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The Echoing Shadows

A Desolate Mansion and the Secrets It Hides

By Roman OvePublished about a year ago 5 min read
The Echoing Shadows
Photo by Martino Pietropoli on Unsplash

The moon hung high in the sky, casting a pale, silvery glow over the dilapidated mansion. Nestled deep within the woods, the house seemed to breathe darkness. Locals whispered tales of the Forsyth Manor—a place where shadows moved of their own accord, and echoes carried voices that no living soul had uttered. For years, it stood abandoned, a monument to its grim reputation.

Clara, a journalist with an appetite for the paranormal, had always dismissed such stories as figments of overactive imaginations. But when her editor assigned her to write a feature about haunted locales, she decided to investigate the infamous Forsyth Manor. Armed with a flashlight, a camera, and a notebook, Clara ventured into the woods one crisp autumn evening.

The forest was eerily silent. Clara’s boots crunched against the fallen leaves as she approached the mansion. Its windows were like hollow eyes, staring at her with an unspoken challenge. Pushing down the unease clawing at her chest, she stepped onto the creaking porch and pushed the heavy oak door open.

Inside, the air was thick with the scent of decay. Dust motes danced in the beam of her flashlight. The grand staircase loomed ahead, its bannister warped with age. Clara couldn’t help but marvel at the architecture, even in its ruined state. She took a few photos and jotted down notes, her professional detachment keeping her fear at bay.

But as she explored further, an oppressive sense of being watched began to creep over her. It was subtle at first—a prickling sensation at the back of her neck. She shook it off, attributing it to nerves. Yet, the deeper she ventured into the mansion, the more the feeling intensified.

Clara entered the dining room, where a long table sat beneath a tarnished chandelier. The chairs were overturned, and the tablecloth hung in tatters. She raised her camera to capture the scene, but as the flash went off, she froze. In the corner of her eye, she caught movement. Spinning around, her flashlight illuminated… nothing. The room was empty.

“It’s just your imagination,” she muttered, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the stillness.

But the echo that followed was not her own. “Just your imagination,” a voice whispered, soft and mocking.

Clara’s heart raced. She shone her flashlight in every direction, the beam trembling in her hand. “Hello?” she called, her voice cracking.

Silence. Then, faintly, the sound of footsteps echoed from the hallway. Clara’s journalistic curiosity battled with her instinct to flee. Against her better judgment, she followed the sound. The hallway was lined with portraits, their subjects staring down at her with eyes that seemed too lifelike. One painting, in particular, drew her attention: a stern-faced man with piercing blue eyes. Beneath it, a brass plaque read: Victor Forsyth, 1893-1945.

Suddenly, the air grew colder. Clara’s breath formed visible puffs, and a low hum filled her ears. The flashlight flickered, plunging her into darkness for a heart-stopping moment before the beam steadied. When it did, she gasped. The man in the portrait was gone. The frame hung empty, its glass cracked as if from within.

A chill ran down Clara’s spine. She stumbled backward, nearly tripping over a loose floorboard. The humming grew louder, morphing into an otherworldly wail. Clara bolted down the hallway, her footsteps echoing wildly. She burst into the first room she found and slammed the door shut behind her.

Panting, she leaned against the door and surveyed her surroundings. It appeared to be a study, with bookshelves lining the walls and a mahogany desk in the center. A fire flickered weakly in the hearth, though Clara hadn’t noticed it before. On the desk lay a journal, its leather cover cracked with age. Drawn by a mix of fear and fascination, Clara approached and flipped it open.

The handwriting was spidery and uneven. The entries detailed Victor Forsyth’s experiments with seances and spirit communication. He had been obsessed with contacting his deceased wife, Margaret, and had conducted countless rituals in the house. The final entry read:

They answered. But it wasn’t her. It wasn’t her.

As Clara read, the fire in the hearth sputtered and died. The room plunged into darkness, and the temperature plummeted. She felt a presence behind her—a heavy, malevolent force. Slowly, she turned.

The empty frame from the hallway now stood propped against the desk. In its glass, Clara saw her reflection… and behind her, the shadowy outline of a man with piercing blue eyes. She screamed and spun around, but there was no one there. The journal on the desk slammed shut of its own accord.

Terrified, Clara fled the study. The mansion seemed alive now, its walls groaning and its floors trembling. Shadows slithered along the edges of her vision, and disembodied whispers filled the air. Clara’s flashlight flickered wildly as she raced through the twisting hallways, desperately searching for the exit.

Finally, she found herself back in the grand foyer. The front door was ajar, the night beyond a welcome sight. She sprinted toward it, but just as she reached the threshold, the door slammed shut with a deafening bang. Clara pounded on it, screaming for help, but the house swallowed her cries.

“You shouldn’t have come,” a voice hissed from the shadows. Clara turned to see Victor Forsyth standing at the base of the staircase, his form flickering like a distorted image. His eyes burned with an unnatural light, and his mouth twisted into a sinister grin.

“Leave me alone!” Clara shouted, her voice breaking.

Victor stepped closer, his figure growing more solid with each step. “You sought the truth,” he said, his voice echoing. “Now you’ll become part of it.”

Desperation took hold of Clara. She grabbed a nearby candlestick and hurled it at Victor. It passed through him as if he were made of smoke. His laughter filled the air, a sound that chilled her to the bone.

In a final act of defiance, Clara remembered the journal. Pulling it from her bag, she hurled it into the fireplace and lit a match. The flames roared to life, consuming the pages. Victor let out an ear-piercing scream, his form dissolving into wisps of shadow. The mansion shook violently, and Clara felt herself being pulled toward the door.

The next thing she knew, she was outside, gasping for air. The mansion stood silent and dark behind her, its windows shattered. Clara stumbled back to her car, her hands trembling as she fumbled with the keys. As she drove away, she glanced in the rearview mirror.

In the backseat, for the briefest moment, she saw a pair of piercing blue eyes staring back at her.

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Roman Ove

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