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The Traveler

The Utopia or Dystopia of "The Great Consciousness"

By JoNell HomerPublished 5 years ago โ€ข 8 min read
The Traveler
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๐˜ ๐˜ง๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ ๐˜ข ๐˜ง๐˜ข๐˜ช๐˜ญ๐˜ถ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ.

๐˜ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ท๐˜ฆ ๐˜ข ๐˜ด๐˜ต๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜จ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ข๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ ๐˜ข๐˜ด ๐˜ช๐˜ง ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ'๐˜ด ๐˜ข ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ฎ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ต ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ๐˜จ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ช๐˜ฏ. ๐˜ˆ๐˜ต ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ข๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ, ๐˜ ๐˜ง๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ ๐˜ข๐˜ด ๐˜ช๐˜ง ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ด ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฑ๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ, ๐˜บ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต ๐˜ ๐˜ด๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ท๐˜ฆ ๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ช๐˜ฆ๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ๐˜ฏ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ง๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ฎ๐˜ข๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ.

๐˜ž๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฆ? ๐˜๐˜ต ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฌ๐˜ด ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฌ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ ๐˜ด๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ค . . . ๐˜ฃ๐˜ถ๐˜ต ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ ๐˜ค๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ด๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜บ ๐˜ฌ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ต? ๐˜โ€™๐˜ท๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ฅ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ.

What looked like an information dump was really an expansion in memory capacity.

Suddenly everything lit up. Mark felt a stinging sensitivity in his eyes, but he managed to attenuate the intensity of the light that entered his eyes just by thinking about it. He normally does it without problem, but this time it seemed a bit complicated.

๐˜๐˜ด ๐˜ช๐˜ต ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ช๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ท๐˜ช๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฐ?

There was something in the video, something familiar, even though the face and voice were distorted. Mark decided to re-watch the old video at the risk of having that strange feeling again.

๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ช๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ด!

That man speaking in the video was wearing the same heart-shaped charm that Kathy made for him.

๐˜”๐˜ข๐˜บ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ข๐˜ธ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ท๐˜ช๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฐ ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ค๐˜ฐ๐˜ฑ๐˜ช๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ช๐˜ต, ๐˜ฃ๐˜ถ๐˜ต ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ตโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ธ๐˜ฆ๐˜ช๐˜ณ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ถ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ฏ'๐˜ต ๐˜ธ๐˜ข๐˜ต๐˜ค๐˜ฉ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฌ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ๐˜ด ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ฐ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ท๐˜ช๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฐ๐˜ด - ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ณ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฎ 414 ๐˜บ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜จ๐˜ฐ.

โ€œHi Kathy,โ€ Mark says, connecting to her through the chip in his brain.

โ€œThe design of the heart-shaped locket you made for me, where did you get it from?โ€

โ€œHi Mark. Itโ€™s an original design.โ€

โ€œI wanted to make something special for you for our anniversary, so I searched online to see if there was anything like it in the world. I couldnโ€™t even find anything remotely like it in archeology databases. Why do you ask, love? Did you see something like it?โ€

At this time, there was no need to lie. But for some strange reason, Mark knew he shouldnโ€™t tell the truth.

โ€œNo hon, it's just curiosity. Talk to you later, bye.โ€

๐˜ ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜จ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ต ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ญ๐˜ข๐˜ค๐˜ฆ.

Mark grabbed his jacket and what was left of his coffee. As he left the cafeteria, he began to feel that he understood everything much more than before.

Itโ€™s the year 2432 and the world seems to have reached โ€œperfection,โ€ but at what cost?

Since 2033, a powerful artificial intelligence has managed to convince humanity that the only way to save us from extinction was for us to let it guide us. It gave us the guidelines to follow in order to preserve our species. The solution, according to this superior intelligence we created ourselves, was to implant a chip in our brains.

This chip would be very similar to the technology already widely accepted and used for hearing problems, but would allow us to connect and achieve empathy with each other. It would create a collective consciousness, with access to all of the information on the worldโ€™s computer servers - without degrees, without levels, and without limits.

Or so it was believed.

The human race almost became extinct after the last great war of 2031, a war unleashed by a country in North Asia and then joined by other countries in rapid succession. What happened in 2019 was just a test. Planet Earth had become a large cage, and humans became guinea pigs.

๐˜ž๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ฑ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ?

Indeed, Mark decided to do a test and began to find new files in places where there were only a few before. The place he looked was in one that had been exciting and mysterious for a long time, one that was related to the video he saw when he first had this strange sensation.

๐˜›๐˜ช๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ต๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ.

Before, there were only a few million files available overall, but now the information at his fingertips was almost incalculable. All this as a result of that strange video of the man with a distorted voice and face saying he was a time traveler who had reached the year 2018.

29 year-old Mark Dickenson knew of nothing but a near-perfect world. He was a creator of science fiction stories in a time where no one wrote with pen and paper, but where the arts were as important as science. โ€œThe Great Consciousness,โ€ as the supreme artificial intelligence directing the world was known, had long since realized the importance of the arts for the existence and survival of the human race - alongside science, technology, engineering and mathematics.

This powerful โ€œAIโ€ managed to understand the importance of things that would seem impossible for a logic machine and has effectively became a protective mother of humanity. Or perhaps, a scientist running tests and trials.

But whether an overly protective mother or a cruel scientist, limiting freedom of thought and free will was perceived as necessary for a humanity that almost ended itself through their poor decision-making, their selfishness and stupid need for the supremacy of some groups over others.

And free will was practically non-existent. It was obsolete.

As Mark stepped in his electric vehicle, he noticed that people started to look at him. It was not usual.

โ€œPlease stop, we need to talk. Youโ€™re putting the human race at risk.โ€

Mark heard this soft and feminine voice of "The Great Consciousness" in his mind - a mix between the maternal and sensual. He ignored her and realized that he could block her hold on him. Pressing down on the accelerator, he broke through the others trying unsuccessfully to block him with their own vehicle.

A chase began, and in pursuit Mark began to understand how his access to everything allowed him to break the limits imposed on all electric vehicles by this . . . artificial intelligence.

โ€œSorry, I need to understand all this information,โ€ Mark responded, then disconnected.

๐˜ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ช๐˜ฅ๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ต ๐˜ฌ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ธ ๐˜ ๐˜ค๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ด.

When disconnected, โ€œThe Great Consciousnessโ€ could not access his thoughts or his location, yet he still had access to everything. After several hours of driving, Mark arrived somewhere far from any city and town. He began to analyze and process all of the information he could access in mere seconds to the point he understood, beginning with time travel.

๐˜๐˜ต ๐˜ฉ๐˜ข๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ธ๐˜ข๐˜บ๐˜ด ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ด๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฃ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ!

It was so simple that nobody imagined what the formula was. No machines were needed, no space-time vortices . . . only quantum projection.

Mark closed his eyes and showed up in 2018. His mind couldn't believe what just happened. Everything around him was the same, but different at the same time. He was still connected, but he did not feel the presence of โ€œThe Great Consciousness.โ€ As he accessed the network, he realized that he was indeed in the year that he thought he wanted to be - on October 11th, to be precise.

His vehicle was missing.

Mark began walking towards the highway. He tracked all the mobile devices, analyzes the users, and found a couple approaching, coming to a stop.

โ€œWant a ride?โ€ The driver asks kindly.

Understanding that he is far from everything and sensing they are reliable, he responded with a โ€œthanksโ€ as he opened the back door and stepped into the car.

โ€œWhere are you going?โ€ Asks the driver, a man of about 40 years with a robust but pleasant face. Next to him sat a slim woman who seemed disagreeable with having given a ride to a stranger.

โ€œPlease drop me off in the next city.โ€

Even with all the knowledge in the world, and in some others, Mark had no idea where to go or what to do at that very moment.

โ€œIt looks like itโ€™s going to rain,โ€ the driver said, trying to make conversation after a short while of uncomfortable silence.

โ€œNice to meet you, my name is James,โ€ he continued. For some strange reason, he felt comfortable with Markโ€™s presence.

โ€œMark, nice to meet you,โ€ he responded cordially as he searched for information about whatโ€™s happening this year.

โ€œYouโ€™re not from here, right? I canโ€™t identify your accent.โ€ James said without taking his eyes off the road.

โ€œYou're right, Iโ€™m from a far away place.โ€

Seeing how the world is going up to that moment and knowing what was coming shortly, Mark now understood the few probabilities of so many, including the human race.

โ€œThe Great Consciousnessโ€ exists. It already existed at this time, but it had not wanted to intervene of course. It just waited for humanity to realize the low probability of its survival.

Mark accessed a reservation page online, created an identity with ease, a personal profile with false bank account, and made a reservation for a hotel room.

โ€œCan you drop me off here please?โ€

The car stopped and Mark cordially said goodbye as he walked towards his hotel. He needed to stretch his legs.

On the way he stopped at a cafรฉ to ordered a latte with an extra shot of espresso and skim milk. He drank it and went on his way. In the hotel, after investigating and seeing a wide range of possibilities from his actions, he realized what he should do. But first, he needed to rest. In spite of everything, he is not a machine - not quite. His organic body needed to recharge, his body needed to rest.

Lying down, just before falling asleep, he thought of Kathy, his life partner. He missed her but could not get in touch with her although he knew how to do it. After all, there was a video machine mounted on a platform.

๐˜‰๐˜ถ๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ต ๐˜ธ๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ญ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ณ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฌ๐˜บ ๐˜ง๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ถ๐˜ต๐˜ถ๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ. โ€œ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜Ž๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜Š๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ค๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ด๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ดโ€ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ถ๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ช๐˜ต๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ๐˜บ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ด๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด.

He knew that even with the knowledge he had of time travel, โ€œThe Great Consciousnessโ€ cannot come. The organic body is fundamental to make space-time displacement.

โ€œGood morning my love,โ€ Kathy says to him.

But it was only a waking dream. Mark went to the bathroom, took a shower, and readied himself for the day. He wanted to see with his own eyes what the past is like, and he needed to buy a cellphone to do what he knew he needed to do.

Thatโ€™s why he traveled to the past. The people of the future need to wake up, live their own lives and make their own decisions - even if this leads to extinction - itโ€™s the natural course of things.

โ€œ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜Ž๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ๐˜ข๐˜ต ๐˜Š๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ด๐˜ค๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ถ๐˜ด๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ดโ€ ๐˜ช๐˜ด ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฌ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ค๐˜ช๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ญ๐˜ฆ๐˜จ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ โ€œ๐˜‘๐˜ถ๐˜ณ๐˜ข๐˜ด๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ค ๐˜—๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ฌ.โ€

Dinosaurs already lived their time, and Mark had to disappear at his appointed time. Humanity needs to move to its next spiritual level of existence after the physical plane to transcend. As long as that does not happen, our souls will continue to be tied to this physical plane.

Mark bought the cellphone he needed to record himself. He distorted his face and voice to be undetectable by โ€œThe Great Consciousnessโ€ and sent it.

But not before giving another kiss to his heart-shaped locket.

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  • Johnnie Lee Maxwell4 years ago

    I loved it. Itโ€™s refreshing to read something that came from you. Please contact me Jonell. Surely there is some place in your life for meโ€ฆ.if but only letters on a screenโ€ฆ.

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