The Forgotten Manor
An abandoned estate hides the darkest of secrets, and some mysteries are meant to stay buried.
Deep in the heart of the fog-covered woods, beyond the reach of curious eyes and busy towns, stood an old manor. Its towering silhouette loomed over the trees, a dark monolith against the overcast sky. The manor had been abandoned for decades, its name lost to time. Few people remembered it ever existing, but even fewer dared to speak of it. The whispers of the estate’s dark past had been buried along with the crumbling stone walls, and the last few to leave had vanished without a trace.
Mason, a young and ambitious urban explorer, had heard the stories—the ones told by the elders in the town. They spoke of strange happenings, lights flickering in the windows at night, and of those who’d gone missing after spending too long near the manor. But Mason, never one to believe in ghost stories or rumors, saw only opportunity.
It would be the perfect adventure—an opportunity to uncover the truth and share his discovery with the world. The manor was waiting, its decaying walls begging for someone to discover them. And Mason, with his camera and curiosity, was ready to be the one to uncover its mysteries.
He wasn’t alone in this venture. His childhood friends, Clara, Jonah, and Lisa, accompanied him. They had all grown up together, sharing stories of horror films, unsolved mysteries, and forgotten places. Each of them had their own reasons for coming to the manor, but they shared the same thrilling sense of excitement. The manor was something they’d heard of, dreamed of, but never thought they’d actually see.
The drive was long, the trees thick with mist, and the road nearly impassable. But as they reached the gates of the manor, a sense of foreboding took over. The rusted iron gates creaked open, as if they had been waiting for them. The manor stood silent, the faintest traces of life in its overgrown garden. Mason led the way, pulling his friends forward as the sound of their footsteps was swallowed by the heavy fog.
The front door of the manor stood slightly ajar. Inside, the house was a labyrinth of dark corridors and dusty rooms. The furniture had long been covered in sheets, and the air was thick with the musty smell of age and neglect. But as Mason and his friends explored deeper, the atmosphere shifted. The quiet, oppressive stillness of the house gave way to something else—something darker.
In the drawing room, they discovered the first sign that they weren’t the first to explore the manor. Old, yellowed photographs littered the floor, some of them torn in half, others burned at the edges. As Clara bent down to examine them, she saw something that made her blood run cold—a photograph of the manor’s previous inhabitants, standing proudly in front of the very door they had just entered. But one face, partially obscured by shadows, sent a chill down her spine. It looked eerily familiar. She couldn’t place it at first, but the longer she stared, the more she realized that it looked like… her.
Jonah, who had been standing nearby, noticed her unease. “What is it?” he asked.
Clara turned the photo towards him. “Look,” she whispered, pointing to the figure in the background.
Jonah’s expression faltered as he recognized the face too. “That... that’s not possible,” he muttered, his voice shaky. “That person… that’s you, Clara.”
Clara’s heart pounded in her chest. Her breath came in ragged gasps. “I don’t understand… This photo… it can’t be me. I wasn’t even born when this was taken.”
Suddenly, a loud crash echoed through the manor, causing the group to jump in terror. Mason, who had been exploring deeper into the house, appeared in the doorway. “Guys, you need to see this,” he called, his voice strained.
They hurried towards him, and as they turned the corner into the dark hallway, they saw what had frightened Mason so. A large, ornate mirror stood at the end of the corridor. It was cracked, the glass jagged, but the reflection in the mirror wasn’t right. It showed the room, but there was something off about it—something that shouldn’t have been there.
For a moment, Mason could have sworn he saw figures moving behind them, shadows that weren’t there when he looked away from the glass. But it wasn’t just that. The reflection of the room was older, more decayed, and… it was full of people.
A family, sitting around a dinner table. The same family from the photograph. But they looked different—disheveled, with hollow eyes that seemed to stare straight through them. The figures in the mirror didn’t blink. They didn’t move. They just stared, frozen in time, until one of them finally broke the silence.
“Leave… before it’s too late.”
The voice was low, a soft rasp that came from nowhere and everywhere all at once.
“Did you hear that?” Jonah gasped, his eyes wide with terror.
Mason, who had been transfixed by the mirror, took a step back. “We need to go. Now.”
But as they turned to leave, the door they had entered through slammed shut with a deafening crash. The room seemed to darken, the temperature dropping so rapidly that they could see their breath in the air.
Suddenly, the whispers began.
At first, they were faint, barely audible, like the sound of wind through the cracks in the walls. But then they grew louder, more distinct. The words they heard were not their own thoughts, but the voices of the long-dead inhabitants of the manor.
“You shouldn’t have come.”
“You belong here now.”
“We were forgotten, but you won’t be.”
The walls seemed to close in on them, the shadows growing thicker, more solid. Clara tried the door, but it wouldn’t budge. Panic set in. They were trapped, surrounded by the spirits of those who had once lived in this place, now prisoners of the manor forever.
One by one, they turned toward the dark mirror, where the figures of the family now stood, watching them with eyes that were no longer human. The reflections in the glass began to move toward them, each figure stepping closer, slowly, as if they had all the time in the world.
And then, with one final whisper, the mirror shattered, and the room was consumed by darkness.
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Parth Bharatvanshi
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