Sixteen-year-old Ryan Carter had watched every ghost-hunting video YouTube had to offer. With a beat-up camera, a flashlight, and more courage than common sense, he decided to become a legend himself. One night, armed with just his backpack and a crowbar, he rowed a stolen kayak across the choppy waters of San Francisco Bay, making his way to the one place every ghost hunter feared and revered—Alcatraz.
The air was heavy with fog and salt, the old prison looming like a fossilized beast. He slipped through a rusted gate at the island’s edge, heart pounding as he made his way into the main cellblock. The silence was suffocating, broken only by the distant crash of waves. He clicked on his flashlight and began recording.
“Alright, guys,” he whispered into the camera. “It’s just past midnight. I’m officially inside Alcatraz. This is gonna be wild.”
Ryan moved through the empty corridors, narrating for his imaginary audience. He stopped at Cell Block D—solitary confinement. He shivered but pressed on. By 2:30 a.m., the battery on his flashlight had started to flicker, and the camera had frozen twice.
Then, at exactly 3:00 a.m., everything changed.
The temperature plummeted. A low hum vibrated through the walls, like distant chanting. Ryan turned toward the sound, and his breath caught in his throat. A shadow moved across the hallway, slow and dragging. He backed away, fumbling with his camera.
“Hello?” he called, voice cracking.
There was no response. Just the steady creak of metal and the soft echo of footsteps—too many footsteps.
A door slammed behind him. His flashlight went out completely. Ryan spun in the dark, heart hammering. Then, a whisper—right next to his ear.
“You shouldn’t be here.”
He screamed and bolted, slamming into walls and cell doors. Invisible hands clawed at his back. Something yanked his backpack, sending him sprawling onto the floor. His wrist twisted beneath him with a sickening pop.
Groaning, he tried to get up, but a sudden force hit him hard in the side of the face, knocking him against the bars. Pain blossomed in his cheek and temple. He gasped, blinking through tears.
Shapes flickered in the darkness—distorted faces, mouths frozen in silent screams. They closed in, reaching with rotted fingers. He crawled backward, dragging his useless wrist, limping through the halls.
One cell door stood open, its interior darker than the rest. Desperate, Ryan ducked inside and slammed it shut. Breathing heavily, he listened. The whispers grew distant, like the sea pulling back from the shore.
Then silence.
He tried the door.
Locked.
Panicked, Ryan yanked and twisted the bars, screamed for help, but nothing worked. No response. The cold returned, seeping into his bones. In the corner of the cell, he saw them—others. Pale, flickering outlines of men in old prison garb, watching him with hollow eyes.
“You’re one of us now,” one whispered.
Ryan screamed, pounding on the bars until his hands bled. Then the cell began to shrink—or at least, it felt that way. The shadows crept closer. One reached out and touched his shoulder.
Everything went black.
They found the kayak drifting near the shore two days later. Ryan’s body was discovered among the rocks, mutilated beyond recognition. His face was a mess of bruises, his wrist twisted unnaturally. His camera was never recovered.
The coroner’s report couldn’t explain the markings on his back—deep, jagged gashes that looked like old cell bar imprints.
Tour guides at Alcatraz still talk about Cell D-14. Sometimes, around 3:00 a.m., visitors hear pounding from inside. Screams. And if you stand too close to the bars, you might feel a hand reach out for yours.
And a voice, pleading.
“Please… help me get out.”
But no one ever opens that cell.
Because Ryan Carter never left it.
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