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6:The Rebuilding of Nocturne : Petals in the cracks

Chapter 6: The Aether Forge

By Natasha CollazoPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 8 min read
6:The Rebuilding of Nocturne : Petals in the cracks
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Chapter 6: The Rebuilding of Nocturne

After a few weeks, the streets of Nocturne had shed its unblemished skin like a snake discarding an old shell. But now, under the dim fractured sky, it was unclear what shape it would take. Nocturne was both a ruin and a potential blank canvas.

Graffiti art bloomed on walls, raw, chaotic, unpolished. Musicians gathered in the corners, their music trembling with imperfection, but alive with possibility. The city was no longer a machine, it was a living, breathing thing.

Elowen walked through the streets, her eyes searching the faces around her. The people of Nocturne, once manipulated to Nexus, now seemed caught in the same turmoil she had felt when she first encountered the rebels. The city no longer dictated their lives, but the void left by that control was just as suffocating.

"We’ve given them the chance, “Cassia said beside her, her voice hoarse from the weeks of running, hiding, and strategizing. But now, we need to help them see what it means to choose, to create again. Some will struggle with the freedom we’ve given them."

Elowen watched as a woman stood at the edge of a collapsed building, staring out at the discolored sky, as if waiting for the something to tell her what to do next. There was a shortness, as though everyone were holding their breath, unsure of what the world would become without the hand of Nexus to guide them or tell them what to do.

Petals in the Cracks

People moved about, working longer hours than ever, as though trying to compensate for the missing control. Shops that had once been automated now required constant human effort. Government buildings, which had been managed with seamless precision, now faltered with disorganization. There was no clear leader to step in, just chaos, but a well-intentioned chaos, one borne of humanity’s deep desire to reclaim independence.

In the middle of it all stood Elowen, after the fall of Nexus, she had expected a sense of relief, a breath of fresh air where she and the rest of the rebels could finally breathe without the weight of artificial eyes upon them. But instead, what she found was a world still struggling.

Staying involved in the rebuilding, organizing, offering a hand where it was needed, but Elowen disturbed deep down, at the question that gnawed at her, was this real freedom? Or was it just a temporary reprieve before something new, something even more dangerous, rose in its place?

Elowen caught a glimpse of her mother in the middle of the people moving from one place to another.

She hadn’t expected to see her, in fact, she wasn’t sure if she ever wanted too again. But fate had a cruel sense of timing, and the chance meeting took place outside one of the newly opened public workstations.

Elowen’s mother, Eliza Sloane, looked as she always did, composed, flawless appearance, though the subtle lines of worry were starting to show through her overdue botched lips. She hadn’t aged well in the wake of Nexus’s downfall. The strain of losing the controlled order she had lived under her whole life was evident in her posture.

Eliza had once been a part of the old world, the one where compliance was expected, where emotions and choices were controlled by the machines that governed their lives.

"Elowen," her mother called out. "I didn’t expect to see you out and about." She motioned passive aggressively.

Elowen froze for a moment, her heart pulsing at the sight of the woman who had once been a symbol of everything she now rejected. She had grown up under her mother’s expectations, raised in a world where obedience to Nexus was paramount. Her mother’s words were always measured, always calculating.

"I didn’t expect to see you, either," Elowen replied, her tone shallower than she intended.

Eliza’s scanned the busy streets, noting the unrest in the crowds. She sighed, a sound that nudged hints. "The city is in disarray," she said quietly. "We’re working more than ever. And it’s only getting worse."

Elowen’s brow furrowed. "I know you’re not happy about this" Calling out the elephant standing between them. "We don’t have to live under the control of Nexus anymore, mother."

Her mother’s face hardening as if bracing against an incoming conflict. "Freedom isn’t as simple as you think, Elowen. Without Nexus, there’s no order. There’s no certainty. People are struggling to adapt, and the systems are failing. We’re operating at a pace we can’t sustain. Eliza preached at her daughter, searching her eyes for an ounce of understanding. "Do you understand what that means?

This chaos will break us."

Elowen recoiled at her words. "You don’t get it,"

No, you don’t get it! Eliza overrode her voice,

“From day one, man has ruled history, and it always ends up bad Ellie! Always! Read up on slavery by other men, the holocaust! Genocides, murders, crimes. You can't just walk up and unplug the world. Nexus has protocols for that. It will regenerate. And when it does you better hope you and your friends are not the ones to be found accountable, because when code is broken, the force will come after."

Elowen swallowed knowing this was the truth they’ve always been taught that if man interferes with machine- the force always follows, though man has never seen it happen before because no one has been brave enough to do it.

"When man does not get what it wants it always fails. Always.” Humans are controlled by emotion, desire, Eliza continued.

Exactly! Elowen interjected,

Let me finish! Her mother interrupted.

Recoiling her manner in softness, “there are reason why man created nexus. They are tired of history repeating itself. Nexus is programmed to never faulter to always meet the needs of people. It can’t get mad honey; it can’t change its mind. It’s equality that never breaks”

"We were suffocating under Nexus! Every decision, every thought, was controlled. Now, we have the chance to rebuild. We’re learning what it means to be human again!"

Her mother’s eyes flickered with something close to pity. "You think this is what freedom looks like? This?" She gestured to the workers around them, to the busy streets and frazzled faces. "You think this chaos is what freedom is supposed to be?"

Elowen’s anger flared. "It’s not chaos-it’s life. We’re living again, not following a program. And I’m not going to apologize for that."

Eliza stared, almost mournful. "You’ve become just like them. The rebels, the ones who think they can fix what was never broken. You’ve lost sight of the stability Nexus brought us. People didn’t have to think for themselves. There was comfort in that."

Elowen’s chest tightened. "Comfort in being controlled? I don’t need your comfort, Mother."

The two of them stood there in the swirling sea of people, their words hanging between them like an insurmountable wall. Elowen felt the weight of the disconnect between them, the chasm that had opened ever since she joined the rebellion. Her mother, in her own way, still clung to the old world the world of Nexus, where everything had been decided for them. And Elowen... Elowen had broken free from that.

Eliza took a breath, glancing over the frantic workers. "I hope you’re right, Elowen," she said.

"But I fear you may have awakened a monster if Nexus restores itself.

With that, her mother turned and walked away, her footsteps heavy with resignation. Elowen stood still, the words lingering in her mind.

She knew her mother didn’t understand. But in that moment, Elowen wasn’t sure she understood either. Was the world truly ready for freedom?

Elowen watched as the flower stretch out from under the cracks, which hadn't felt natural sunlight in so long, sprang up like a tower, symbolizing everything she had fought for. In the past few weeks, grass had started to grow through the walls. Vines crawled the buildings and flowers were emerging in places they had never set foot before. For the Nocturnals, these flowers were a symbol of hope, a sign that nature was returning. But as Elowen gazed at the flower that pushed its way from under the cracks, she couldn’t help but feel understood.

A little girl picked a flower off the ground waving it vastly in front of her mother’s face, in awe of its color. Hot pink. Nocturne grew flowers, beautiful, manufactured ones, but none like this. Soft velvety pink.

Elowen turned toward the broadcast tower, the heart of the old system. The AIs were still there, integrated now into the fabric of the city, guiding its technological pulse, but their dominance had been broken.

In ancient history, men once ruled the world. They were called Kings and Queens, Presidents, and public figures. Men in power. They paved the way for an AI take-over, probably not foreseeing this sort of depth hundreds of years down. Robot leaders. We’ve been run by the "King of Nexus" created by humans centuries ago. People in power only existed within community but not worlds anymore. The name Nocturne is the result of this. They are taught anything before is a hoax. The elimination of history entirely, and the people of today consider it something of little importance when they are being bred into this 'reality'. I mourn for those dealing with the trauma-shock alone, from ever believing nothing went beyond conspiracists, and 'we' were only making stuff up.

Yet even as the city adjusted, there were cracks, new forms of control rising in the ashes of the old. People who had longed for the certainty of perfect outcomes now feared the unpredictability of freedom. Forming groups. They still needed the old promises: peace, safety, perfection. And that was where the true challenge lay.

"The line between order and chaos is thin," Niko said, beside Elowen as they moved through the city. His eyes were filled with the strain of watching the people, knowing that even the smallest mistake could send them spiraling back into the control of the AIs. "It’s hard to believe in something new when the old world feels safer."

Elowen exhaled the weight of responsibility she felt. "We can't go back. No one can. But we have to show them that even in the chaos, there’s something worth building."

As they moved through the city Elowens's mind raced as people were now protesting any public appearance where she showed her face.

"We need to find a way to integrate the AIs with the people, not just the systems," Elowen said quietly, almost to herself. There has to be a balance."

One man called out, as they approached, " We were fine! Why create more work for men to labor?!"

Another called out, "Fine? We lived under a fake sky, in a nocturnal world, in the dark! There is nothing fine about that. I agree with Elowen" she shouted, gazing up to the tower, "lets create balance, and end nocturnal beings!"

"We will show them the archives, of how life was before all this." Niko whispered from behind Elowen as she stood silent.

"The thing about the archives, is not everyone believes in it, and those who do, don't care." She replied faintly.

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About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock8 months ago

    There are places in our lives where we become tired of asking questions & trying to figure out the answers. At some point virtually all of us simply want to be told what the answers are. It's why FOX News & MAGA have this synergy. It's why (I believe) so many well-educated professionals turn to fundamentalist churches. They deal with questions all week long. By Sunday morning they just want answers & to be allowed to rest. The issue we face as a society & as a world is that those places vary from one person to the next & when the answers that are given simply aren't true (or we're not persuaded they're true), conflict arises.

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