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Mountain secret

By Mystery WorldPublished 3 years ago 3 min read

Deep in the dense forests of mountain, an old bungalow stood tall and imposing, its dark walls and high roof making it appear even more intimidating in the dim light of dusk. The locals whispered in hushed tones about the strange occurrences that happened within the bungalow's walls, the eerie sounds that could be heard at night, and the sudden disappearance of those who dared to venture too close.

But despite the rumors, a young couple, Surya and Swathi, decided to explore the bungalow as part of their honeymoon adventure. They were both fascinated with the supernatural and were excited to discover the secrets hidden within the walls of the bungalow.

As they entered the house, they were greeted with the musty smell of old wood and dust. The rooms were dimly lit, with cobwebs hanging from the ceiling and old furniture scattered around. The couple explored the ground floor, discovering nothing unusual, until they reached the stairs leading to the upper floor. The stairs creaked with every step they took, as though warning them to turn back.

Despite the ominous warning, they continued up the stairs, and as they reached the top, they heard a faint whisper in the distance. At first, they couldn't make out what was being said, but as they approached a room at the end of the hall, the whisper grew louder.

When they entered the room, they were shocked to see a young girl sitting in the center of the room, with her eyes fixed on an old, dusty mirror. Her long, black hair was draped over her face, and she seemed lost in thought. Surya and Swathi were taken aback, but as they approached the girl, she vanished into thin air, leaving behind a musty smell and a sudden drop in temperature.

Shaken but intrigued, they continued to explore the bungalow, determined to uncover its secrets. As they opened the doors of the other rooms, they found themselves surrounded by strange occurrences. They heard footsteps echoing in the distance, doors slamming shut without anyone touching them, and shadows moving in the corners of their eyes.

It was as if the house was alive and was trying to drive them away, but the couple refused to give up. They were determined to discover what lay at the heart of the mountain secret.

As the night grew darker, the couple stumbled upon a hidden chamber deep within the house. The room was filled with strange symbols and an ancient book, written in a language they couldn't understand. Surya and Swathi were transfixed by the mysterious book, and as they tried to decipher its meaning, they were suddenly surrounded by a blinding light.

When the light faded, they found themselves in a different room altogether. This room was dark, and a figure could be seen in the distance, standing motionless. As they approached the figure, they realized with horror that it was a ghostly apparition, staring at them with hollow, black eyes.

The ghostly figure beckoned them closer, and as they approached, it spoke to them in a chilling voice. "You should not have come here. This house is cursed, and those who enter never leave."

The couple stood frozen, unable to move or speak. As the ghostly figure continued to speak, they felt a strange force drawing them closer, as if they were being pulled by an invisible rope.

Suddenly, the couple was thrown back, and they found themselves outside the bungalow. The sun had risen, and the birds were chirping, but Surya and Swathi were in shock. They had witnessed something that was beyond their comprehension, something that would haunt them for the rest of their lives.

As they turned to look at the bungalow, they saw that it had disappeared.

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