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Where the Paint Peels

Rue and the Worn Town

By Parsley Rose Published 4 months ago 5 min read

The town clung to the rocky shore like barnacles on a ship's hull, its buildings weathered into something between architecture and driftwood. What had once been pristine white clapboard siding now bore the scars of countless storms—paint peeling in long, papery strips that curled and fluttered in the salt-heavy breeze like dying moths.

Rue picked her way carefully down the crumbling main street, her footsteps echoing off the empty storefronts. The silence was profound, broken only by the distant crash of waves against the seawall and the occasional groan of settling timber. Above her head, a faded sign for "Morrison's General Store" swayed on rusted chains, its letters barely visible beneath layers of oxidized salt and sun damage.

Every surface told the same story of abandonment. Window frames, once painted a cheerful blue, had faded to the color of old bruises. Shutters hung at drunken angles, their slats warped and split by the relentless coastal weather. The white paint that had presumably once made this place look like a postcard now resembled old skin, mottled and peeling, revealing the gray, weathered wood underneath like exposed bone.

She paused at what must have been the town square—a small circle of cracked concrete surrounding a corroded bronze fountain. The metal had turned green with verdigris, and barnacles had somehow found purchase on its lower edges, as if the sea was slowly reclaiming even this modest distance inland. Salt crystals glittered on every surface, turning the abandoned benches and lamp posts into sculptures of neglect.

The houses that climbed the hillside behind the commercial district were in various stages of surrender to the elements. Some still maintained a ghostly dignity, their white walls merely stained and streaked with rust-colored tears from corroded gutters. Others had given up entirely—roofs sagged, porches tilted at impossible angles, and entire walls had pulled away from their frames, leaving dark gaps that whistled in the wind.

Rue approached the nearest house, drawn by a child's tricycle sitting on the front porch, its red paint now a pale pink beneath a coating of salt film. The front door stood slightly ajar, and she could smell the distinctive odor of salt-soaked wood and mildew that seemed to permeate everything here. Through the gap, she glimpsed wallpaper hanging in long strips, curled and brown-spotted with moisture damage.

What had happened here? The town looked like it had been evacuated suddenly but left to face the sea's patient assault alone. No broken windows suggested violence, no obvious disaster marked the buildings. Just the slow, inexorable work of salt air and time, turning what had once been someone's home, someone's community, into a monument to impermanence.

As she stood there, a gull cried overhead, and Rue realized she could taste the salt on her lips, feel it beginning its slow work on her jacket zipper, her camera strap. Even now, even as a visitor, she was not immune to the same forces that had claimed this place.

Behind the main street, Rue discovered a narrow alley that led to what must have been the town's small harbor. Here, the salt damage was even more severe. Wooden pilings jutted from the water like broken teeth, their tops crowned with rust-stained metal cleats that had once secured fishing boats and pleasure craft. A single dock remained partially intact, its planks warped into gentle waves that mirrored the sea itself.

She found herself drawn to a small chapel perched on a rocky outcrop overlooking the harbor. Its white steeple, once proud against the sky, now leaned at a precarious angle, held upright more by stubbornness than structural integrity. The building's clapboard siding told the most dramatic story yet—great sheets of paint had peeled away in enormous curls, some hanging like tattered flags, others scattered on the ground like giant's fingernail clippings.

Inside, the chapel was a cathedral of decay. Salt air had worked its way through broken windows, leaving crystalline deposits on the wooden pews like frost that never melted. The altar cloth, once white, had turned the color of old tea, and hymnals lay scattered across the floor, their pages fused together by moisture into solid blocks of pulp.

But it was the stained glass window behind the altar that stopped Rue in her tracks. Somehow, impossibly, it had survived mostly intact. The morning sun streaming through the colored glass cast jeweled patterns across the salt-stained walls—blues and reds and yellows that seemed almost obscene in their vibrancy against the monochrome palette of decay that surrounded them.

As she stood there, Rue began to notice other survivors scattered throughout the town. A cast iron street lamp, its paint long gone, stood like a black sentinel, beautiful in its honesty. Wildflowers—tough, salt-tolerant species—had begun to reclaim the abandoned gardens, their purple and yellow blooms a defiant splash of life against the weathered white walls.

In one house, she discovered a kitchen where copper pots had turned green with verdigris but still hung in neat rows, as if their owner had stepped out just moments before. The white cabinets below had buckled and warped, their doors hanging open to reveal shelves lined with newspaper from decades past, the headlines barely legible beneath water stains.

The town's small library drew her next—a single-story building whose white paint had failed so completely that it now resembled birch bark, peeling in horizontal strips that revealed layers of different paint colors underneath. Inside, books lay scattered like fallen leaves, their pages brittle with salt and time. But on one shelf, remarkably, she found a journal left by some previous visitor, its entries documenting the slow transformation of the town:

"Year 3: The Hendersons' house lost its front porch today."

"Year 7: Storm took the weathervane from the church."

"Year 12: Last of the streetlights finally gave up."

The entries painted a picture of gradual surrender, a community slowly dissolving like salt in water. But there was no tragedy in the writing, only a kind of peaceful acceptance, as if the town itself had chosen this gentle return to the elements.

As the day wore on and shadows began to lengthen, Rue found herself reluctant to leave. The town would continue its slow dissolution, paint continuing to peel, wood continuing to warp and split, until eventually the sea would have its way entirely. But for now, it stood as a testament to human ambition and nature's patience—beautiful in its decay, haunting in its silence, white paint falling like snow onto streets that would soon forget they had ever known footsteps.

Walking back toward the main road as evening approached, Rue turned for one last look. In the golden light of sunset, the town seemed almost to glow, its white walls and peeling paint transformed into something ethereal. She could almost see it as it once was—bustling with life, fresh with new paint, full of hope and the promise of permanence. But perhaps this version, weathered and worn, salt-kissed and surrendering, was even more beautiful in its honesty about the temporary nature of all human endeavors.

AdventureExcerptMicrofictionPsychologicalShort StoryStream of ConsciousnessYoung Adult

About the Creator

Parsley Rose

Just a small town girl, living in a dystopian wasteland, trying to survive the next big Feral Ghoul attack. I'm from a vault that ran questionable operations on sick and injured prewar to postnuclear apocalypse vault dwellers. I like stars.

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