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The Final Countdown

A Race Against Time to Stop a Deadly Virus

By Miz SidPublished 3 years ago 4 min read

As soon as the sun went down, the quiet town of Millfield became a ghost town. Only a few flickering streetlights lit the streets, casting eerie shadows on the walls of the empty buildings. Detective Johnson drove his car through the town, his eyes scanning the dark alleys for any signs of trouble.

Suddenly, his police radio crackled to life.

"All units, we have a 911 call from 456 Elm Street . Possible break-in in progress."

Johnson hit the gas pedal and sped towards the address.

When he arrived, he found the front door of the house slightly open. He cautiously entered, gun drawn, and began to search the house. As he made his way through the darkened rooms, he heard a muffled cry for help coming from upstairs.

Johnson bounded up the stairs, ready to confront whoever was in danger. He found a young woman tied to a chair, tears streaming down her face.

"Thank god you're here," she cried.

"He's coming back any minute."

As Johnson began to untie the woman, he heard the sound of footsteps coming up the stairs. He quickly pushed the woman behind him and aimed his gun at the top of the stairs.

A figure appeared, slowly making his way towards Johnson. It was a man, his face obscured by the darkness.

"Who are you?" Johnson demanded.

The man didn't answer. He continued to approach Johnson, step by step. Johnson tightened his grip on his gun, preparing to shoot.

Suddenly, the lights came on, revealing the man's face. It was Johnson's partner, Detective Smith.

"What the hell?" Johnson exclaimed.

"What's going on?"

Smith grinned. "Relax, Johnson. It's just a little joke." Johnson lowered his gun, relief flooding through him. But as he turned to untie the woman, he noticed something odd. There was a strange smell in the air, a smell he couldn't identify. And then he saw it: a small, red stain on the carpet, near the woman's feet.

The rain was coming down in sheets, making it difficult to see anything more than a few feet in front of her. Detective Johnson had been following the suspect for hours, waiting for him to make a mistake.

She was about to call it a night when she saw the suspect duck into an alleyway. Johnson followed, her gun drawn. The alley was narrow and dark, and the rain was making it impossible to hear anything.

Suddenly, she heard a faint sound coming from up ahead. It was a whimper, almost too quiet to hear. She crept forward, her heart racing. As she turned the corner, she saw a man standing over a young woman, a knife in his hand.

Johnson didn't hesitate. She fired her gun, the sound echoing through the alleyway. The man fell to the ground, blood spilling from his chest. The woman looked up at Johnson, tears streaming down her face.

"Thank you," she whispered.

But as Johnson approached the body, she realized something was wrong. There was no blood on the ground, despite the large wound on the man's chest. And then she saw it: the man's eyes were still moving, even though he was clearly dead.

Detective Johnson stepped out of her car and looked up at the looming building in front of her. It was an old, abandoned hospital, with broken windows and peeling paint. She shivered, despite the warm summer night.

She had received a call from the owner of the building, who reported seeing strange lights and hearing odd noises coming

The ride was bumpy, and the car moved at a slow pace as if it was struggling to move forward.

The scenery outside the window was bleak and unwelcoming, and it felt like we were heading towards something ominous.

After a few more minutes of driving, we finally reached our destination a remote cabin in the woods. The cabin was old and run-down, and it gave off an eerie feeling that made me want to turn back.

As we entered the cabin, I noticed that there was no furniture, and it was clear that the previous occupants had left in a hurry. My friend assured me that everything was fine and that we would be staying here for just one night.

As the night progressed, I began to feel uneasy. I heard strange noises outside the cabin, and every time I looked out the window, I thought I saw someone watching us.

My friend assured me that it was just my imagination, but I couldn't shake off the feeling that something was wrong.

Suddenly, the power went out, plunging us into complete darkness. We lit some candles and tried to stay calm, but it was hard with the strange noises and the feeling of being watched.

Just then, we heard a knock on the door. My friend went to answer it, but I begged her not to. However, she opened the door, and I saw a man standing there with a strange expression on his face. He asked if he could come in, but my friend refused.

The man persisted, and my friend eventually relented and let him in. The man sat down and began to talk about how he knew the previous occupants of the cabin and that they had left something behind.

He then proceeded to pull out a large knife from his pocket, and my friend and I realized that we were in danger.

We tried to run, but the man caught us and tied us up.

For the rest of the night, we were held captive by the man in the remote cabin, and we had no idea if we would ever make it out alive.

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