When Time Snapped in Half
When the world stopped ticking, one man discovered he was the crack running through time itself

They said it happened at precisely 3:03 p.m. The digital clocks froze, the analog ones stopped mid-tick, and the sky shifted into an impossible shade of amber. For a moment, no one moved. Then came the silence — not peaceful, but hollow, like the Earth had forgotten to breathe.
I was in the old city library when it happened, surrounded by shelves that smelled like dust and wisdom. The second hand on the grand clock above the doorway simply froze. My phone wouldn’t turn on. My heartbeat seemed to echo louder than usual, as if time itself had stopped counting it.
At first, I thought it was just a power failure. But then I saw the man across from me — suspended mid-step, a book falling from his hands but never touching the ground. It was as though someone had pressed pause on everything but me.
The Moment Time Broke
I ran outside, into a street that looked like a painting. Cars halted mid-turn, pigeons hung motionless in the air, and even the wind refused to move the flags on the buildings. A drop of rain hovered inches from the ground, catching the strange amber light like a piece of glass.
That was when I realized something terrifying — I was completely alone in motion.
It’s funny how we beg for time to stop when life overwhelms us. But when it finally does, the quiet is unbearable.
Hours—or maybe days—passed, but the sun never moved. Hunger didn’t come, nor thirst. The world had snapped in half: one part alive, one part frozen in eternity.
Searching for Signs
I wandered through the city, calling out to anyone, anything. My voice sounded heavy, muffled, as if even sound had grown tired. In the park, a group of children were locked in mid-laughter, bubbles frozen mid-air like tiny glass orbs. In a café, a cup of coffee hung mid-spill, its steam sculpted into fragile patterns.
Then, inside a clockmaker’s shop, I found something strange — a single pocket watch still ticking. It sat on the counter, its glass cracked, its rhythm steady.
I picked it up. The hands were moving backward.
The Voice in the Clock
I don’t know if it was madness or magic, but I heard a whisper: “You’re on borrowed time.”
The voice was faint, like the sound of wind through old gears.
The watch pulsed with warmth, and I felt something tug in my chest — like gravity, but deeper. The streets began to shimmer, and I saw flashes: people laughing, wars burning, oceans rising and falling. It was as if all of history was folding inward, collapsing into a single point.
Then the whisper again: “Someone broke the balance. Time doesn’t forgive theft.”
The Man in the Mirror
I followed the ticking sound through the frozen city until I reached the clock tower near the river. Inside, gears larger than cars stood motionless, dripping with oil and silence. At the top of the tower, I found him — my reflection in the glass of the giant clock face.
But it wasn’t just my reflection. It blinked.
He spoke without sound, his lips forming the words I already knew: “You tried to fix time.”
Memories surged — I was a physicist, working on temporal mapping, obsessed with capturing the exact moment when a person’s past and future intersect. My last experiment was supposed to be a small one: slow time down for a fraction of a second. Instead, I had shattered it.
The world had split between two halves — one where time continued, one where it froze — and I was the fracture point.
The Choice
The reflection raised a coin. “You have one choice left,” it mouthed. “Flip it.”
A coin — just like in ancient stories when fate needed deciding.
I flipped it. It spun endlessly, neither landing nor falling. And then, with a sound like glass breaking, everything moved again.
The Return
The sky returned to blue. The clocks resumed ticking. People blinked, unaware that eternity had just passed between two seconds. The world breathed again.
But I was different. My watch still ticked backward, and I could hear the faint echo of that whisper in my mind: “You can’t unbreak what’s been snapped.”
Sometimes, at 3:03 p.m., I see the light shift — just for a heartbeat — and I wonder if time is still cracked, waiting for another careless hand to touch it.
Because when time snapped in half, it didn’t just freeze the world. It revealed something terrifying and beautiful:
that all our lives are just fragile seconds, held together by chance.
About the Creator
LUNA EDITH
Writer, storyteller, and lifelong learner. I share thoughts on life, creativity, and everything in between. Here to connect, inspire, and grow — one story at a time.




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