Eternity
A horror poem

Science finally proved the Soul—
Our research team found one
Invisible to our eyes,
But
Microscopically alive
We found it there
— trapped—
In a
Dead man’s withered husk,
Deep inside
His derelict body
We found it there
With our spectrophotometry
And our scans
We charted a little slice of his remains,
A region
A meager portion
Odd and opaque
Absorbing more light than it should
Like a tiny, weak black hole
We found it there
Deeper than his
Leather
Deeper than his
Jerky
And deeper than the
Gritty, rotted, gunk in his veins
Deeper even
Than his cracked tendons and his delicate bones
We found it there,
In the center
Of a cross section
Of his shriveled body
Yes, we found his soul
Coiled and lingering,
Curled in on itself
Like a decrepit old heir, huddling in the lower rooms of a crumbling estate
Like a snail with its operculum drawn in tight
The man’s soul,
Shuttered
Against the corruption
Of the man’s body’s
Against the Dry Rot
And against the cloying dusts
Against the ravages of time
Of deterioration
And of decay
But even so coiled,
Even so drawn in
Even so shuttered
Our study showed the soul
Could still know!
We report with confidence
Because we saw it tremble
And we saw it wince and rattle and moan
With every
Fresh cut
Of our saws and our drills
Through
The dead man’s ancient corpse
*
But science must never be content
What would we be without restless curiosity?
Future studies will aim
To experiment on the living
Vivisection
To lay bare
The real human soul
In the hopes that we might see what shape it takes
Before it retreats
Into
Its
Shell
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Author’s note:
I know this sketch is not the greatest, but I’m making a deliberate effort to create some of my own visuals in protest of the ai generated images which permeate so much online writing content.
I’m not saying anyone else should feel bad about using ai art, but it’s absolutely not for me.
So if unsplash doesn’t have what I’m looking for, I’ll keep using my own beginner level photography and art rather than promoting ai for what I want.
It’s more fun and it’s good practice. Anyway, I want to get better so if anyone has feedback I’m all ears :)
About the Creator
Sam Spinelli
Trying to make human art the best I can, never Ai!
Help me write better! Critical feedback is welcome :)
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Comments (5)
Love that this was your own sketch 😍 Well damn. This was very scientifically charged. Love how far into the body of a corpse you went. How vivid and chilling it got. Love the rhythm especially when it launched itself from the jerky to the 'deeper even'. The saws and drills then watching it tremble 😲😳 Gosh. That ending. I want to leave before that happens. This was outstanding Sam. Congratulations on your Top Story 🤗❤️
This was so fun to read my god. Also love your initiative on combating AI in creative spaces!
Horror straight through my bones. An astounding poem, Sam. Congratulations on your top story, and for what it's worth, I think you should keep using personal sketches. It's unique, and with time and practice, your art will evolve.
This is absolutely haunting and brilliant! You've created such a chilling scientific horror story that made my skin crawl in the best way. The clinical, methodical tone paired with the disturbing imagery of finding a soul "coiled and lingering" like a "decrepit old heir" is incredibly effective. I love how you build that tension between scientific discovery and ethical horror.
Good