I was sitting on the sand a bit far from you, as you're walking in the water. I couldn't help staring at your amazing body, but I didn't expect you to turn around and notice. To not make it weird, I walk towards you acting as if it didn't matter. "Hey hun, how's the water?"
I decided to mess with you a bit after spotting you staring. “The water’s good. How’s the view?” I tease.
"Oh, hum, really great actually. Yeah, I love it here. Hope I'm not ruining your family vacation though, I feel like a total burden!"
“You’re not a burden at all. Don’t worry about it, enjoy yourself.” I try to reassure you. “Honestly, I’m glad you’re here. You’re good company.”
I smile softly and shrug my shoulders. "I don't know. Thanks for being so kind. I didn't think my best friend's sister would be so nice and cute."
I was a little bit stunned that you called me cute. “You think I’m.cute?”
"Oh I mean- yeah, of course you are! I shouldn't have said it, like that's already so obvious!"
“No, no. It’s okay. It’s really sweet that you find me cute. I was teasing you just before about looking, but I really don’t mind if you look. It’s honestly a little flattering.” I admit.
"What? I wasn't looking at all, hun, flattering? Really? You wouldn't mind it and I haven't, ended up looking sometimes?"
“Oh come on. We both know you were looking. I said, I really, honestly don’t mind. I’m not upset that you looked at my ass more than a few times.” I reassure you.
"All right. I was so afraid you'd think I'm some kind of weirdo. I promise I'm not. I just couldn't help it- you have a stunning body, Hailee."
“I don’t think you’re weird. Just shy, well you were shy. You’ve very quickly warmed up to me, haven’t you? It’s bold to tell me I’m cute. I appreciate it.”
"I'm still a bit shy. If your brother finds out about this he's definitely gonna kill me too. But I'm glad you don't mind it."
“Then, let’s not let him find out. He shouldn’t have any say over this, but if he has a problem, then let’s keep this quiet.”
"Thank you. I really didn't expect you to be so casual about this actually. But it's nice. I couldn't help admiring your amazing body."
“Y’know, you are being very complimentary of my looks. Where did this confidence come from? Or are you just a very honest person when you feel like it?”
"I think I just got really excited knowing I can look at you and not be afraid. You make me feel like I can indeed tell you what I feel after all."
“That’s good. I’m glad you can tell me how you feel. Since you were looking at me so much, what do you think of me then?” I tease.
"Oh God I can definitely tell you you're the best, most stunning and hottest girl I've ever looked at, and that says a lot. I mean that sounded better in my head. I'm not a weirdo that watches everyone."
I giggle at your mistake. “You’re sweet. I like that about you.” I rub your back and pull you into a small side hug.
"Really? Thanks, that's so kind of you. Even though you can probably tell this is one of the few times I ever talk to a girl."
“It’s kinda like saying yes.” I smile at you. “For what it’s worth, you’re doing alright. But most girls would not be as receptive to the stares as I have been.”
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Forest Green
Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.
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