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Whispers Between the Raindrops

A love story told in the spaces where silence speaks louder than words.

By Hanif Ullah Published 5 months ago 3 min read

When love lingers in silence, even the rain begins to listen.

The rain had always been my companion. Not the soft drizzle that barely clings to the windows, but the kind of rain that soaks through everything, leaving behind an echo of solitude. It was on nights like these, when the sky wept without restraint, that I felt closest to him.

I used to think love was loud—laughter echoing in cafes, playful shouts across crowded streets, promises made under fireworks. But with him, love was quiet. It lived in the space between words, in glances that lasted a little too long, and in the whispers that disappeared into the rhythm of falling rain.

The first time we met, it was raining. I was sitting beneath a bus shelter, watching water bead and trickle down the glass like impatient rivers. He sat down beside me, no umbrella, no rush, no complaints. Just a smile that looked like it belonged to someone who had made peace with storms.

“Funny thing about the rain,” he said. “It makes silence easier.”

I remember thinking it was a strange thing to say. And yet, it was true. In the rain, words don’t need to fill the air; the world already has its soundtrack.

From then on, the rain became ours. We walked through puddles without worrying about wet shoes, sat on park benches under grey skies, and leaned into each other when the world blurred into silver. He never spoke too much, and I never asked too many questions. We existed in that unspoken understanding—two people who found comfort in the hush of storms.

But storms don’t last forever. Neither did we.

I don’t remember the fight, not exactly. Maybe it wasn’t even a fight, just a collection of small silences that turned heavy. The kind of silences that weren’t gentle anymore. Words, when they came, were sharper than raindrops, cutting instead of soothing. And then he was gone—no storm, no thunder, just absence.

Still, I walk in the rain.

I don’t carry an umbrella, though people offer me pitying glances, their own coats clutched tight. They don’t understand that the rain is not an inconvenience to me—it’s a reminder. With every drop that touches my skin, I hear him again.

Sometimes, I swear he’s there. Not in body, but in presence. A whisper carried between raindrops, soft enough to vanish if I try too hard to listen.

“Keep walking,” it seems to say. “You’re not alone.”

Maybe it’s madness, or maybe it’s memory. But love doesn’t always leave cleanly. Sometimes, it lingers in the spaces we thought were empty—in an old song, in a place we used to sit, or in the steady rhythm of rain that refuses to forget.

I don’t chase him anymore. I’ve learned that some people are not meant to be held forever; they are meant to teach us how to hear whispers in storms, how to find peace in the quiet. He was both the rain and the silence, and losing him didn’t take that away—it only taught me how to listen closer.

Tonight, the rain is heavier than usual. The streets shimmer with reflections of blurred headlights. I walk slowly, letting it sink in, letting it wash me clean. And just for a moment, in the hush between the downpour, I feel it again—that soft echo of him, of us.

It doesn’t ache the way it used to. Instead, it feels like a reminder: love doesn’t vanish; it transforms. His whispers are no longer for me, not directly. But they live in the rain, waiting for anyone willing to pause long enough to hear them.

And so, I keep walking, not searching, not grieving. Just listening.

Because sometimes, the most beautiful conversations are not the ones spoken aloud, but the ones carried in whispers—between the raindrops.

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