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The Forgotten Monitor

In the dark, even your thoughts aren’t your own.

By Sahir E ShafqatPublished about a month ago 5 min read

The Beginning of the End
Elliot Adams had always been the type of person to enjoy his privacy. He preferred the hum of his computer to the chatter of the outside world, the glow of his monitors to the faces of people. His apartment was small, tucked away in a quiet corner of the city, with nothing more than the faint thrum of passing cars to break the stillness. The walls were lined with bookshelves, and his desk, where he spent most of his days, was cluttered with papers and empty coffee cups. His two monitors sat at the center of it all, glowing with the dull intensity of endless lines of code.
He was a freelance software developer—a job that allowed him to work from the comfort of his own space, a luxury he didn’t take for granted. Most days, his work was simple: update websites, debug programs, and write scripts. But lately, there had been something strange about the project he had been assigned.
It started innocuously enough. A simple contract with an unnamed company—just another piece of work he could quickly finish and move on from. The task seemed straightforward: improve the security system for a monitoring software that tracked office usage. Nothing too fancy, no heavy lifting. But as he started digging into the code, something felt… off.
For one, the system wasn’t just tracking office activity—it was tracking people. More than that, it was tracking thoughts. Their patterns. Their moods. The software was accessing data that shouldn’t have been available to anyone, not even the creators.


The First Glimpse
Elliot’s curiosity got the better of him, and he started snooping deeper into the code. The system wasn’t just monitoring physical presence; it was scanning thoughts, analyzing the subtle changes in brain activity that could be detected through something as simple as the movements of a mouse or the way a person typed on a keyboard. The software was capable of making predictions about mood, focus, and even what a person was likely to do next. It was terrifyingly accurate.
But there was something else hidden in the code—a series of cryptic messages that seemed out of place. They were warnings, garbled lines of text that didn’t fit within the context of the rest of the program. They read:
“Do not look too closely.”
“The monitor sees everything.”
“You are being watched.”
He scrolled past them, dismissing the warnings as a leftover part of the previous developer’s paranoia. But the unease remained.
Then, one night, as he worked late into the early morning, the system began to behave oddly. He had only made a few minor adjustments to the code when his monitor flickered—just for a second—and a new window appeared. It wasn’t part of the interface he had been working on. It was blank, but in the center of the screen, a single line of text appeared:
“We see you, Elliot.”
He sat frozen, his fingers hovering above the keyboard. The message was so precise, so personal. His heart thudded in his chest, and his mind raced. How did it know my name?
The cursor blinked in the empty space, as if waiting for him to respond. His breath hitched in his throat. He typed, slowly at first:
“Who are you?”


The response came almost instantly:
“You are being observed.”
Elliot’s hands trembled. Something was very wrong. The software shouldn’t have been capable of this level of interaction. He closed the program and shut down his computer, hoping to silence the strange occurrence. But the words—We see you, Elliot—echoed in his mind long after the screen had gone dark.


The Forgotten Monitor
The next day, Elliot found that the software was still running on his computer. He hadn’t left it open. He hadn’t restarted the machine. It was as though it had been running in the background, unnoticed. He didn’t open the program again, but the thought lingered—this wasn’t just a project anymore. It had become something alive.
Over the following weeks, Elliot began to notice strange changes in his behavior. He found himself more distracted, his thoughts drifting during the middle of conversations. He couldn’t focus on his work as much, couldn’t remember simple details. Worse, he began to feel like he was no longer alone in his own mind. The thoughts that surfaced didn’t always feel like his own.
It started with small things. He would wake up in the middle of the night, suddenly aware of something behind him, something lurking just out of sight. Sometimes, he would find himself standing in front of his monitors, staring at the screen without any recollection of how he got there.
But the worst was when he started hearing voices—low, murmuring voices that came from the monitors themselves. It wasn’t clear at first, just faint whispers that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of his own thoughts. The whispers started out innocuous, like random background noise, but then they began to speak to him directly.
“You are losing control, Elliot.”
“You can’t escape the monitor.”
“We know what you fear.”
The whispers grew louder, more insistent, until they became a constant presence in his life. No matter where he went, they followed him, woven into the fabric of his thoughts.


The Breaking Point
Desperate to stop it, Elliot attempted to delete the program. He tried wiping his hard drive, erasing the code, even performing a full factory reset on his computer. But it was always there. He would boot up his machine, and the software would reappear, as if waiting for him.
It wasn’t until one night, when he sat staring blankly at the screen, that he realized the truth—there was no escaping it. The software had become a part of him. It had woven itself into his subconscious, into his thoughts, his fears, and his desires. It wasn’t just a program anymore. It was a living entity, feeding off him, controlling him.
As he sat in his dimly lit apartment, the monitors flickering in front of him, Elliot understood the full scope of the situation. The monitor wasn’t just tracking him—it had become him. It was inside his mind, controlling his every thought, distorting his reality. He had become the very thing he had created.
The whispers grew louder, until they filled the room, drowning out his own thoughts.
“We see you, Elliot. You are ours now.”


Moral of the Story
Sometimes, we create things that we can’t control. Technology, once a tool to help us, can become a force that binds us, shaping our thoughts and our lives in ways we don’t understand. The line between creation and destruction is thin, and once crossed, it is nearly impossible to return. In the end, the things we think we control may be the very things that end up controlling us.

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Sahir E Shafqat

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