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When Tomorrow Remembers

They were meant to love in one timeline, but destiny wrote them across two.

By shakir hamidPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

Kabir believed life moved forward — one direction, one timeline, one destiny.

Until he met Amara.

She appeared in his life like a forgotten melody — familiar yet impossible.

They met inside an old railway museum, while rain whispered against glass walls. Kabir was sketching an antique steam engine when he felt a strange presence. He turned — and froze.

A girl stood watching him, eyes deep like dusk, hair braided with tiny silver threads, wearing an old-style dress from another century. Yet she didn’t look like she was pretending.

More like she never left her time at all.

“Do you always draw the future?” she asked softly.

Kabir blinked. “This is the past.”

She smiled sadly. “For you.”

Before he could ask anything, she touched the train gently — and for a heartbeat, the world flickered. The quiet museum blurred into a bustling old station, lanterns instead of bulbs, steam instead of silence, people rushing in coats and pillbox hats.

And then — normal again.

Kabir stared.

She only whispered, “Not yet,” and disappeared into the rain.

Timelines Touch Softly

For days, Kabir couldn't forget her.

Everywhere he looked — reflections, puddles, train windows — he swore he saw her.

Finally, on the seventh night, she appeared again… but in his apartment. Rainwater dripped from her dress, though outside the sky was clear.

“You shouldn’t remember me,” she murmured.

“I can't forget you,” he replied.

Amara closed her eyes like his words hurt. “That means we are near the end.”

“End? We just met.”

She shook her head. “In your time. Not mine.”

Then she told the truth: she was from 1923.

A clockmaker’s daughter.

A girl who once loved a man history had erased.

A man who looked exactly like Kabir.

“You were Armaan,” she whispered. “You promised you would come back. You never did. I waited at the station every day until time forgot me.”

Kabir’s pulse trembled. “I don’t remember.”

“You aren’t meant to. Each life erases the last.”

“Then why am I seeing you again?”

“Because love disobeyed time,” she whispered.

Borrowed Days

They met secretly, in moments time allowed.

In libraries, on rooftops, between heartbeats.

Each time she came, the world flickered — his reality blending into hers: cobbled streets, warm lanterns, brass clocks ticking like hearts.

But every visit made her weaker.

She dimmed — like a memory fading.

One night, she said, “Time is correcting itself. I’m not supposed to exist here. Neither love nor longing bend eternity for long.”

Kabir held her hand. “Stay.”

She shook her head gently. “I once begged you to stay. Fate doesn't let us repeat choices without cost.”

“How long do we have?”

“Until the clock stops,” she whispered, placing a small, gold pocket watch in his hand. The hands were frozen at 11:11 — a wish trapped in metal.

“When this moves,” she said, “I disappear from your time forever.”

The Last Train

Their final evening was quiet.

They sat on the railway bridge, watching trains disappear into darkness like stolen futures.

“I loved you across a century,” Amara whispered.

Kabir’s throat burned. “Then I choose you now.”

“You already chose,” she said softly. “You moved on in your life. You married someone. You lived. You forgot. I waited — that was my fate, not yours.”

Tears stung his eyes. “I didn’t know.”

She touched his cheek. “Some souls meet late. Some meet again. Some only meet to remember what love costs.”

He looked at the pocket watch.

Its hands twitched.

“No,” he whispered.

Amara stood.

A train whistle echoed — but no train passed.

“Time is calling me home,” she said.

“I will find you again.”

“Don’t,” she smiled sadly. “Live where you are. Love where you remain. Let one life be enough.”

And like a breath fading, she dissolved into falling rain — leaving only the gold watch on his palm.

When the second hand struck forward, just once, his world went still.

Kabir sat alone — but not empty.

He had loved a girl time couldn’t hold.

And somewhere in the pages of history, a girl once waited for a man who never came — yet loved him anyway.

AdventureClassicalfamilyFantasyHistoricalHorrorHumorLovePsychologicalYoung Adult

About the Creator

shakir hamid

A passionate writer sharing well-researched true stories, real-life events, and thought-provoking content. My work focuses on clarity, depth, and storytelling that keeps readers informed and engaged.

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