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First Date

A Short Horror Story by Audrey Rose

By Audrey RosePublished about a year ago 6 min read

First Date

It had been months since Laura had agreed to go on a date. Skeptical of online dating, she meticulously scrutinized every profile, every message. So when she matched with Ethan, a seemingly normal guy with a love for hiking and an infectious smile, she decided to give it a shot. They agreed to meet at an old diner on the outskirts of town—quaint, quiet, and perfect for a first date.

The moment Laura walked in, she felt a shiver run down her spine. The diner was almost empty, save for a couple of elderly patrons in the corner. The fluorescent lights flickered intermittently, casting eerie shadows on the faded wallpaper. Ethan waved her over to a booth, his smile not quite reaching his eyes.

"Laura, right? It's nice to finally meet you," he said, his voice strained.

"Nice to meet you too, Ethan," she replied, sliding into the booth opposite him. Something felt off, but she couldn’t put her finger on it. Maybe it was the way his eyes darted around the room or the way he kept fidgeting with his drink.

They made small talk—work, hobbies, the usual. But Laura couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. Ethan's stories didn't quite add up; he contradicted himself more than once. The unease in her stomach grew.

Suddenly, the lights flickered again, this time staying off for a few seconds longer. In the brief darkness, Laura felt a cold hand brush against hers under the table. She yanked her hand back, her heart pounding.

"What was that?" she asked, her voice trembling.

"What was what?" Ethan replied, his face a mask of confusion.

"The hand—it felt like someone grabbed me."

Ethan's expression changed, his eyes narrowing. "Laura, there's no one else here."

She glanced around. The elderly couple had vanished, and the diner seemed eerily empty. Panic began to set in. She reached for her phone, but it was gone. She was sure she had placed it on the table when she sat down.

"Ethan, I think I should go," she said, trying to keep her voice steady.

He grabbed her wrist, his grip tight and cold. "I don't think that's a good idea."

Laura tried to pull away, but his grip was too strong. She looked into his eyes and saw something inhuman, something malevolent. The lights flickered again, and the diner was plunged into darkness.

When the lights came back on, Ethan was gone. The booth was empty, but Laura still felt his icy grip on her wrist. She stumbled out of the diner, her heart racing, her mind in a frenzy.

Outside, the night was eerily silent. She ran to her car, fumbling with the keys, desperate to get away. As she drove off, she glanced in the rearview mirror and saw Ethan standing in the middle of the road, his eyes following her, glowing with an unnatural light.

Suddenly, she found herself back in the parking lot of the diner. She was being pulled back inside the diner by some unseen force, where Ethan sat in the same booth as if nothing ever happened.

"Laura, right? It's nice to finally meet you," he repeated.

Laura's heart sank as the familiar chill of déjà vu washed over her. It was as if the universe had conspired to replay this moment, trapping her in a sinister cycle that mocked her every effort to escape. She wanted to scream, to question how this was possible, but the words caught in her throat.

"How... how is this happening?" she stammered, her voice trembling. She looked around the diner, desperately searching for any sign of hope, but all she saw were the same faded checkered tiles and the flickering neon sign that buzzed overhead.

Ethan leaned back in the booth, a smirk spreading across his face. "You really don't remember, do you? This is where it all begins—and ends." His voice dripped with a dark amusement that sent shivers down her spine.

Laura felt a wave of nausea crash over her. She had been here before, she realized. The diner, the eerie silence, Ethan’s piercing gaze—it was all too familiar. She had tried to leave, to escape, but each attempt only led her back to this moment, this conversation, this fate.

"Why are you doing this to me?" she cried, her frustration boiling over.

Ethan’s smile only widened, and he leaned forward, his eyes glowing brighter. "You see, Laura, you aren’t meant to leave. You’re caught in a loop of your own demise. Every time you think you’ve escaped, I bring you back. It’s... quite entertaining to watch."

Panic surged within her as she realized the full weight of his words. This was a twisted game, a dark reflection of her own life where every choice she made led her back to the same horrifying conclusion. She remembered the last moments before she found herself in this cycle and realized she never made it home from the diner on that fateful first date.

“No end…” she echoed, the words tasting bitter on her tongue. Her heart raced as she struggled to comprehend the horror of her situation. “What do you want from me?”

Ethan leaned back, his demeanor shifting from playful to predatory. “Your fear, your despair. It feeds me, and every time you return, you give me a little more. It’s a delicious cycle. But I must say, I’m getting bored. I’ve seen your attempts to escape, but they always lead you back here, to me.”

As he spoke, the diner walls around her began to warp, the faded wallpaper peeling back to reveal shadows that whispered her name. The air thickened, suffocating her with dread. She felt the icy fingers of despair gripping her throat.

“Stop it!” she shouted, slamming her palms against the table. “Let me go!”

But Ethan merely chuckled, a sound that reverberated through the empty diner like a death knell. “Oh, Laura, if only it were that simple. But you’re not ready to leave. You haven’t faced your true fear yet.”

Laura's breath quickened as a cold sweat broke out across her forehead. “What true fear?” she challenged, her voice trembling but defiant. “You think you know me? You think you know what scares me?”

Ethan leaned in closer, his smile widening, revealing teeth too sharp to be human. “I know you better than you know yourself. It’s not the dark, nor the shadows, nor even the presence that lurks in the woods. It’s the fear of being utterly alone. That’s what this game is really about.”

As he spoke, the diner around her began to dissolve into shadow, the fluorescent lights flickering ominously as the once-familiar surroundings transformed into a distorted reflection of her mind. The clatter of dishes and the chatter of patrons faded into an oppressive silence. Laura felt the walls close in, and every heartbeat echoed louder in her ears.

“No!” she screamed, the primal instinct to flee igniting within her once more. “I won’t let you do this!”

Ethan’s laughter filled the void, an echoing reminder that she was trapped. “You can run, Laura, but the more you fight it, the more I feast on your essence. Embrace your fear, and perhaps we can break this cycle together.”

Desperation clawed at her heart, but in that moment, something shifted. An ember of defiance ignited deep within her. “Fine,” she said, her voice steadier now. “If I’m going to face my fears, I’ll do it on my own terms.”

Summoning all her strength, she closed her eyes and envisioned the one thing that terrified her the most: the image of herself, isolated and lost in the endless darkness, with no one to turn to, no one to save her. She allowed the fear to wash over her, embracing it fully.

Suddenly, the shadows around her began to shift. The air thickened, swirling with a palpable energy as she opened her eyes. Ethan’s expression morphed from amusement to surprise. “What are you doing?”

“I’m taking back my power!” she declared, her voice rising above the cacophony of whispers. The diner trembled as she felt the fear transform into a surge of anger and strength. “You’re not the one in control here!”

With a primal scream, she reached out, willing the shadows to recede. To her astonishment, they obeyed, retreating like mist before the dawn. The diner brightened, the colors returning to their vibrant hues as Ethan stumbled back, shock etched on his face.

“No! You can’t do this!” he shouted, but his voice was fading, swallowed by the light that now engulfed her.

“I can,” she asserted, her resolve unyielding. “This ends now.”

The diner erupted in a blinding flash. When the light faded, she found herself standing alone in the woods—the sun filtering down through the trees, the air crisp and clear.

She took a deep breath, the weight of dread lifting from her shoulders. Behind her, the shadow of the diner flickered and then vanished into nothingness. As she stepped into the sunlight, she was free.

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About the Creator

Audrey Rose

I believe that the best horror isn't just about scares—it's about tapping into deeper fears and telling stories that resonate long after the final page is turned.

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