Scratches in the Dark
Some Secrets Should Never Be Unlocked
There was only one rule: don't open the door.
The room, devoid of any escape route, was dominated by a single, imposing door. The whispers, barely audible at first, crept into his mind like a threatening fog. The scratching, a haunting echo, persisted, refusing to be dismissed as mere imagination.
The rule, a cryptic command, loomed over him, its origin shrouded in mystery. He knew the rule but didn't know why he knew. All he knew was that the door must not be opened.
Night after sleepless night, the whispers grew louder, the scratching more frantic, like desperate nails clawing at wood. The sound wasn't coming from outside; it seemed to come from the room itself. Each time he woke, fresh marks were etched into the door. Long, jagged lines that hadn't been there before.
Whispers then turned to pleading. An agonizing voice begging to be released. Days bled into nights. He could no longer tell the difference. He was tormented by the thought of the door, wondering if it was keeping something out… or something in. The whispers echoed in his mind, twisting the rule into a taunt, urging him to defy it.
Driven to the edge of madness, he couldn't resist any longer. Trembling, he reached for the handle and pulled. The door creaked open, and the truth struck like a bolt of ice: nothing was on the other side, only darkness.
Turning back, he saw himself. It wasn't the door that had kept him trapped. It was the room.
He had been the one scratching, the one pleading. And now, with the door open, he was finally free… but from what? He realized that he had been his own captor, his own tormentor.
But why?
About the Creator
Joseph Cosgriff
Aspiring new writer who loves fiction and specifically post-apocalyptic and dystopian stories. Looking to see what I can do to better my skills.




Comments (2)
such a great piece
Great twist. Loved your entry Joseph. Best of luck man.