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The Bloody Mary Effect

Reflections of Horror

By Damion TrimmierPublished 3 years ago 5 min read

The mirror showed a reflection that wasn't my own. At first, I thought it was just a trick of the light, but as I stared closer, I realized that it was something much more sinister. The girl in the mirror had long, black hair that hung in front of her face, obscuring her features. Her eyes glinted in the dim light, and her lips were twisted into a cruel smile.

I tried to turn away, but I was frozen in place, unable to move. The girl's image seemed to grow stronger, taking over the reflection until she was all I could see. Suddenly, she reached out and touched the surface of the glass, her fingers passing through the barrier as if it wasn't even there.

I stumbled back, my heart pounding in my chest. What was happening? Was this some kind of hallucination? I took a deep breath and turned back to the mirror, but the girl was still there, her grin wider and more malevolent than before.

Over the next few days, strange things began to happen. Shadows seemed to dance in the corners of my vision, and I could hear whispers coming from the mirror even when I wasn't looking at it. At night, I would wake up to find the girl's face staring back at me from the glass, her eyes glowing with a sickly green light.

I tried to ignore it, but it was always there, lurking in the back of my mind. The more I tried to push it away, the stronger it seemed to get, until it was all-consuming.

One day, as I was getting ready for school, I caught a glimpse of myself in the mirror. My hair was disheveled, and there were dark circles under my eyes. But that wasn't the worst of it. My reflection had changed. I wasn't me anymore. Instead, I was the girl from the mirror, her twisted smile etched onto my face.

I screamed and stumbled back, tripping over my own feet and falling onto the bathroom floor. As I lay there, gasping for breath, I could hear her laughter ringing in my ears. I knew then that I was in deep trouble.

Over the next few days, my life became a living nightmare. Everywhere I went, the girl was there, watching me from the mirror. She would whisper things to me, dark secrets and twisted promises, and I could feel myself being drawn deeper into her web.

It wasn't long before people began to notice that something was wrong. My friends would ask me if I was feeling okay, and I could see the fear in their eyes when they looked at me. I knew what they were thinking. They were starting to see the girl too.

It was only a matter of time before they started calling me Bloody Mary, a nickname that would haunt me for years to come. I tried to explain to them what was happening, but they just shook their heads and walked away, leaving me alone with my tormentor.

One night, as I was lying in bed, I heard a voice calling out to me. It was the girl, her words echoing through my mind like a curse. She told me that if I wanted to be free, I would have to do something terrible. Something that would break the cycle and release us both from this nightmare.

I knew then what I had to do. I got up from my bed and walked to the bathroom, the mirror looming in front of me like a dark, gaping maw. I stood there for a moment, my hand hovering over the surface, before I finally took a deep breath and spoke the words.

"Bloody Mary. Bloody Mary. Bloody Mary."

The world around me seemed to shift and twist, and I felt myself being pulled into another reality. When I opened my eyes, I was no longer in my bathroom. Instead, I was standing in a dimly lit room, surrounded by darkness. I could hear the sound of dripping water in the distance, and the air was thick with the scent of decay.

Suddenly, I heard a noise behind me, and I turned around to see a figure standing in the shadows. It was the girl from the mirror, her black hair hanging in front of her face like a veil.

"You did well," she said, her voice echoing through the darkness. "But now the real work begins."

I felt a chill run down my spine as I realized what she meant. This alternate reality was bleeding into my world, and there was no telling what horrors it might bring.

For days, I was trapped in that other world, fighting to keep the darkness at bay. But no matter how hard I tried, it seemed to be winning. The whispers and shadows followed me everywhere, and I could feel myself slipping away, inch by inch.

It was only when I saw the faces of my loved ones in the darkness that I realized what I had to do. I couldn't let them suffer because of my mistakes. With one last burst of strength, I called out the girl's name one final time and closed my eyes.

When I opened them again, I was back in my bathroom. The mirror was still there, but the girl was gone. I breathed a sigh of relief, feeling as though a weight had been lifted from my shoulders.

But the relief was short-lived. As I turned to leave the bathroom, I caught a glimpse of myself in the mirror. My eyes were black as coal, and my lips were twisted into a cruel smile. I realized then that the girl had never truly left me, and that I would carry her with me always.

From that day on, people would call me Bloody Mary whenever they saw me. They would tell stories of a young girl who had been killed and abused by her own father in their family bathroom in the 1900s. They would say that if you called her name three times in front of a mirror, she would appear and make you kill yourself.

And I would nod, knowing that the stories were true. For I had lived them myself, and I knew the horrors that lay beyond the surface of that reflective glass.

If you ever find yourself standing in front of a mirror, be careful what you say. Because you never know what might be listening on the other side.

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About the Creator

Damion Trimmier

I am a multi-talented aspiring author with a passion for storytelling. As a filmmaker and a lover of literature, I will create unique perspective when crafting compelling narratives. Together, we will share our thought-provoking stories!

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