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The Abyss Unveiled - Part 1

Shadows of Blackridge

By Jupiter's QuillPublished 12 months ago 5 min read

The first glance at the town of Black ridge viewed it as a small village that lay at the edge of civilization, sleeping its life away. On closer look, however, its peculiar charm seemed to be an amalgamation of rustic cottages, cobblestone streets, and an unsettling stillness hanging in the air. It was a place full of eerie legends, with thick woods looming over it like watchful sentinels rather than trees. With dense woods all around and eerie legends, the people there lived quiet lives until that night mist rolled in. It was late autumn, and the air was crisp with the scent of fallen leaves. The mist wasn't anything special in Black ridge, but this time it was different. Thick and unnaturally cold, it blanketed the village much like an oppressive shroud, muffling sounds and cloaking the streets with eerie silence. The mist crept into every crevice, carrying with it an almost tangible dread that chilled not just the air but the soul of anyone caught within its grasp. Radios crackled with static, streetlights flickered, and some strange hum seemed to reverberate in the air, sending shivers down spines.

Ethan Ward was an assignment journalist, thoroughly disillusioned and stuck in Black Ridge. The town had proved a pit stop in his tour towards a much bigger city until the car went wrong on him. He took a room from the one inn that he came across: creaking relic, maintained by a quaint lady by the name Mrs. Eldritch, whose unsettling smiles held a number of secrets.

The mist thickened, and Ethan sat in his room, going over notes from an old folktale he had overheard from locals earlier that day. It told the tale of "The Abyss," some sort of cursed place deep in the woods to where anyone who ventured in never returned. They said the mist was its herald, a warning for those foolish enough to ignore the signs.

Then came the first scream.

It cut through the unnatural silence like a knife, sending Ethan bolting upright. Outside, the sound of chaos erupted-panicked footsteps, frantic cries, and something else. A low, guttural growl inhuman, menacing. Curiosity, mixed with journalistic instinct, got the better of Ethan as he grabbed his flashlight and phone and headed out into the foggy streets.

The town was in disarray: people running, their faces pale with terror, though the mist allowed them to see no more than a few feet before their noses. "Stay inside!" someone shouted. "Lock your doors!"

Ethan shifted along gingerly, his flash hardly puncturing the fog. The foot connected with something, and he sprang back, flashing the light downward. There, on the cobblestone road, was a body. It was slumped over with the face screwed in horror. Down the chest ran long, raked tears from claw fingers; the dirt surrounding the place had been blackened by dark stains of blood.

"What the.be damned." he whispered as breaths began to mist up in cold air.

The growl came again, closer this time. Ethan whipped the flashlight toward the sound but saw nothing. Then a shadow moved-something massive and fast darting through the mist. He froze, heart hammering, as his instincts screamed to flee. But his legs refused to obey. The shadow stopped just beyond his vision, and for a moment, silence reigned.

Then it attacked.

A monstrous creature, all sinew and shadow, lunged from the fog. Eyes glowing with amber fire, and teeth as sharp as daggers shone in that dimly lit place. Ethan dove to the side, narrowly avoiding its claws tearing through a wooden lamppost like paper. Scrambling to his feet, he sprinted toward the inn, fueled by adrenaline with every step.

Inside, the survivors had barricaded the doors and windows. Mrs. Eldritch stood at the center of the room, her manner as calm as it was chilling. "They have come for us," she whispered, her tone softly inflected with a terrible certainty.

"What are those things?" Ethan panted.

"The Abyss has opened," she returned enigmatically. "And the Shadows have returned to claim what was promised."

"What does that even mean?" Ethan shouted, frustration finally boiling over.

Before she could answer, the building shook violently. The creatures were attacking, their claws ripping through the barricades with an ease that was terrifying. Panic ensued as the survivors scrambled for weapons or hiding places.

Ethan saw a trapdoor behind the counter and pulled it open. "Down here!" he called, as he motioned for the others to follow him. Mrs. Eldritch hesitated, still staring at the door as if she could almost hear some soft whisper there that called her name. Her face stretched tightly, a flicker of something like fear crossing her features-features always so unruffled. After a moment, she joined Ethan and the others down into the dark cellar below.

The cellar was damp, filled with the scent of earth and decay. The only light came from Ethan's flickering flashlight. "What now?" asked Clara, a young mother clutching her terrified daughter.

Mrs. Eldritch stepped forward, her expression grim. "This tunnel leads to the woods," she said. "We must reach the Abyss before it's too late.

Reach it?" Ethan asked with incredulity. "You just said this is where all these things were from!"

"And it is the only place where we could seal them," she replied. In such a dire situation, they had no option except for trusting her completely. As they followed her through tunnels that were steep and dark, the air clung to their skin like tape. The groaning and shrieking up above reverberated through earthward thrusts, sending current jolts of fear across bodies. Every step fell heavier, their breathing shallow and erratic lest the very sound of their fear called the horrors closer. The grim reminder that the time was running out gnawed at their resolution, pushing them onward even while terror was clawing at their minds.

They emerged into the woods now, the mist thicker than ever. Mrs. Eldritch led the way, her movements purposeful despite her age. The group followed, fear clutching at their hearts as shadows moved all around them. Then one of the creatures burst from the fog, and chaos erupted.

Ethan picked up a branch and swung with all his might, giving time for the group to scatter. But the creature didn't stay down for long. As it lunged again, a blinding light erupted from Mrs. Eldritch's outstretched hand, sending the monster howling into the night.

"What are you?" Ethan asked, astonished.

She turned to him, her eyes glowing faintly. “The keeper of the seal,” she said. “Now hurry. We’re almost there.”

They reached a massive, ancient stone altar surrounded by eerie carvings. Mrs. Eldritch began chanting in a language none of them understood, her voice echoing eerily in the mist. The carvings on the ancient stone altar seemed to writhe as if alive, glowing faintly with an unearthly light. The air thickened, humming with power and the smothering sensation of otherworldly presence. But the Shadows were far from finished. Dozens emerged from the fog, their amber eyes blazing with anger.

"Keep them off!" she shouted.

Ethan and the others fought in desperation, using whatever they could to fend off the creatures. At the last barricade of courage that was going to break, the altar flared up with light, and the Shadows shrieked at an ear-piercing decibel. One by one, they disintegrated into the mist and left behind silence.

Mrs. Eldritch slumped to the floor, spent but breathing. "It is done," she whispered. Still, Ethan could not shake the instinct that this was far from over. The mist started to clear, and the woods came into an unnatural clarity. And farther beyond the trees, a pair of amber eyes, bright and open, stared at them unblinkingly.

To Be Continued…

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