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When Time Forgot to Move

The Mystery of the Day That Never Ended

By NasarkhanPublished 5 months ago 4 min read

The clock above the church tower struck midnight.

At least, it should have.

Elias watched from his window as the second hand twitched once, then froze. The sound that usually filled his nights—the ticking of clocks, the hum of refrigerators, even the faint buzzing of streetlights—collapsed into silence. The world outside his apartment seemed suspended, as if someone had pressed pause on reality.

At first, he thought it was a power outage. He reached for his phone, but the screen glowed 12:00 and refused to change. No battery percentage ticked down, no signal bars shifted. Just frozen.

Panic tried to claw at him, but curiosity ran faster. He slipped on his shoes and stepped out into the street.

The city was still.

Cars hovered mid-intersection. A cyclist hung in the air, wheels tilted, body frozen in a perpetual fall that never reached the ground. Steam that had curled from a coffee cart stood suspended like glass threads, unmoving. Even the pigeons above the square looked like marble carvings, wings outstretched but locked.

Elias’s breath quickened.

He shouted once—“Hello!”—and the sound carried, echoing far longer than it should have, as though the silence was stretching it thin.

No reply.

No one moved. No one blinked.

Except him

By instinct, he walked toward the church, the only place he could think of where time had a face. The tower loomed against a dark, unmoving sky. The stars were frozen mid-twinkle, and the moon wore a halo of light that refused to fade.

Inside the church, the air was thick and heavy, like he was walking through water. The candles had frozen flames, their light trapped in molten glass shapes. He touched one—and it was solid. Cold. Wrong.

Then he heard it.

A sound. A tick.

So faint he almost dismissed it as imagination. But then came another. And another.

Tick. Tick.

It wasn’t coming from the tower’s great clock. It was deeper, lower, hidden. He followed the sound through a narrow passage behind the altar, where the stone gave way to a spiral staircase descending into shadow.

The air grew colder with each step. The ticks grew louder, sharper, faster. At the bottom, he entered a chamber where a massive pendulum swung. Or rather, tried to swing—halfway through its arc, frozen mid-air.

Yet the ticking persisted.

On the wall opposite him was a smaller clock, unlike any he had seen. Its face was cracked, its hands spinning backward. Each tick echoed with unnatural weight, shaking dust from the rafters.

“Finally,” a voice said.

Elias turned sharply.

An old man sat in the shadows, cloaked in gray. His eyes glowed faintly, as though lit from within.

“You’re awake,” the man whispered. “Not many are.”

Elias swallowed. “What’s happening?”

“Time has forgotten to move,” the man said simply. “The world above sleeps in eternity, while this clock—” he gestured toward the spinning hands “—decides who remains awake to bear its secret.”

Elias’s heart thudded. “Why me?”

The man studied him, eyes unblinking. “Because you looked up at midnight. Most people look down—into their screens, into their lives. But you… you saw the clock hesitate. You noticed. Time favors the observant.”

Elias stepped closer to the strange clock. “And what happens now?”

The old man’s expression darkened. “You must choose. When time forgets to move, someone must remind it. But resetting time has a price.”

“What price?” Elias whispered.

The man rose, his form trembling like smoke. “To move time forward, you must give up your place in it. One life to awaken the world.”

The words hung heavy in the still chamber.

Elias backed away. “No. There has to be another way.”

The man’s eyes burned brighter. “There never is.”

Elias fled the chamber, climbing the staircase two steps at a time. He burst into the silent city once more.

His chest ached. His thoughts swirled. Give up his life? For what—a world that might never even know what he had done?

Yet as he wandered the frozen streets, he began to notice things he had overlooked before.

A mother pushing a stroller, her face tired but smiling.

A man carrying flowers, lips parted as if whispering a prayer.

A girl reaching out to grab her dog’s leash, her laughter half-formed.

All of them suspended on the edge of living.

All of them waiting.

He felt something tighten in his chest.

If he refused… if he let time remain broken… they would never finish their stories. They would remain locked in that endless midnight forever.

And suddenly, the choice didn’t feel like a choice at all.

Elias returned to the chamber. The old man waited by the clock, hands folded.

“You’ve decided,” he said.

Elias nodded. His voice trembled, but it was steady. “Tell me what to do.”

The man pointed to the backward-spinning clock. “Place your hand on the glass. It will take what it needs.”

Elias hesitated only once. Then he pressed his palm against the cracked face.

The glass was ice cold. Pain surged through his arm, then spread across his chest like fire. His vision blurred, the world tilting, fading.

And then The pendulum swung.

The church bells rang.

The world exhaled

When the city awoke, no one remembered. Cars moved again, pigeons flew, the cyclist landed safely on the ground. Phones blinked forward in time, never acknowledging the pause.

But in the square outside the church, the hands of the great clock moved with new strength.

And in the shadows of its tower, where no one thought to look, a new figure sat in silence. Cloaked in gray.

Eyes faintly glowing.

Waiting for the next midnight when time might forget to move again.

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