The Echo in the Floorboards
Some things are better left under the dust.

The house on Miller Street didn't look haunted. It didn’t have sagging shutters or a bleeding foundation. It was a crisp, mid-century modern ranch with floor-to-ceiling windows and honey-colored oak floors. Elias bought it because it felt "transparent." After a messy divorce and a cramped apartment, he wanted a life where nothing could hide.
He was wrong.
The first week was silent. The second week brought the rhythm. It wasn’t a bump in the night; it was a vibration. Every evening at 11:14 PM, a subtle thrum started beneath the floorboards of the hallway. It felt like a heartbeat slow, steady, and heavy.
Elias blamed the plumbing. He called an inspector, a man named Miller who had been working the neighborhood for forty years. Miller crawled under the house, checked the pipes, and came back up shaking his head.
"Dry as a bone, son," Miller said, wiping grease onto a rag. "But I’ll tell you one thing. These floors? They’re original. Don’t ever go sanding them down. Some things are sealed for a reason."
Elias laughed it off. "It’s just wood, Miller."
"It’s never just wood," the old man muttered before leaving.
That night, the vibration changed. It wasn’t just a pulse anymore; it was a friction. The sound of something dry and brittle dragging against the underside of the oak planks. Scritch. Scritch. Scritch.
Elias sat in his designer leather chair, clutching a glass of scotch. He stared at the hallway. The moonlight hit the floorboards, making the grain look like ripples on a dark pond. As he watched, he saw it: a single board, three feet from the bedroom door, flexed. It didn’t just settle; it arched upward, as if something were pushing against it from below.
He stood up, his heart hammering against his ribs. He walked to the kitchen, grabbed a heavy flathead screwdriver, and marched back to the hall. He wasn't a superstitious man. He was a man who paid a mortgage, and he wouldn't be bullied by a settling foundation.
He knelt. The wood felt unnaturally warm.
"Whatever you are," Elias whispered, "you’re out of my house."
He jammed the screwdriver into the seam between the planks. The wood groaned, a sound far too much like a human sigh. He pried. The nail popped with a sound like a pistol shot. He moved to the next board, his breath coming in ragged gasps. The scent hitting his nostrils wasn't mold or damp earth it was clover and old copper.
He ripped the first board free.
Darkness stared back. The crawlspace was supposed to be empty, but as Elias shone his flashlight into the gap, he didn't see dirt. He saw hair.
White, silk-thin strands filled the cavity between the joists like insulation. It was packed tight, vibrating with that same rhythmic pulse. Panic, cold and oily, slid down his spine. He should have stopped. He should have run. Instead, he reached out and touched a strand.
The hair didn't feel dead. It was slick, humming with a low-voltage current.
As his finger made contact, the dragging sound stopped. The entire house went deathly silent. Then, from the darkness of the gap, a voice emerged. It wasn't a voice made of vocal cords; it sounded like the grinding of dry leaves.
"Room for one more?"
The floorboards at the far end of the hallway began to buckle. Not one, but dozens of them, snapping upward like the ribs of a giant beast. The white hair began to spill out, surging like a tide. It wrapped around Elias's ankle before he could scream. It wasn't grabbing him; it was absorbing him.
He thrashed, kicking at the mass, but the more he struggled, the more the floor surrendered. The oak planks peeled back like skin. He saw them then the others. Beneath the floorboards, woven into the lattice of white hair, were faces. They were stretched, their features elongated and polished like driftwood, their eyes replaced by the knots in the wood.
He saw Miller, the inspector. His mouth was frozen in a silent 'O', his skin the exact shade of the honey-oak finish.
Elias tried to scream, but the hair was in his mouth now, tasting of dust and ancient secrets. He felt his bones soften, his spine straightening to match the line of a floor joist. His skin began to harden, turning brittle and grain-patterned.
The last thing Elias saw before his eyes turned to polished wood was the moon through the floor-to-ceiling windows. It was a beautiful, transparent house.
The next morning, the house was silent. The floorboards were seamless, the honey-colored oak gleaming under the sun. The only difference was a new, subtle ripple in the grain near the bedroom door a pattern that looked remarkably like a human hand, reaching for a surface it would never touch.
The "For Sale" sign went up a week later. The realtor told the new couple that the house was "full of character."
They had no idea how right she was.
About the Creator
Asghar ali awan
I'm Asghar ali awan
"Senior storyteller passionate about crafting timeless tales with powerful morals. Every story I create carries a deep lesson, inspiring readers to reflect and grow ,I strive to leave a lasting impact through words".



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