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The Aunty in My Room Says You’re Very Kind, Abbu

My daughter mentioned a lady in her room. But that room had been locked for years. When we opened it, the dust was thick — and on the mirror, a single word was written with a finger: “Thank you.

By Noman AfridiPublished 7 months ago 2 min read

The Aunty in My Room Says You’re Very Kind, Abbu”

My daughter Areeba turned four last winter.

Bright eyes. Soft curls. A heart as curious as a candle in a cave.

We had just moved back into my ancestral house — a large, quiet place on the outskirts of Abbottabad. It had three bedrooms.

But one room — the one in the far corner — had always been locked.

Since we moved in, I never thought of opening it.

---

One morning, as I was preparing for work, Areeba climbed onto my lap.

She whispered:

> “Abbu... the aunty in my room says you’re very kind.”

I smiled, thinking she meant her mother, or some imaginary friend.

> “Which aunty, jaan?”

She pointed toward the locked door.

> “That aunty. The one with long hair. She talks to me when I’m sleepy.”

My smile faded.

> “But that room is always closed.”

She nodded cheerfully.

> “I know. But she comes from inside. She says it’s cold in there.”

---

I didn’t want to scare her.

Children imagine things. Right?

Still, that night, I stood by the locked door.

Dust on the knob.

Spider webs along the frame.

I gently opened it.

---

The Room

Cold air spilled out.

The room hadn’t been touched in decades.

Old furniture covered in sheets.

Curtains tattered.

A mirror — dusty, cracked at the corner — stood across the room.

Areeba peeked in.

> “See? She’s not here now. But she left something.”

She ran to the mirror.

I followed.

There, across the glass, drawn by a small finger, were the words:

“Thank you.”

---

I shivered.

It was written from inside the dust.

Fresh.

Real.

> “Who wrote this?”

She looked up.

> “The aunty. She said you helped her once. Long ago.”

> “What’s her name?”

> “She said you called her... baji.”

---

The Forgotten Sister

That night, I went through old boxes.

Found an album. Faded pictures. Memories covered in silence.

And then… a photo of me, age six, with a teenage girl behind me.

My cousin. Samra baji.

She had lived with us for one summer.

She passed away that same year — in this house.

In this room.

Fever. Isolation.

She died without ever saying goodbye.

---

My parents never spoke of it again.

The room was locked.

Her name was buried with time.

But my daughter… had never seen that photo.

Never heard her name.

---

The Night Visitor

A week later, I left the door slightly open.

Areeba had a fever.

I sat by her side.

Around 3:00 AM, I dozed off.

Until I heard it:

A soft humming.

A lullaby I hadn’t heard in decades.

I opened my eyes.

And saw her.

A woman.

Sitting by Areeba.

Long hair.

Wearing white.

Face gentle.

Not smiling. Not frowning.

Just… peaceful.

She looked at me.

And whispered:

> “Thank you… for remembering.”

And vanished.

---

Areeba slept calmly.

Her fever broke by morning.

---

Closure

I left the room open now.

Placed fresh flowers on the dresser.

Sometimes the mirror fogs over in the morning —

And a single smiley face appears.

Or the word:

“Goodnight.”

---

I never told anyone.

But I know this:

The dead don’t always haunt.

Sometimes…

They just want to be acknowledged.

To be remembered.

To say thank you.

---

And sometimes…

They find a way back —

Through the heart of a child.

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About the Creator

Noman Afridi

I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.

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