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Whispers from Veloria: The Planet of Shadows

When Curiosity Leads to Terror, What Secrets Lurk Beneath the Surface?

By Sazia Afreen SumiPublished about a year ago 5 min read
 Whispers from Veloria: The Planet of Shadows
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When the first images of Veloria appeared on Earth, they were nothing short of stunning: vibrant green landscapes, sparkling lakes, and towering mountains. Scientists were left in awe; this new planet, orbiting the distant star Darius-9, had only been discovered a few months earlier. However, what truly captivated the world was the haunting outline of a humanoid figure visible in one of the photos—a sentient life form.

Dr. Rachel Ainsworth, a leading astrophysicist, was at the helm of the mission to explore Veloria. As she led a small team of astronauts, she became the first to set foot on this strange terrain, her heart racing with a mix of excitement and anxiety. Little did she realize, the paradise of Veloria concealed a darkness lurking just beneath its surface.

Upon landing, Rachel and her team were welcomed by an otherworldly splendor. The sky shimmered with colors they had never encountered, casting a warm glow over the glistening greenery. The air was rich with the sweet fragrance of flowers blooming in wild, vivid hues. Yet, even in such a beautiful environment, an unsettling feeling crept under Rachel’s skin—a sense that they were not alone.

As they delved deeper into the forest, Rachel spotted strange markings on the trees—symbols that appeared to pulse with energy, as if they were alive. “These aren’t mere carvings,” she pondered, running her fingers along the grooves. “It feels like a form of communication.”

Her teammates were less intrigued by the symbols. Jason, the tech specialist, was engrossed in his gadgets, collecting data. “Let’s concentrate on locating those humanoid figures,” he urged, his voice brimming with enthusiasm. “They could change everything we know about humanity!”

Days turned into a blur of exploration, but their search yielded only fleeting glimpses—shadowy figures flitting between the trees. The creatures, when spotted, appeared more fluid than solid, almost like shadows brought to life. They moved with a grace that both intrigued and unsettled Rachel.

One night, while the team camped under a sky full of stars, eerie sounds drifted through the woods—a haunting chorus that sent chills down Rachel’s spine. It was a melodic yet unsettling noise that seemed to penetrate their very bones. “What do you think it is?” Lily, the botanist, asked, her voice quivering with fear.

“Maybe it’s a mating call or a warning,” Jason replied with a shrug, though his confidence wavered. They chose to dismiss it, chalking it up to the thrill of their discoveries.

The next day began with an event that shattered their fragile sense of safety. As they ventured into a nearby valley, they stumbled upon a village—huts oddly constructed from a translucent material that strangely reflected light. The air was thick with tension as they approached, but the village seemed deserted.

Suddenly, the whispers returned, echoing louder and more insistent. Rachel felt a grip of fear around her heart as she turned to see shimmering figures stepping out from the shadows. They weren’t just human-like; they were breathtakingly advanced, with skin that sparkled like polished gems and eyes glowing with an intelligence that felt deeper than the universe itself. Yet, their expressions were devoid of warmth, replaced by empty stares that sent waves of dread coursing through her.

One figure stepped forward, raising a slender hand decorated with intricate patterns that echoed the designs on the trees. It spoke, but the sound that emerged wasn’t a language; instead, it was a series of harmonious pitches and tones. The melody resonated in Rachel’s mind, wrapping around her thoughts. As she struggled to make sense of it, a sharp pain blossomed in her temples.

“We should retreat,” Jason shouted, panic evident in his voice. But when they turned, the shadows that had once lingered in the trees now surrounded them, blocking their escape. The ethereal figures began to sway, their forms blending with the darkness around them.

Rachel’s breath quickened, despair washing over her. “What are they?” she gasped, but the creatures remained silent, their melodic sound rising and falling like a tide against the chaos of her fear.

Suddenly, one of the creatures lunged forward, its hand reaching for Rachel. At that moment, she was overwhelmed with visions—a world where light battled darkness, greed, and harmony intertwined. She glimpsed their history; a civilization torn apart by war, turning inward and away from their kind, lost in shadows of pain and regret. It was a warning, a desperate plea for understanding.

In that moment, Rachel felt a deep connection—a shared sorrow that resonated within her very soul. But before she could fully understand the weight of their message, the figures faded away, retreating into the shadows as if they were nothing more than illusions, leaving behind a chilling presence.

Rachel stumbled back, gasping for breath. Jason pulled her away from the village, his face pale and strained. “We need to get out of here. Now.”

The team raced back to their ship, adrenaline driving them forward. But the shadows trailed behind, whispering both promises and threats, haunting their every move. When they finally boarded, Rachel slammed the hatch shut, locking them in. The pressure of the shadows pressed against the hull, a stark reminder that they had lost control.

As the engines roared to life, the shadows outside swirled into a tempest, morphing into figures that pressed against the glass with faces twisted in anguish. Rachel’s heart raced as she noticed her colleagues’ expressions shift from fear to despair. “They don’t want us to leave,” Lily whimpered, clutching her seat tightly.

“Hang on! I’ll get us out of this!” Jason shouted, desperately tapping buttons. But just then, an explosion rocked the ship, sending them tumbling from their seats. The lights flickered, and the cries of the creatures filled the cabin, a haunting mix of rage and sorrow that pierced their ears like shards of ice.

In the chaos, Rachel glanced at the control panel; they were losing power quickly. “We can’t give up! If we can just stabilize—” But before she could finish, an external force slammed into the side of the ship, sending them into a spiral. In those terrifying moments, Rachel realized their fate—these beings were not just inhabitants of Veloria; they were guardians of a realm scarred by humanity’s recklessness. They bore witness to the darkness within every soul, and now, as Rachel stared into the abyss of their troubled past, she understood the truth: to escape Veloria, they would have to face the very shadows within themselves. As the ship descended, a final whisper cut through the chaos: “You cannot escape the darkness that dwells within.” And with that, Veloria claimed its visitors, their shadows intertwining with the essence of the planet forever—a haunting reminder of what occurs when curiosity overshadows caution, and the cost incurred when one seeks to uncover the secrets hidden deep within another world.

The last transmission from Veloria was unsettling, a warning for those who dared to venture where shadows linger, reminding humanity of the delicate balance between exploration and intrusion. The world watched in horror, knowing that while Veloria might be beyond reach, its legends would endure, whispered from lips that dared not forget the tales of those who ventured too far into the unknown.

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Sazia Afreen Sumi

I craft stories that delve into love's many facets—romantic, unrequited, and lasting—plus other intriguing themes. Discover tales that resonate!

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  • Raushan Miraabout a year ago

    Nice.

  • Soma Ahmedabout a year ago

    Good.

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