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When Walls Fall

They fall in silence

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 2 months ago 2 min read
When Walls Fall
Photo by Frank Eiffert on Unsplash

The Berlin Wall fell this day, November 9th, 1989.

It took just one night for its pieces to shatter.

The walls that surround hearts can take a lifetime to break.

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50-year-old Thomas Weiss stood before a crumbling wall, wielding a hammer he wasn't sure he wanted to use. His wife, Hannah, and twin sons had resided in the free zone for years--because she wanted to.

The wall had come down in 1989--ten years to this day. The shattered pieces lay on the ground, waiting to come together.

Thomas wondered if they would--but some walls sealed hearts.

And stood taller.

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Youngsters still came to hack at the bricks that hadn't yet given way, breaking out in raucous hollers as they did.

Thomas watched them, his memories more dislodged with each blow of the hammer. Each cheer he heard felt like an accusation---like Hannah's last words to him.

He wasn't sure he envied the wall for coming down.

Before he slammed the door of the family home--sharper than the barbed wire that accompanied the bricks.

A young man spotted him standing, still in a reverie. He stretched out his hand--a small piece of the wall lay in his palm.

Thomas hesitated. He wasn't sure if it was just unwanted history coming apart, or a piece of his own heart.

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His wife appeared amidst the dust and fallen wall splinters.

Older.

Strange.

The shadow of the wall that was, stood between them--too real.

Freedom felt foreign--the hardest reunions were the ones one didn't prepare for.

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He dropped his hammer, the crowd's joy flooding over him. He and Hannah didn't embrace--but stood together.

Breathing the air of freedom for the first time--

In decades.

Their unity had begun---in silence.

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As dawn broke, the wall had nearly crumbled completely. The crowd had vanished, save for a few stragglers.

The bricks had come apart in just one night in 1989. His peace with Hannah would take a lifetime of rebuilding.

The Berlin wall had finally fallen. The one in his heart--still solid brick.

And had to shatter--within.

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Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental

For Mikeydred's November Challenge

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Pamela Williams2 months ago

    That's a very powerful comparison.

  • It always takes longer to build something than destroying it. Loved your story!

  • Kendall Defoe 2 months ago

    I was sixteen when I saw it come down, and I thought about the friends of mine whose parents came to Canada to escape from that conflict. Oh, and you can see a piece of the wall here in Montréal! 🧱

  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought!

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