse quickening. “Did you hear that?

The realtor smiled, oblivious. “Old houses make sounds. They settle.”

But the sound came again — this time clearer. It wasn’t the house settling. It was a voice. Low. Urgent.

> “Don’t… let it in.

That night, after signing the papers, Mara unpacked a few boxes and tried to convince herself it was all nerves. The grief, the isolation — her mind was making ghosts out of echoes.

The wind whined through the cracks in the windows. Somewhere in the attic, something shifted.

She told herself she’d check it tomorrow.
She didn’t sleep.

At 2:47 a.m., the whisper returned.

Right beside her ear.

> Mara…


( Read part 2 the door in the wall )

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