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Alone Girl -A Tale of Solitude and Terror

Whispers in the Dark

By Am@n Khan Published 8 months ago 4 min read

The Whispering Shadows

A Tale of Solitude and Terror 😱

The old house on Maple Street stood alone, its paint peeling like dead skin, windows dark as empty eyes. Emily, twenty-two, moved in a week ago, seeking solitude after a brutal breakup. The rent was cheap, the silence golden—or so she thought. 🏚️

She unpacked her last box under the flicker of a single bulb, the air thick with dust. The house creaked, but old houses did that, right? She ignored the unease prickling her skin, blaming it on exhaustion. That night, she curled up in bed, the mattress sagging beneath her. The silence was too heavy, like a weight on her chest. Then, a whisper—soft, like a breath against her ear. “Emily…” 😶

She bolted upright, heart hammering. The room was empty, moonlight slicing through tattered curtains. Just the wind, she told herself, though the windows were shut tight. She didn’t sleep.

Morning brought no relief. The mirrors in the house—too many for a place this small—reflected her pale face, her eyes hollow. She avoided them, but their surfaces seemed to ripple when she passed, like water disturbed. In the kitchen, her coffee mug slid an inch across the counter. She stared, pulse racing. “I’m losing it,” she muttered, but her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the house. ☕

By noon, she needed air. The backyard was overgrown, weeds choking a rusted swing set. She sat on the porch, scrolling her phone, when she heard it again—a whisper, closer now. “Stay…” She spun around, but no one was there. The swing creaked, swaying slightly, though the air was still. Her phone buzzed, a text from an unknown number: You’re not alone. She dropped it, screen cracking on the wood. 📱💥

Back inside, she locked every door, checked every window. The house felt smaller, walls leaning in. She called her friend Sarah, but the line crackled, her voice cutting out. “Em, you okay? That place sounds creepy—” The call died. Emily’s hands shook as she redialed. No signal. The lights flickered, plunging her into dusk. 🔦

Night fell like a curtain. She lit candles, their flames trembling. The whispers grew louder, overlapping, a chorus of voices she couldn’t understand. They came from the walls, the floor, the mirrors. “Look… see…” She avoided her reflection, but curiosity clawed at her. In the hallway mirror, she glimpsed something behind her—a shadow, tall and thin, with no face. She screamed, stumbling back. The shadow was gone when she looked again, but the mirror showed her face twisted, eyes too wide, mouth stretched in a silent wail. 🪞😨

She ran to the bedroom, barricading the door with a dresser. The whispers followed, seeping through the wood. “You can’t leave…” Something scratched at the door, slow and deliberate, like nails on bone. She clutched a kitchen knife she’d grabbed earlier, its blade glinting in the candlelight. The scratching stopped, replaced by footsteps—heavy, uneven, circling the house. 👣

Her phone lit up, another text: Look behind you. She froze. The air grew colder, her breath visible. Slowly, she turned. Nothing. But the candle snuffed out, plunging her into darkness. The whispers became a scream, a single word: “MINE!” She swung the knife blindly, hitting nothing but air. The room shook, the walls groaning like the house itself was alive. 🕯️

She had to get out. Knife in hand, she shoved the dresser aside and ran for the front door. The knob wouldn’t turn. The windows wouldn’t break. The mirrors lined the walls now, more than before, reflecting endless Emilys, each one more distorted, their faces melting, eyes bleeding black. “Stay with us…” the voices chanted. She smashed a mirror, glass shattering, but the shards floated upward, forming a figure—the shadow, its form sharper now, limbs too long, fingers like claws. It reached for her. 🖤

Emily sprinted to the basement, the only place she hadn’t explored. The door slammed shut behind her, locking. The air was damp, the smell of rot choking her. In the dim light of her phone, she saw them—photos pinned to the walls, dozens of girls, all alone, all staring with dead eyes. Her face was there too, a polaroid she’d never taken, her expression blank. “You’re ours…” the whispers said, now inside her head. 📸

The shadow descended the stairs, its form filling the doorway. Emily backed into a corner, knife raised. “Leave me alone!” she screamed. The shadow tilted its head, as if amused. It didn’t speak, but the whispers did: “You were always alone.” The realization hit her—her breakup, her isolation, her choice to come here. The house hadn’t trapped her; she’d trapped herself. 😢

The shadow lunged. Emily slashed, but the blade passed through it like smoke. It wrapped around her, cold as death, and the world dissolved. The whispers stopped. The house was silent again.

Days later, a new tenant arrived—a girl, alone, unpacking under a flickering bulb. The mirrors gleamed, waiting. In the basement, a new photo hung on the wall. Emily’s face, eyes empty, smiled softly. The house whispered her name, but no one heard. 🏠

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Am@n Khan

I'm educational storyteller passionate about turning knowledge into engaging narratives.

I write about topics like science, history and life skills.

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