Beneath The Silence
Everyone Thought They Were Safe.

Chapter One:
The town of Hollow Pines wasn’t much—one main street, two stop signs, and enough pines to block out the sun. Most people stayed because they feared change more than the dark. But when children started disappearing, the darkness didn’t feel metaphorical anymore.
It started with the Grayson twins.
Halloween night. Laughter echoed between porch lights and pumpkin guts spilled on sidewalks. At 7:42 PM, Emma and Lily Grayson were seen stepping off the curb toward a pale blue camper parked at the edge of Maple Street.
By 8:00 PM, they were gone.
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Chapter Two:
Detective Claire Monroe was called in from the neighbouring county. Not because she was the best—but because the local sheriff had once lost his dog and she’d found it in a day. Apparently, that was enough to qualify her for a double abduction.
She arrived in Hollow Pines at dawn. Fog clung to the trees like secrets.
“They were here,” said Linda Grayson, voice shaking, finger pointing at an empty sidewalk.
Claire’s eyes narrowed at the words scratched in chalk next to where the girls had stood.
“Do you know where they go when the pines whisper?”
It didn’t feel like a prank.
It felt like a promise.
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Chapter Three:
Jacob Grayson wasn’t waiting for bureaucracy to bring back his daughters. He was a military vet, built from bone and vengeance. His hands had rebuilt fences and buried friends. He wasn’t going to sit in his living room and sip coffee while detectives handed out flyers.
By the second night, he had tracked down the camper.
It was abandoned in an old storage lot outside town—tires cracked, floor sticky, and a child’s sock caught in the door hinge.
He brought the man who owned it to his basement.
Bound. Gagged. Shaking.
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Chapter Four:
Claire was furious when she found out.
“You kidnapped a suspect?”
“He’s not a suspect. He’s the guy,” Jacob growled. “I found this.” He held up a tiny shoe—Lily’s, confirmed by her mother. “I’m not waiting for due process.”
But the man, Lester Quinn, had the mind of a child and the alibi of a grocery receipt timestamped at the moment of abduction. He cried when Claire questioned him. Not from fear. From confusion.
He didn’t understand why he was there.
“Where do they go when the pines whisper?” Claire asked him.
His eyes lit up.
He whispered, “They go underground.”
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Chapter Five:
Claire dug into the town’s history. Hollow Pines had a mine collapse back in ’62. Fourteen children had died in a school bus accident—swallowed by the earth. Only three bodies were recovered. The rest were said to be “resting in the roots.”
Urban legend? Maybe.
But then another child vanished.
No ransom. No blood. Just a feather placed in her bed.
Jacob descended further into madness. He hadn’t let Lester go. Instead, he’d started breaking him.
One finger at a time.
“You’re lying,” he would whisper. “And I’ll break you until the truth spills.”
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Chapter Six:
Claire’s investigation led her deep into town folklore.
A former priest spoke of the Whispering Pines, a tale told to keep children from the woods.
“They say the trees feed off silence. The quieter you are, the closer they come. And once they take one child, they want another. And another.”
Claire rolled her eyes—until she found a torn diary in an abandoned farmhouse with the following line:
“I can hear them calling. They want the little ones. I hear them scratching at night. I see the girls in my dreams. Help me. God, help me.”
The page was dated last week.
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Chapter Seven:
Jacob cracked Lester’s resolve.
Or maybe Lester simply broke.
“I didn’t take them,” he wept. “But I know where they went. I saw them. Under the trees. There’s a hole in the ground. A door with teeth.”
Claire followed the broken man’s directions. She found a rusted hatch half-buried under pine needles, behind the old bus route.
She called for backup.
No one answered.
So she descended alone.
The air was damp. The walls pulsed with tree roots. And then—scratching.
Faint. Steady.
Children’s fingers against stone.
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Chapter Eight:
The tunnel led to a room—a small one. Concrete walls and a single bulb swinging above.
And there they were.
The Grayson twins, curled into each other, barely breathing. A third girl beside them—missing since last fall.
They were alive. Terrified. Drugged.
But not alone.
Footsteps behind Claire.
The town sheriff.
His gun raised. His face blank.
“I couldn’t stop them,” he said. “The Pines need to feed. So I made a trade. The old, the forgotten—they whisper to me. I obey, and they let me live.”
“You’re insane,” Claire hissed.
“Maybe. But Hollow Pines survives.”
She shot him before he could fire.
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Chapter Nine:
Jacob held his daughters in trembling arms outside the tunnel. Claire emerged bloodied but standing.
Lester was released—his hands ruined, but his name cleared. He disappeared days later. No one blamed him.
The town never spoke of it again.
But some nights, when the wind passes through the pines just right, you can hear the echoes:
Laughter.
Whispers.
Scratching.
And a question no one wants answered:
What did the sheriff mean by “They let me live”?
Because someone—something—is still out there.
And it’s still hungry.
THE END.
About the Creator
Aria Writes
Whispers stitched into words. Stories born in silence. I write to capture the quiet moments—the ones that linger, echo, and remind us we’re human. From soft fiction to soul-deep reflections, you’ll find pieces here that speak to the heart.
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