The Forgotten Portrait
Memories Fade, but Some Secrets Remain

Sophie had always been fascinated by her grandmother's old house. It was a sprawling, creaky mansion filled with dusty furniture, forgotten trinkets, and rooms that hadn’t been opened in years. Every summer, as a child, she would explore the place, inventing stories about the mysterious objects she found, imagining the lives of the people who once lived there.
Now, as an adult, the house felt different. Her grandmother had passed away, and it was up to Sophie to sort through the countless items left behind. The task was daunting, but she welcomed the opportunity to revisit the memories of her childhood.
One rainy afternoon, Sophie found herself in the attic—a place she had rarely ventured. The air was thick with dust, and the only light came from a single, grimy window. She carefully navigated the maze of boxes and old furniture, searching for anything of sentimental value.
That’s when she found it.
Tucked away in a corner, covered by a heavy, moth-eaten cloth, was a large, ornate portrait. The frame was gilded, though tarnished with age, and the canvas had darkened over time. As Sophie pulled the cloth away and gasped.
The portrait was of a woman, dressed in an elegant, flowing gown. Her face was striking, with sharp features and piercing eyes that seemed to stare right through Sophie. But what took her breath away was the uncanny resemblance—the woman in the portrait looked almost exactly like her.
A shiver ran down Sophie’s spine as she continued to stare at the painting. Who was this woman? Why had her grandmother kept this hidden away in the attic? And why had no one ever mentioned her before?
Determined to uncover the mystery, Sophie took the portrait downstairs and began searching through old family records. She spent hours sifting through documents, letters, and photographs, but found nothing about the woman in the portrait. It was as if she had been erased from the family’s history.
That night, as Sophie lay in bed, the woman’s face lingered in her mind. She felt a strange connection to her, as if the portrait was calling to her, demanding to be remembered. Sleep eluded her as she replayed the image over and over, trying to recall any detail that might help her understand who the woman was.
The next morning, Sophie was awakened by a strange sensation—a dream that felt more like a memory. In the dream, she was standing in front of a mirror, wearing the same gown as the woman in the portrait. Her hands trembled as she adjusted a necklace around her neck, the cold metal sending a chill through her body.
The dream left Sophie feeling unsettled, but she brushed it off as a product of her overactive imagination. But as the days passed, the dreams became more frequent, more vivid. She found herself walking through unfamiliar rooms, hearing voices she didn’t recognize, and feeling emotions that weren’t her own.
The more she tried to ignore the dreams, the stronger they became. Soon, Sophie began to lose track of time, unsure whether she was awake or still dreaming. The line between her own memories and those of the woman in the portrait blurred, and she found herself unable to distinguish between the two.
In her waking hours, Sophie became consumed with the portrait. She would sit for hours, staring at it, trying to piece together the fragments of memories that weren’t hers. The woman’s eyes seemed to follow her wherever she went, and Sophie couldn’t shake the feeling that she was being watched.
One evening, Sophie decided to confront her mother, hoping she might have some answers. She brought the portrait with her, placing it on the dining table as they sat down to talk.
“Do you know who this is?” Sophie asked, her voice trembling.
Her mother’s face paled as she looked at the painting, her eyes widening in shock. “Where did you find this?” she whispered.
“In the attic. Who is she?”
Her mother hesitated, her hands shaking as she reached for the portrait. “This… this is your great-grandmother, Aisha. She was… troubled.”
“Troubled?” Sophie echoed, confused. “What do you mean?”
Her mother took a deep breath, as if steeling herself to reveal a long-buried secret. “Aisha was obsessed with the idea of immortality—of preserving her soul. She believed that by having her portrait painted, she could trap a part of herself in the canvas. But as the years passed, she became convinced that the portrait had stolen her soul, that it was holding her captive.”
Sophie felt a chill run down her spine as her mother continued.
“She began to change. She claimed she could see through the eyes of the portrait, that it was showing her things—visions of the future, of her descendants. Eventually, she lost her mind. They say she died clutching the portrait, refusing to let it go.”
Sophie stared at the painting, her heart pounding in her chest. The resemblance, the dreams, the strange memories—they all made sense now. “What happened to her?”
“She was buried without the portrait,” her mother said, her voice barely above a whisper. “But some say her spirit still lingers, trapped in the canvas, waiting for someone to free her.”
That night, Sophie couldn’t sleep. The house seemed to hum with an unseen energy, and the portrait’s presence was suffocating. She felt a strange compulsion, a pull she couldn’t resist.
In the early hours of the morning, Sophie found herself standing in front of the portrait once more. The woman’s eyes seemed to burn with intensity, and for a moment, Sophie thought she saw the corners of her mouth twitch, as if trying to speak.
Without thinking, Sophie reached out and touched the portrait. The moment her fingers brushed the canvas, a jolt of electricity shot through her, and the room spun around her. She was no longer in her grandmother’s house. She was standing in front of a mirror, wearing a flowing gown, her hands trembling as she adjusted a necklace around her neck.
The reflection in the mirror was not her own. It was Aisha.
As the realization hit her, Sophie tried to pull away, but it was too late. The connection had been made, and she could feel Aisha’s presence—strong, overwhelming, and desperate.
In a final, frantic attempt to break free, Sophie tore the portrait from the wall and hurled it into the fireplace. Flames licked at the edges of the canvas, consuming the image of the woman who had haunted her.
But as the portrait burned, Sophie felt a searing pain in her chest, as if her very soul was being ripped apart. She collapsed to the floor, gasping for breath, her vision fading as the fire consumed the last remnants of the painting.
When she awoke, Sophie was lying on the floor, the room filled with the smell of smoke and ash. The portrait was gone, reduced to nothing but a pile of charred remains.
But as she looked around, she felt a strange sense of emptiness, as if a part of her was missing—gone forever. And in the silence that followed, she knew that she had not destroyed the portrait.
She had become it.


Comments (1)
Very nicely paced for the nature of the story, there was a shocking revelation that I didn’t see coming. A great genre to write in to show off your poetic descriptions.