The Blackwood Mystery: Chapter 13
Luke's Mistake
The glow from the lanterns cast wavering shadows over the walls of the makeshift base camp, where the team had congregated after a long night of sifting through the asylum's spectral history. Emma's voice rose with enthusiasm as she unfurled a set of dusty blueprints on the central table.
"Look at this," she said, pointing to an obscured wing of the building. "This wasn't in the public records. It's like they wanted to hide its existence."
The team leaned in, their faces a mixture of awe and curiosity. Jack, standing a little apart, watched them with a small smile. His eyes, however, kept straying to Luke, who lingered on the fringe of the group. Luke's usually steady hands fidgeted with the frayed edge of his jacket, and when their gazes briefly met, he turned away, as if the weight of Jack's scrutiny was too much to bear.
"Could be our key to what's been happening here," Mark chimed in, tracing a finger along a faded corridor on the blueprint.
"Absolutely," agreed Sarah, her bright eyes reflecting a fierce determination that mirrored the mood in the room. The possibility of unraveling the asylum's secrets seemed to electrify the air itself.
Jack nodded absently, trying to focus on the discussion, but his instincts, honed by years of navigating treacherous situations, hummed with disquiet. He observed Luke's every twitch, the way he avoided joining the conversation. Luke had always been more reserved than the rest, but this was different—this was evasion.
"Anything you want to add, Luke?" Jack asked casually, watching as Luke's head snapped up, his eyes darting about as though searching for an escape route.
"Uh, no," Luke stammered, "You guys covered it all. Great finds tonight."
"Right," Jack mused softly, not convinced. Luke's unease was tangible, a stark contrast to the excitement that charged the atmosphere of the camp. Jack felt the first threads of suspicion weave through his thoughts, a warning that something was not quite right within their circle.
"Can't wait to see what we uncover next," Emma said with a grin, oblivious to the tension that had subtly crept into the room.
"Indeed," Jack muttered, still watching Luke out of the corner of his eye. The thrill of discovery was there, alive within him, yet it was now laced with a growing concern—one he knew he could not ignore for long.
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As the rest of the team busied themselves with calibrating their equipment for the night's investigation, Sarah rifled through the supply box for a spare flashlight. Her hand brushed against Luke's phone that lay at the bottom, its screen aglow with an incoming notification. Curiosity nudged her as she glanced around to find Luke preoccupied with his back turned to her. She picked up the device, intending to alert him but paused as her eyes caught sight of the message preview—something about a meeting time and a mention of 'ensure they don't suspect'.
"Must be about us," Sarah thought, her brow furrowing. With a hesitant swipe, she unlocked the phone—Luke never did care much for passcodes—and there it was, an open email thread littered with details of their research, timestamps of their findings, all sent to an address Sarah didn't recognize. A sinking realization hit her; Luke had been feeding information to someone else.
She scrolled further, and the evidence was irrefutable. Covert meetings, exchanges of data, and chillingly, a mention of sabotaging their efforts. The words 'rival group' echoed in her head as Sarah's pulse quickened. Luke, their silent cornerstone, was a mole.
"Sarah, did you find that—What are you doing with my phone?" Luke's voice cut through the air like a cold draft.
With the room suddenly hushed, all eyes were on them. Sarah stood, holding the traitorous device out like a venomous serpent. "Care to explain this, Luke?" Her voice was steady, but her hands trembled with the weight of the accusation.
The others gathered around, peering at the screen over Sarah's shoulder. Luke's face drained of color, his usual calm demeanor shattered by the sharp edges of betrayal exposed for all to see.
"Luke, what is this?" Emma's voice was a mix of hurt and incredulity, her trust evidently shaken.
"Is this why things have been... off lately?" Jack added, his previous suspicions now forming into a solid accusation.
"Guys, I—I can explain," Luke stuttered, looking at each member of the team, seeking an ally where there was none to be found.
"Explain? You've been reporting to our competitors! Feeding them everything!" Sarah's accusation hung heavy in the air. The sense of unity they once shared was fracturing before their eyes.
"Give me one good reason why we shouldn't just walk away from you right now," Jack said, the anger in his voice barely contained. It was clear from the faces around him, grim and tight-lipped, that he spoke for all of them.
Luke’s eyes darted from one team member to another, a cornered animal looking for an escape. "That... that isn't mine," he said, his voice cracking under scrutiny. "Someone is trying to set me up."
"Set you up?" Jack's question cut through the tension like a blade. "With detailed messages about our plans? That's a long shot even for Hollywood, Luke."
"Look, I admit it looks bad—" Luke began, but Sarah interrupted.
"Looks bad? Luke, this is outright betrayal!" Her voice rose, laced with a mixture of anger and disbelief.
"Let's be rational about this," Luke tried again, his hands raised in a plea, "maybe someone from their group hacked my phone. It's happened before, right?"
"Or maybe you're lying through your teeth," Jack shot back, his jaw set.
Emma, who had been silent, finally spoke up. Her voice was low, the hurt evident in every syllable. "I defended you, Luke. To everyone. I thought we were friends." Emma's gaze held Luke’s, searching for something—anything—that could explain away the damning evidence.
"Emma, I..." Luke started, but the words seemed to catch in his throat. His shoulders slumped as he met her gaze. The silence stretched between them, heavy and charged.
"Tell us the truth, Luke," Emma implored, her voice breaking with the strain of her emotions. "Please."
Under the collective glare of his once-comrades, Luke's composure crumbled. "Okay! Okay, yes, I've been in touch with them," he confessed, his words tumbling out in a rush. "But it wasn't for the money, I swear. They... they have something on me."
"Something on you?" Jack echoed, incredulous. "What could possibly justify this?"
"Doesn't matter what they have," Sarah interjected sharply. "You chose them over us, over everything we stand for."
The room was thick with a sense of betrayal, choking off any attempt at reconciliation. Emma turned away, unable to look at Luke any longer, a clear sign of her deep sense of personal betrayal. She had opened up to him, shared secrets with him as a close friend, only to be repaid with deception.
"Emma, please," Luke reached out, but she recoiled from his touch as if it burned her.
"Save it," Jack snapped, stepping in between them. The camaraderie that had once defined their group now lay shattered by Luke's admission, leaving a void where trust had been. Emma's betrayed silence spoke volumes more than words ever could.
The base camp, once a hub of eager collaboration, now simmered with an undercurrent of suspicion. The team members exchanged furtive glances, their earlier excitement over uncovering the asylum's dark secrets replaced by a cold wariness. Jack's jaw clenched as he observed this shift; the unity they had taken pride in was fracturing before his eyes.
"Can't believe we didn't see it coming," muttered Sarah, her arms crossed as she leaned back against the cold stone wall of their makeshift research center. "What else might have slipped through?"
"Exactly," Jack replied, his voice steady despite the chaos Luke's betrayal had sown within their ranks. "If Luke could hide his true agenda, who's to say there aren't more secrets lurking among us?"
Emma remained silent, her gaze lost on the dusty floor, the hurt from Luke's deception radiating from her in palpable waves. It was clear that the revelation had hit her harder than the rest; her trust had been a gift not easily given.
Jack cleared his throat, pulling the group's attention to him. "We can't let paranoia derail us. We've got a bigger problem—the rival group and whatever they're planning for the spirits trapped here." He paused, ensuring he had everyone's focus. "We need to safeguard ourselves—and the entities we're trying to help."
"Security measures?" Sarah raised an eyebrow, skepticism threading through her words.
"More than that. Countermeasures." Jack began pacing, his mind working through possibilities. "We'll set up surveillance, both digital and... less conventional. Emma, your expertise in sigils could fortify our defenses."
Emma looked up, a flicker of her former determination returning to her eyes. "I can do that. Protective wards, barriers against spiritual interference. It won’t be easy, but I’ll start drafting something."
"Good," Jack nodded at her, then turned to the rest. "We'll rotate watches. No one is alone at any point—we keep eyes and ears open. If you notice anything, anything at all out of the ordinary, you bring it to the group immediately."
"Like a buddy system?" Sarah half-smiled, though the humor didn't quite reach her eyes.
"Exactly. We can't afford any weak links." Jack's tone left no room for argument. "Luke's mistake won't be our downfall. We're better than that, stronger than that."
He looked around at his team, seeing the resolve hardening on their faces. Despite the breach in their trust, they were still united by a common goal—to understand and protect the lingering souls of the asylum.
"Let's get to work," Jack commanded, and without another word, the team dispersed to fortify their sanctuary against unseen enemies, both human and spectral.
The cold, stale air of the asylum's library seemed to tighten around them as they gathered, a circle of determined shadows among the towering bookshelves. Jack’s eyes swept over his team, lingering on each face marked by the night’s treacheries and silent vows.
"Alright, let's remember why we're here," he began, his voice steady. "This isn't just about us or our reputations—it's about those who suffered within these walls. We've got an obligation to the truth, to expose the darkness that’s been festering here for too long."
Around him, heads nodded, the flicker of shared purpose rekindling in their expressions. The betrayal had cut deep, but their mission ran deeper still—a bond forged not by trust alone, but by the urgency of their cause.
"Luke can't stop us," Emma stated, her hands clenched as if she could physically hold the group together. "We have something he never understood—the conviction to face what lies in the shadows, to bring light to it."
"Exactly," Sarah chimed in, the hurt in her eyes now hardened into a glare of defiance. "We've come too far to let one rotten apple spoil this. Let's show that no amount of deceit can deter us from unveiling the truth."
Jack watched as the words seemed to bolster their spirits, each member drawing strength from one another. They were wounded, yes, but not broken; betrayed, yet unyielding. The ancient evil that haunted the asylum’s halls would find no easy prey in them.
A silence fell, heavy with contemplation. It was Jack who broke it, his gaze turning inward as he considered the gravity of their plight. "I won't lie to you all," he confessed, his voice a low rumble in the quiet. "I'm angry—angrier than I've been in a long time. But I refuse to let that anger blind me, or to let Luke's actions define what we do next."
"Anger has a place," remarked Emma, her voice softer now. "It can drive us, remind us we're alive and fighting for something real. I feel...betrayed, sure. But beneath that, there's this fire that wasn't there before. It tells me we're on the right path."
"Disappointment is a bitter pill," Sarah added, tucking a loose strand of hair behind her ear. "But I'll swallow it if it means getting us closer to the answers. We owe it to ourselves, and to those lost souls, to see this through."
Each admission hung in the air, raw and honest. They stood in the heart of their haunted battleground, not as individuals, but as a collective force, each member's resolve intertwining like roots to anchor them against the storm.
"We will get through this," Jack affirmed, meeting the gaze of every team member. "We'll honor the memories of those who suffered here by finishing what we started. Let’s make sure their voices are heard, once and for all."
A current of solidarity surged through the group, electric and invigorating. They were more than investigators; they were guardians of a tragic history, warriors against an encroaching darkness. United by their renewed commitment, they set about their tasks not with trepidation, but with a fierce determination that nothing—not even the vilest betrayal—could extinguish.
Jack's fingers danced across the screen of his tablet, plotting out a grid over the layout of the asylum. "We need eyes everywhere," he said, the edge in his voice cutting through the tension that had settled like dust after a storm. "Motion sensors in the corridors, infrared at choke points, and cameras watching our blind spots."
"Agreed," Emma nodded, her analytical mind already racing with logistics. "I'll handle the tech setup. We've got enough equipment to rig this place like Fort Knox."
"Luke's treachery won't stop us," Sarah stated, defiance lifting her chin. She pulled out a map and laid it flat on the makeshift table. "We should also reach out to the historical society. They have archives that could give us more insight into the asylum's past—information Luke couldn't have passed to the others yet."
"Good thinking," Jack replied, a spark of admiration in his eyes for her resourcefulness. "I'll make the call. Their knowledge could be the key to staying one step ahead."
"Meanwhile, I'll reinforce our perimeter," Tom interjected, rolling his shoulders as if preparing for battle. "Extra locks, maybe even a coded entry system. If anyone tries to get in uninvited, we'll know about it."
"Let's not forget the spiritual defenses," Emma murmured, her gaze distant but determined. "Protection charms, salt lines, the works. Whatever's here isn't just human, and we can't let our guard down."
"Absolutely," Jack agreed with a solemn nod. "We need all the protection we can muster."
They worked through the night, each member of the team bringing their strengths to the fore. By dawn, the base camp was transformed—a fortress against physical and spectral threats alike. The surveillance systems blinked to life, casting an electronic eye over the decaying grandeur of the asylum. Every window and doorway bore the mark of their vigilance, sealed by modern technology and ancient rituals alike.
As the first light of morning pierced the shadows, the team gathered outside, facing the imposing façade of the asylum together. They stood shoulder to shoulder, the air between them thrumming with silent promises and shared courage.
"Today, we're not just researchers or thrill-seekers," Jack proclaimed, his voice carrying the weight of their collective resolve. "We're guardians standing up against a darkness that wants to swallow history and harm innocents. Luke's betrayal opened our eyes to how far some will go for greed and glory, but it also steeled our spirit."
"Betrayal has made us stronger," Sarah added, her hand finding Emma's in a show of unity. "It's brought us closer, bound us tighter. We are the line between the living and the forgotten, the protectors of truths that refuse to die."
"Let's show them what we're made of," Tom growled, a fire kindling in his eyes.
"Let's finish what we started," Emma echoed, squeezing Sarah's hand back.
"Let's do this—for the lost souls, for the truth, and for each other," Jack concluded, his gaze sweeping over his team, his friends, his fellow warriors.
A chorus of affirmations rose from their throats, a resolute battle cry to challenge the day. They turned back towards the asylum, their silhouettes etched against the dawning sun, ready to face whatever lay within its forsaken halls. Together they stepped forward, undaunted and unwavering, their hearts beating as one.
Jack's fingers deftly toggled the switches of the newly installed surveillance equipment, his eyes scanning the array of monitors that flickered to life. Each screen split into quadrants, revealing different angles of the desolate asylum's shadowy corridors and decaying rooms. The infrared cameras pierced through the darkness, unmasking any movement with clinical precision.
"Motion sensors are live," he announced, taut with concentration. "If they so much as breathe near these walls, we'll know."
Beside him, Sarah nodded, her eyes reflecting the glow of the monitors. She held a digital recorder, her thumb hovering over the record button, ready to capture any spectral whisper or disembodied plea. Her gaze was steely, resolute; the betrayal had sharpened her resolve rather than shattering it.
Emma checked the locks on the sturdy new door they had installed at the entrance of their fortified base camp. The heavy bolt slid into place with a satisfying clunk, a symbol of their renewed vigilance. She turned back to the group, her face set in determined lines. "That should hold anything out—or in."
Tom, meanwhile, surveyed the perimeter, a walkie-talkie clipped to his belt. He had always been the muscle of the group, but now there was a strategic edge to his movements. Each step was measured, each glance calculated; he was a sentinel guarding against unseen threats.
"External cameras are good to go," Tom reported, his voice a low rumble. "And I've got our contacts on speed dial. If things get messy, backup is just a call away."
As the early morning light began to seep into the room, casting long shadows across the makeshift command center, Jack felt a surge of cautious optimism. They were no longer merely reacting; they were taking the fight to the enemy's doorstep.
"Alright, team," Jack said, meeting each pair of eyes in turn. "We've got eyes on every corner, ears in every room. We're locked down tight and we've got allies in our corner. It's time to dig deeper into this asylum's secrets—without looking over our shoulders."
"Remember, stay sharp and stay connected," Emma reminded them, her hand instinctively reaching for the reassuring weight of the flashlight on her belt. "No one goes anywhere alone."
"Let's uncover the truth and put an end to this," Sarah added, her voice steady and sure.
"Without fear," Tom affirmed, his stance as solid as the ground beneath their feet.
"Without hesitation," Jack finished, a firm nod sealing their pact.
The team shared a brief, charged glance before fanning out to their respective posts. They moved with purpose, a well-oiled machine infused with newfound urgency and a clear mission. As Jack settled into his chair, every muscle coiled for action, he knew the next chapter of their investigation was about to begin—an unwritten page that they would fill with courage and revelations.
With one last look at the screens, Jack reached for his own walkie-talkie. "Team, let's get to work. The truth awaits, and we're the ones to find it."
The stage was set, the players ready. The asylum loomed silent and foreboding in the distance, but within the fortified walls of their camp, a new day was dawning—one where they would not only confront the shadows but chase them into the light.
About the Creator
Mara Edwards
I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!



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