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Whispers of the Ananouki

Story 6: "The Shadow That Hunts"

By saad ahmedPublished 10 months ago 5 min read

Setting: A dilapidated, ancient building at the edge of the wasteland, under a sky that flickers with strange auroras.

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The ground was still vibrating when Dima and Hassan reached the crumbling structure. The building loomed ahead like a broken skeleton, its jagged silhouette stark against the flickering sky. Every instinct Dima had screamed that they had to keep running, but there was no more strength left in him. The pain from the blast in the cavern still throbbed at the back of his skull, his body sore from the relentless flight.

Hassan’s breath was shallow beside him, his face pale, but his wide eyes constantly scanned the area as if expecting something to jump from the darkness.

“It’s... it’s not safe here,” Dima muttered through gritted teeth. His hand tightened around his revolver, ready for whatever came next.

The sky above them shifted in ways that didn’t make sense. The clouds swirled with an unnatural force, flickering with violent flashes of green and purple. The eerie glow from the auroras had long since stopped being beautiful, replaced by an ominous sense that the very air itself was alive, pulsating with something dark.

As they stepped inside the building, the air grew cold. The walls were covered in layers of ash, and the floors were cracked and uneven. The building had once been something important, but time had consumed it — just as time was now consuming everything around them. The remnants of a world long gone.

“This place... it feels like it’s been waiting for us,” Hassan said quietly, his voice barely above a whisper.

Dima stopped mid-step and glanced at the boy. Hassan’s eyes were fixed on something deep within the building, something Dima couldn’t see. His expression was distant, his gaze almost trance-like.

“Hassan?” Dima called out, but there was no answer. Hassan just stood there, frozen.

Dima’s instincts flared, and he grabbed the boy’s arm, pulling him toward the shadowy interior. “Stay with me, Hassan. Don’t get lost in whatever this is.”

But Hassan didn’t seem to hear him. His face was pale, his eyes wide, but unseeing. His lips moved, murmuring something Dima couldn’t understand, as though he was speaking to someone — or something — in the unseen corners of the building.

“Hassan, snap out of it!” Dima shouted, shaking him harder.

Finally, Hassan blinked and looked up, his pupils dilated, his chest rising and falling rapidly. “Dima... I... I felt it. There’s something here, something watching us.”

The hairs on the back of Dima’s neck stood on end. He had felt it, too — a cold presence, a shifting weight that was too real to ignore. And the sound... it was faint, like the low hum of a thousand whispers all jumbled together.

The boy’s words echoed in Dima’s mind. There’s something here, something watching us.

“Did you hear that?” Dima asked, his voice sharp. The hum had grown louder, now accompanied by the sound of scraping, like metal dragging against stone. A chill passed through him.

“I think...” Hassan’s voice cracked. “I think it’s closer.”

Dima spun around, scanning the building. The space they were in was larger than it had first appeared. It stretched out into a vast, pitch-black corridor. Shadows clung to the edges of the room, shifting with an unsettling life of their own.

Then, a sound, barely audible — like breathing. It was slow, deliberate, and so deep it seemed to vibrate in Dima’s chest. But it wasn’t just the noise. It was the feeling that accompanied it. The unmistakable feeling of something, or someone, lurking in the dark. Watching.

His heart began to pound faster. He turned to Hassan, his voice low but firm. “We need to get out of here. Now.”

But Hassan’s eyes were locked on the darkness ahead, his breathing shallow. “It’s... it’s coming,” he whispered.

Before Dima could react, a low growl reverberated through the floor beneath them. The air suddenly grew heavier, suffocating. A shadow shifted in the corner of Dima’s vision, too quick to be human, too large to be a figment of his imagination.

The ground trembled again, but this time, it wasn’t just the land beneath their feet. It was the very walls of the building — groaning as if something within was awakening, something old, something ancient.

“Dima!” Hassan cried out. His hand shot out, grabbing Dima’s sleeve as his body jerked backward.

A shape emerged from the darkness. At first, it was a shadow, but then it became something more — a massive, hulking figure that seemed to materialize from the depths of the building. Its eyes glowed with a faint blue light, and its long, sinewy limbs twisted unnaturally as it moved. A creature, yes, but unlike anything Dima had ever seen.

It was humanoid in shape but twisted, grotesque, with jagged scars running across its blackened skin. The smell of burning flesh and decay followed it like a shroud. Its mouth opened in a low, gurgling growl, showing rows of sharp, uneven teeth. But it wasn’t just the appearance of the creature that sent a cold chill down Dima’s spine. It was the sense of overwhelming power radiating from it, a force of pure malice that pressed down on him like a weight.

Dima stepped back instinctively, raising his revolver. But his hands shook. This was no normal creature — this was something other, something from a world he didn’t understand. And even his gun, which had felt like a lifeline for so long, now felt small, insignificant.

“We need to move, Hassan!” Dima shouted, trying to sound confident, but the creature was already moving toward them.

It was fast. Too fast. It closed the distance in a blur of motion, its limbs shifting with impossible speed. Hassan stumbled back, his legs trembling as he tried to keep his balance. But the creature was upon them in an instant.

A sudden surge of energy pulsed through Dima’s body, and he barely had time to register what was happening before Hassan shouted, “No!”

Hassan’s hand shot out — not in fear, but in an almost unnatural command. The same blue energy that had surrounded them in the Ananouki sanctuary began to swirl around his fingertips, pulsating in time with the creature’s movements. A harsh, jagged scream echoed from the thing as the energy clashed with its dark presence.

The creature recoiled, its glowing eyes narrowing in confusion, but then the air around them began to warp. The walls of the building creaked and groaned, and the ground cracked beneath their feet.

The creature hesitated, then let out another growl, deeper and more violent. Its form flickered, like it was made of smoke or shadow, before it lunged forward again.

But before Dima could react, everything went black.

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End of Story 6:

The shadowy figure that hunts them is more than just a creature — it’s a manifestation of something far older, far darker. Hassan’s mysterious abilities seem to be growing, but so too is the danger. What is this creature? And what does Hassan’s newfound power mean for their survival?

AdventureFantasyHorrorMysterySci FiSeriesthriller

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