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Wicked Stench

Edwin J. Gasque

By Edwin J. GasquePublished 2 years ago 2 min read

In the bustling city of Serenborough, there lived a peculiar individual named Felix. He possessed a unique ability that set him apart from the rest of society ;  he could smell the sin. The more sinful a person was, the worse they smelled to him. This extraordinary gift made Felix an outcast, for he could not bear to be in the presence of those who emitted an overwhelming stench of wickedness.

Felix lived a solitary life, avoiding crowded places as much as possible. The constant barrage of foul odors overwhelmed his senses and made him withdraw from social interactions. He took solace in the quiet corners of the city, where he could find a brief respite from the world's sin-filled air.

One fateful day, while seeking refuge in a secluded park, Felix noticed a new aroma that captivated his senses. It was unlike anything he had ever experienced before; a delightful, enchanting fragrance that seemed to wrap around him like a comforting embrace. Intrigued, he followed the scent to its source and came face-to-face with a person named Evelyn.

To his amazement, Evelyn did not exude the noxious odor of sin like everyone else. Instead, she carried an aura of purity and goodness that enveloped her like an ethereal perfume. Felix was immediately drawn to her, not only because of her delightful smell but also because he sensed a kindred spirit in her.

As they got to know each other, Felix couldn't help but confess his unique ability to Evelyn. He expected her to react with fear or disgust, but to his surprise, she listened attentively and accepted him for who he was. Evelyn revealed that she had always felt like an outsider herself, never quite fitting in with the society's norms.

Their connection grew stronger with each passing day, and they soon became inseparable. Felix found himself intoxicated by Evelyn's presence, feeling alive and accepted like never before. He explained to her that the reason he was so obsessed with her was that she didn't stink like everyone else. In her, he found a refuge from the constant onslaught of sinful odors.

Evelyn's genuine and compassionate nature provided a sense of calm and acceptance that Felix had longed for. As they spent more time together, Felix's ability to detect sin began to diminish, as if Evelyn's goodness was slowly purifying his senses. He felt more human than ever before, learning to appreciate the beauty of the world despite its imperfections.

Their bond deepened, and they became partners in navigating life's trials together. Evelyn's unwavering support and understanding helped Felix embrace his gift, using it to help those in need rather than isolating himself from society.

As time went on, Felix and Evelyn became beacons of hope for the city of Serenborough. Their unique connection and compassion inspired others to look beyond their differences and accept each other with open hearts. Felix's ability to smell sin no longer isolated him; instead, it became a tool to help others find redemption and lead better lives.

In the end, it was the meeting of two seemingly different souls that sparked a profound change in a city plagued by judgment and disdain. Felix and Evelyn's love taught the people of Serenborough that true acceptance and understanding came not from focusing on the sins of others, but by embracing the goodness within themselves and others. And so, their love story became a beacon of hope and a testament to the power of acceptance and unconditional love.

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About the Creator

Edwin J. Gasque

“It does not matter how slowly you go as long as you do not stop.” -Confucius.

Making my dreams a reality. I hope to grab the attention of many readers and give them insightful information. I mostly write poems and short stories.

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