The Traveler
The Utopia or Dystopia of "The Great Consciousness"
๐ ๐ง๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ญ ๐ข ๐ง๐ข๐ช๐ญ๐ถ๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ฃ๐ณ๐ข๐ช๐ฏ ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ด๐ฐ๐ณ.
๐ ๐ฉ๐ข๐ท๐ฆ ๐ข ๐ด๐ต๐ณ๐ข๐ฏ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ด๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฅ ๐ข๐ด ๐ช๐ง ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ฆ'๐ด ๐ข ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ฎ๐ช๐ฏ๐ต ๐ญ๐ฐ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ช๐ฏ๐ด๐ช๐ฅ๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ฃ๐ณ๐ข๐ช๐ฏ. ๐๐ต ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ข๐ฎ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ช๐ฎ๐ฆ, ๐ ๐ง๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ญ ๐ข๐ด ๐ช๐ง ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ฎ๐ช๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ฉ๐ข๐ด ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฑ๐ต๐ช๐ฆ๐ฅ, ๐บ๐ฆ๐ต ๐ ๐ด๐ต๐ช๐ญ๐ญ ๐ฉ๐ข๐ท๐ฆ ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ณ๐ช๐ฆ๐ด ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฏ๐ญ๐ฐ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ช๐ฏ๐ง๐ฐ๐ณ๐ฎ๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ.
๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ช๐ด ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ช๐ด๐ฆ? ๐๐ต ๐ญ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฌ๐ด ๐ญ๐ช๐ฌ๐ฆ ๐ฐ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ณ๐ข๐ฅ๐ช๐ฐ ๐ด๐ต๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ค . . . ๐ฃ๐ถ๐ต ๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ค๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ ๐ฑ๐ฐ๐ด๐ด๐ช๐ฃ๐ญ๐บ ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต? ๐โ๐ท๐ฆ ๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ข๐ณ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฐ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ณ๐ข๐ฅ๐ช๐ฐ.
What looked like an information dump was really an expansion in memory capacity.
Suddenly everything lit up. Mark felt a stinging sensitivity in his eyes, but he managed to attenuate the intensity of the light that entered his eyes just by thinking about it. He normally does it without problem, but this time it seemed a bit complicated.
๐๐ด ๐ช๐ต ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ณ๐ฐ๐ณ ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ง๐ช๐ญ๐ฆ ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ท๐ช๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ?
There was something in the video, something familiar, even though the face and voice were distorted. Mark decided to re-watch the old video at the risk of having that strange feeling again.
๐๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ช๐ต ๐ช๐ด!
That man speaking in the video was wearing the same heart-shaped charm that Kathy made for him.
๐๐ข๐บ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ข๐ธ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ท๐ช๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ค๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ช๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ช๐ต, ๐ฃ๐ถ๐ต ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ตโ๐ด ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ช๐ณ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ค๐ข๐ถ๐ด๐ฆ ๐ด๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฏ'๐ต ๐ธ๐ข๐ต๐ค๐ฉ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ฏ๐ฅ๐ด ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ฐ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ท๐ช๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ด - ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ข๐ด๐ต ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ฆ ๐ง๐ณ๐ฐ๐ฎ 414 ๐บ๐ฆ๐ข๐ณ๐ด ๐ข๐จ๐ฐ.
โHi Kathy,โ Mark says, connecting to her through the chip in his brain.
โThe design of the heart-shaped locket you made for me, where did you get it from?โ
โHi Mark. Itโs an original design.โ
โI wanted to make something special for you for our anniversary, so I searched online to see if there was anything like it in the world. I couldnโt even find anything remotely like it in archeology databases. Why do you ask, love? Did you see something like it?โ
At this time, there was no need to lie. But for some strange reason, Mark knew he shouldnโt tell the truth.
โNo hon, it's just curiosity. Talk to you later, bye.โ
๐ ๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐จ๐ฆ๐ต ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ต ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ฑ๐ญ๐ข๐ค๐ฆ.
Mark grabbed his jacket and what was left of his coffee. As he left the cafeteria, he began to feel that he understood everything much more than before.
Itโs the year 2432 and the world seems to have reached โperfection,โ but at what cost?
Since 2033, a powerful artificial intelligence has managed to convince humanity that the only way to save us from extinction was for us to let it guide us. It gave us the guidelines to follow in order to preserve our species. The solution, according to this superior intelligence we created ourselves, was to implant a chip in our brains.
This chip would be very similar to the technology already widely accepted and used for hearing problems, but would allow us to connect and achieve empathy with each other. It would create a collective consciousness, with access to all of the information on the worldโs computer servers - without degrees, without levels, and without limits.
Or so it was believed.
The human race almost became extinct after the last great war of 2031, a war unleashed by a country in North Asia and then joined by other countries in rapid succession. What happened in 2019 was just a test. Planet Earth had become a large cage, and humans became guinea pigs.
๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ช๐ด ๐ฉ๐ข๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ฆ?
Indeed, Mark decided to do a test and began to find new files in places where there were only a few before. The place he looked was in one that had been exciting and mysterious for a long time, one that was related to the video he saw when he first had this strange sensation.
๐๐ช๐ฎ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ณ๐ข๐ท๐ฆ๐ญ.
Before, there were only a few million files available overall, but now the information at his fingertips was almost incalculable. All this as a result of that strange video of the man with a distorted voice and face saying he was a time traveler who had reached the year 2018.
29 year-old Mark Dickenson knew of nothing but a near-perfect world. He was a creator of science fiction stories in a time where no one wrote with pen and paper, but where the arts were as important as science. โThe Great Consciousness,โ as the supreme artificial intelligence directing the world was known, had long since realized the importance of the arts for the existence and survival of the human race - alongside science, technology, engineering and mathematics.
This powerful โAIโ managed to understand the importance of things that would seem impossible for a logic machine and has effectively became a protective mother of humanity. Or perhaps, a scientist running tests and trials.
But whether an overly protective mother or a cruel scientist, limiting freedom of thought and free will was perceived as necessary for a humanity that almost ended itself through their poor decision-making, their selfishness and stupid need for the supremacy of some groups over others.
And free will was practically non-existent. It was obsolete.
As Mark stepped in his electric vehicle, he noticed that people started to look at him. It was not usual.
โPlease stop, we need to talk. Youโre putting the human race at risk.โ
Mark heard this soft and feminine voice of "The Great Consciousness" in his mind - a mix between the maternal and sensual. He ignored her and realized that he could block her hold on him. Pressing down on the accelerator, he broke through the others trying unsuccessfully to block him with their own vehicle.
A chase began, and in pursuit Mark began to understand how his access to everything allowed him to break the limits imposed on all electric vehicles by this . . . artificial intelligence.
โSorry, I need to understand all this information,โ Mark responded, then disconnected.
๐ ๐ฅ๐ช๐ฅ๐ฏโ๐ต ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ ๐ค๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ฅ๐ฐ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ด.
When disconnected, โThe Great Consciousnessโ could not access his thoughts or his location, yet he still had access to everything. After several hours of driving, Mark arrived somewhere far from any city and town. He began to analyze and process all of the information he could access in mere seconds to the point he understood, beginning with time travel.
๐๐ต ๐ฉ๐ข๐ด ๐ข๐ญ๐ธ๐ข๐บ๐ด ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ฑ๐ฐ๐ด๐ด๐ช๐ฃ๐ญ๐ฆ!
It was so simple that nobody imagined what the formula was. No machines were needed, no space-time vortices . . . only quantum projection.
Mark closed his eyes and showed up in 2018. His mind couldn't believe what just happened. Everything around him was the same, but different at the same time. He was still connected, but he did not feel the presence of โThe Great Consciousness.โ As he accessed the network, he realized that he was indeed in the year that he thought he wanted to be - on October 11th, to be precise.
His vehicle was missing.
Mark began walking towards the highway. He tracked all the mobile devices, analyzes the users, and found a couple approaching, coming to a stop.
โWant a ride?โ The driver asks kindly.
Understanding that he is far from everything and sensing they are reliable, he responded with a โthanksโ as he opened the back door and stepped into the car.
โWhere are you going?โ Asks the driver, a man of about 40 years with a robust but pleasant face. Next to him sat a slim woman who seemed disagreeable with having given a ride to a stranger.
โPlease drop me off in the next city.โ
Even with all the knowledge in the world, and in some others, Mark had no idea where to go or what to do at that very moment.
โIt looks like itโs going to rain,โ the driver said, trying to make conversation after a short while of uncomfortable silence.
โNice to meet you, my name is James,โ he continued. For some strange reason, he felt comfortable with Markโs presence.
โMark, nice to meet you,โ he responded cordially as he searched for information about whatโs happening this year.
โYouโre not from here, right? I canโt identify your accent.โ James said without taking his eyes off the road.
โYou're right, Iโm from a far away place.โ
Seeing how the world is going up to that moment and knowing what was coming shortly, Mark now understood the few probabilities of so many, including the human race.
โThe Great Consciousnessโ exists. It already existed at this time, but it had not wanted to intervene of course. It just waited for humanity to realize the low probability of its survival.
Mark accessed a reservation page online, created an identity with ease, a personal profile with false bank account, and made a reservation for a hotel room.
โCan you drop me off here please?โ
The car stopped and Mark cordially said goodbye as he walked towards his hotel. He needed to stretch his legs.
On the way he stopped at a cafรฉ to ordered a latte with an extra shot of espresso and skim milk. He drank it and went on his way. In the hotel, after investigating and seeing a wide range of possibilities from his actions, he realized what he should do. But first, he needed to rest. In spite of everything, he is not a machine - not quite. His organic body needed to recharge, his body needed to rest.
Lying down, just before falling asleep, he thought of Kathy, his life partner. He missed her but could not get in touch with her although he knew how to do it. After all, there was a video machine mounted on a platform.
๐๐ถ๐ต ๐ช๐ต ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ณ๐ช๐ด๐ฌ๐บ ๐ง๐ฐ๐ณ ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ง๐ถ๐ต๐ถ๐ณ๐ฆ. โ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐๐ณ๐ฆ๐ข๐ต ๐๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ด๐ค๐ช๐ฐ๐ถ๐ด๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ด๐ดโ ๐ฎ๐ถ๐ด๐ต ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ช๐ต๐ฐ๐ณ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ณ๐บ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ด๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ด.
He knew that even with the knowledge he had of time travel, โThe Great Consciousnessโ cannot come. The organic body is fundamental to make space-time displacement.
โGood morning my love,โ Kathy says to him.
But it was only a waking dream. Mark went to the bathroom, took a shower, and readied himself for the day. He wanted to see with his own eyes what the past is like, and he needed to buy a cellphone to do what he knew he needed to do.
Thatโs why he traveled to the past. The people of the future need to wake up, live their own lives and make their own decisions - even if this leads to extinction - itโs the natural course of things.
โ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐๐ณ๐ฆ๐ข๐ต ๐๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ด๐ค๐ช๐ฐ๐ถ๐ด๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ด๐ดโ ๐ช๐ด ๐ญ๐ช๐ฌ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ค๐ช๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต๐ช๐ด๐ต ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ญ๐ฆ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ฅ โ๐๐ถ๐ณ๐ข๐ด๐ด๐ช๐ค ๐๐ข๐ณ๐ฌ.โ
Dinosaurs already lived their time, and Mark had to disappear at his appointed time. Humanity needs to move to its next spiritual level of existence after the physical plane to transcend. As long as that does not happen, our souls will continue to be tied to this physical plane.
Mark bought the cellphone he needed to record himself. He distorted his face and voice to be undetectable by โThe Great Consciousnessโ and sent it.
But not before giving another kiss to his heart-shaped locket.



Comments (1)
I loved it. Itโs refreshing to read something that came from you. Please contact me Jonell. Surely there is some place in your life for meโฆ.if but only letters on a screenโฆ.