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The Hollow Room

int. Old Farmhouse - Rain lashes against the windows at night. The squealing farmers are quiet, except for the wind through the cracks. Three families are soaked and tense:

By Santo HalderPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

int. Old Farmhouse -

Rain lashes against the windows at night. The squealing farmers are quiet, except for the wind through the cracks. Three families are soaked and tense:

Sarah (32) - exhausted and overly cautious.

Mark (36) - Skeptical but supportive.

Lucy (8) - calm, sensitive, holding a rabbit in tattered fabric.

Gaze at the door at the edge of the hall. Looks younger than the rest of the house, smooth wood, silver handles. No lock.

Sarah

(to Mark, Whisper)

wasn't here yet. i swear.

Mark It's been an empty house for 20 years. Things get weird as you get older.

Lucy This room is hollow. The

mark is looking at it.

Mark

What does it mean, honey?

Lucy

Hearing his breath.

int. Cavity - Later

The

door creaks. Inside: Perfect square space. Bare wooden wall. There are no windows. The air appears to be turning into the corner as if the room was wrong.

Sarah slowly develops. Your flashlight flickers.

Flashlight POV:

beam cuts out any dust. The room is empty.

Next, flickering. The shadows look on the floor and appear outside the light.

Sarahtaan - Nothing.

She quickly turns out and hits the door.

int. Kitchen - Midnight

Sarah desperately doodles in her notebook. She draws the house. The same card is used over and over again. The cavity moves in all versions. Sometimes it's from the hallway. Sometimes it's behind the attic. Once - it is underground.

Mark: You are surprised by Lucy. In hell, you scare me.

Sarah

Changes in the family. This room should not exist. Mark approach.

Mark

Maybe it's an unfinished room. Like storage space.

Sarah

Why is it moving?

I hear something. A soft, sturdy hit that will help your body fall.

Mark

Lucy?

int. Lucy's Bedroom -

They exploded. Lucy sits on her bed and stares at the wall. Her rabbit is on the floor, his eyes torn apart.

Sarah

Honey? What happened? Lucy, I wanted my eyes. The

mark is below the knee.

Mark: What are there? Lucy appears on the wall.

Lucy

Hollow man.

int. Living Room - After

Sarah, baby monitor will be played on mobile phone. Static, silent... And - a weak voice. "Lucy... Open the door... Let me in... I'm cold... I also lived here..."

She drops the phone. Silver grip. No lock.

Mark

Never. This door wasn't here.

Sarah, it moves. I told you. The

mark gets a clover.

Mark. Then we tear. He is wedge, praise it -

Screech! The door opens and both stagger.

The underground light explodes.

For a moment in the darkness - you can see it at the door.

High. Hohle's eyes. There is no face.

You bump into the door.

int. Living Room - Night

Sarah desperately spins the pile of newspaper clippings.

You notice:

"Families disappear in country houses. There are no signs of battle. Only empty rooms remain."

"Three are missing after renovation. Never on the blueprint. "

Sarah Sircles a set:

" The room was not there until it wanted. "

int.

Your reflections do not move.

int. Bedroom - Later

The

mark sleeps calmly.

Sarah stands in the mirror and whispers.

Your reflection smiles. She doesn't.

int. Cavity - Dream Sequence: Sarah is back in her room. However, this time, it stretches infinitely. Each corridor has the same door.

Whisper.

It opens one - her own face is inside and writes.

She wakes up and snaps for the air.

int. Kitchen -

Days

Sarah found a painting of Lucy. The photo shows a red XS house with the family. Sarah is approaching.

The

figure does not have a face.

Sarah

Lucy, what is that?

Lucy

He tries to become us. One at a time.

int. Night - Closing Conflict: Sarah and Mark decide to burn the room. The mark will ring it with kerosene. Lucy looks out the stairs and holds her rabbit.

Mark: If we burn it, we might catch it. Sarah lights up the match.

The

door opens on its own.

wind roars.

Interior: Shadow shadows, twisted with unnatural corners.

Whisper:

"You invited me. You did me."

The flame rises - but the fire does not exceed the threshold.

The

mark is dragged over and screams.

Sarah

No!!

She reaches into his hand, but the shadow pulls harder.

The

mark will disappear.

int. Still, Sarah is alone. The room is gone.

Empty walls only.

Lucy goes next to her.

Lucy

He is not dead. Only the hollow.

Sara looks down. Lucy's eyes are...empty.

int. Living Room - Final Shot: New family in it. The boxes are everywhere.

Children go along the hallway.

Stop by the new door.

He presses his ears onto it.

Silence. Next...

"Let me in... I lived here too..."

Blackscreen.

Text on screen:

Cavity

halloween

About the Creator

Santo Halder

Script writer specializing in impactful storytelling for websites and profiles. I help you turn words into a powerful first impression—clear, compelling, and built to connect.

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin9 months ago

    This was such an engaging read! I really appreciated the way you presented your thoughts—clear, honest, and thought-provoking. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

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