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Echoes of the Abyss

When a House Holds the Secrets of the Dead

By sajid hasan Published 9 months ago 3 min read

The old house stood on a windswept hill, overlooking the town like a skeletal hand. Locals whispered about it, their voices hushed and laced with fear. They said the house was alive, that it remembered. I never believed them, of course. Until I inherited it.

My name is Elias, and I'm a writer. I thought the solitude of the old house would be perfect for my new book. The will described it as "rustic" and "charming." It was neither. Dust lay thick as a shroud, the air heavy with the scent of decay. Shadows stretched long and distorted in the dim light, and every creak of the floorboards sounded like a mournful sigh.

The first night, I heard it. A faint whisper, like someone calling my name. I dismissed it as the wind, the old house settling. But it came again the next night, clearer this time, a chillingly intimate murmur that seemed to come from inside the walls.

I started to feel uneasy. Sleep offered no respite, haunted by nightmares of endless corridors and grasping hands. I'd wake up in a cold sweat, the whisper still echoing in my ears. I tried to rationalize it, blaming my overactive imagination, the stress of the book, anything but the truth.

One day, while exploring the attic, I found a trunk tucked away in a dark corner. It was filled with old photographs, yellowed and cracked. They depicted a family, their faces frozen in time. A stern-looking man, a beautiful but sad woman, and a little girl with hauntingly familiar eyes. As I sifted through the photos, a name caught my eye, scrawled on the back of one: "Eleanor."

That night, the whispers turned into words. "Elias," it said, the voice laced with a desperate longing. "Help me."

Driven by a morbid curiosity, I began to research the house's history. I learned about the family in the photographs. The man was a cruel and possessive patriarch, the woman, Eleanor, his trapped and tormented wife. The little girl, their daughter, died under mysterious circumstances. The townspeople whispered of foul play, of dark rituals and sacrifices.

The more I learned, the more the house seemed to close in on me. The temperature dropped, even in the summer heat. Doors would slam shut on their own, and objects moved when I wasn't looking. I started seeing things out of the corner of my eye – fleeting shadows, ghostly figures.

One evening, I found myself drawn to the basement. The air down there was thick and cold, and the darkness was absolute. As I descended the creaking stairs, the whispers intensified, becoming a cacophony of voices, all crying out in pain and despair.

In the center of the basement, I found a hidden room, its entrance concealed behind a crumbling brick wall. Inside, the air was heavy with the stench of decay and something else, something ancient and evil. In the middle of the room was a stone altar, stained with what looked like dried blood. And then I saw her.

A figure emerged from the shadows, her form translucent and shimmering. It was Eleanor. Her eyes, wide with terror and sorrow, locked onto mine. "He won't let me leave," she whispered, her voice a breath of icy air. "He's trapped us here, bound us to this house."

Suddenly, a presence filled the room, a malevolent force that made my blood run cold. The temperature plummeted, and the shadows twisted and writhed like living things. A deep, guttural voice echoed through the chamber, a voice that seemed to come from the very walls themselves. "She belongs to me," it growled. "And so will you."

I tried to run, but the house wouldn't let me. The walls seemed to shift and close in, the floorboards turned to quicksand. I was trapped, caught in the house's nightmare. Eleanor reached out to me, her touch like ice. "Help us," she pleaded. "Break the curse."

I don't know how, but somehow, I found the strength to resist. I focused on the image of the little girl, on the innocence that had been stolen. I shouted, my voice echoing through the darkness, "You will not have them! They are free!"

A blinding light filled the room, and the house shook violently. The malevolent presence shrieked in fury, and then, silence. When the light faded, Eleanor was gone. The oppressive atmosphere lifted, and the house felt…lighter.

I left the house the next day, never to return. I still hear the whispers sometimes, but they are different now. They are not cries of despair, but sighs of release. The house still stands on the hill, but it is no longer a skeletal hand, but an empty shell. The evil is gone, and the trapped souls are finally free. But I will never forget the horrors I witnessed, the echoes of the abyss that linger in my mind.

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sajid hasan

I am a writer. I like to write factual articles. If you like my articles, don't forget to subscribe my page on vocal media .Thank you.

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