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Whispers in the Fog

In a quiet town where nothing ever happens, a girl hears mysterious voices in the mist—voices that may lead her to uncover a truth long buried in fear and silence.

By Rahul SanaodwalaPublished 9 months ago 4 min read
Whispers in the Fog
Photo by Gary Ellis on Unsplash

The fog always came just before dawn in the town of Elmsworth. Thick, white, and cold, it crept through the trees, wrapped around houses, and silenced everything it touched. Most people stayed indoors until the sun burned it away. But not Clara.

Every morning at 5:30 sharp, sixteen-year-old Clara slipped out of her room, past her sleeping father, and tiptoed down the porch steps into the fog. She never told anyone why. Honestly, she wasn’t even sure herself.

She just… heard something.

Not every day. But sometimes, when the fog was especially heavy and the world was quiet enough to hear your own heartbeat, she heard whispers. Faint. Like wind through dry leaves. But they weren’t just sounds. They were words. And they always called her name.

“Clara…”

Soft. Distant. Almost like someone was trying to remember how to speak.

It started two weeks ago, the morning after her mother’s birthday. Or rather, the first birthday without her. Clara’s mom had died eight months earlier in a car accident that no one talked about anymore. Not her dad. Not the neighbors. Not even Clara’s best friend, Ruby.

But the fog remembered.

That’s what Clara believed. Deep down, beneath the logic and fear, she felt it in her bones—the fog was trying to tell her something.

One morning, as the sky turned from black to pale blue, Clara stood at the edge of the woods behind her house. The trees were barely shadows in the thick mist. Her breath came out in little clouds, her hands buried in her jacket pockets.

“Clara…” the voice came again, softer than ever. But this time, it wasn’t just calling her name.

It was humming.

A tune she knew. One her mom used to sing while baking cookies. A lullaby that ended with, “Come home safe, my little light.”

Clara’s heart dropped. The fog pressed in. Her legs trembled.

“M-Mom?” she whispered.

No answer. Only silence.

Then she heard footsteps.

She spun around—no one.

But the fog shifted, parting slightly like a curtain. And for a second, Clara saw something that didn’t make sense.

A light. A lantern, swaying in the air. Held by a woman.

Then it was gone.

She ran back home, breathless and cold, her shoes soaked with dew. She didn’t say a word to her dad, who was still half-asleep on the couch. She didn’t eat breakfast. Didn’t speak during class.

But she couldn’t stop thinking about the fog. The whisper. The lullaby.

That night, she waited until her father was asleep again. Then she packed a flashlight, her mom’s scarf, and an old photograph of them from three summers ago at the lake.

She walked into the fog.

“Where are you?” she whispered.

The fog curled around her like a living thing. She walked deeper into the woods, where the trees grew closer and the air turned colder.

She followed the sound of humming. Soft. Sad. Familiar.

And then she saw her.

A woman. Standing between two birch trees. Not quite solid, not quite mist. She wore a long coat, just like the one her mom used to wear, and her hair flowed in waves that danced with the fog.

Clara stepped forward. “Mom?”

The woman turned. Her face was blurry, like a half-remembered dream. But the eyes—they were her eyes.

“I’m here,” Clara said, her voice cracking.

The woman didn’t speak, but she lifted her hand and pointed behind Clara.

Clara turned around—and there, barely visible, was an old shed. One she’d never seen before.

She looked back. The woman was gone.

The shed creaked as she pushed open the door. Inside, it smelled of dust and rust. Cobwebs hung like curtains. But in the corner, something shined.

A small metal box. The kind people once used for letters or secrets.

She opened it with shaking hands.

Inside were photographs, faded with time. Letters. Her mom’s handwriting. And a tape recorder.

She pressed play.

And a voice—her mom’s voice—filled the air.

“Clara, if you ever find this… I’m sorry I couldn’t tell you everything. There were things happening I didn’t understand. Things I was afraid of. But I believe in you. You’re stronger than I ever was. If the fog speaks to you, listen. Trust it. Trust yourself.”

Then silence.

Clara sat there for a long time, holding the recorder against her chest. Her eyes burned with tears, but her heart felt… lighter.

The fog had led her here. Not to haunt her. But to heal her.

The next morning, Clara walked out of the woods with the box in her arms.

She found her dad in the kitchen, staring into his coffee like he always did.

“I found Mom’s voice,” she said quietly.

He looked up, startled.

And for the first time in eight months, they talked. About her. About the accident. About the things that hurt too much to say before.

They laughed. They cried. They remembered.

Now, every foggy morning, Clara still walks into the mist. Not out of fear or sadness, but out of peace. Sometimes, she hears humming. Sometimes, nothing at all.

But she knows the fog no longer whispers from pain.

It whispers from love.

The End.

AdventureLoveShort StoryFantasy

About the Creator

Rahul Sanaodwala

Hi, I’m the Founder of the StriWears.com, Poet and a Passionate Writer with a Love for Learning and Sharing Knowledge across a Variety of Topics.

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