When the Stone City Heard a Newborn Cry
story of four Friars

The cave was filled with the ancient breath of stones. From the ceiling, salty drops fell and dried into chalk on the floor. Soot-black layers covered the walls; once there had been green moss behind them, but now all was ashy and lost. In the middle, a fire was burning first a tiny spark, then a slow, growing flame, like a silent prayer learning to speak.
Around the fire sat four Friars. Their coarse jute robes clung to their bodies as if they were wearing the earth itself. Thick dust coated their faces; on hair and bones it looked like rough patches. Fine cracks ringed their lips, and whenever they whispered, tiny grains fell from their mouths onto their knees, their hands, and into the weave of their brown shawls.
By the fire, on the edge, sat a dog made of dust, it seemed. If you couldn’t hear its soft breathing, you would think it was a sculptor’s masterpiece. Its eyes were steady, as if it knew an old road by heart or had buried centuries of noise inside its silence. Its ears flicked now and then; its nose tested the ground and the air, as if sniffing for a hidden message in the spinning wind.
The four Friars’ lips moved, but their voices dissolved in the cave’s cold air. Then, at last, the silence turned into a faint whisper:
“Something is about to happen… We must go out and tell the people that something is about to happen.”
As the words were spoken, the fire took one last long breath and died. Darkness thickened. Damp chill slid down from the ceiling’s cracks. All four stood up. The dusty dog grew alert, took a few steps, stopped, turned its head left, and gave a light, piercing bark.
In a hollow of rock lay a serpent, sitting on her eggs. Her body shone with moisture; patterns on her coils formed and faded. Her eyes were open but still. The dog stared. The Friars stopped too. Fear tugged thin threads in their chests, yet nothing showed on their calm faces. The serpent did not look at them and did not hear the dog; she seemed outside of time, guarding the frozen heartbeats inside her eggs.
“Come,” the first Friar said softly. The dog moved on, and the rest followed him out of the cave.
Outside, there was darkness too but not the cave’s closed darkness. It was the open sky’s heavy black cloth, with the wind scratching lines of mourning across it. The winds were crying, as if sand had been poured into their throats. Trees were lamenting; their branches struck one another and made the sound of sobbing. There was no sign of a town only valleys, rocks, leaves, and wind that smelled of salt spray and rotting grass. Night was leaning into its last watch, and everything felt like the final row in a graveyard.
They walked for a long time. No animals, no people. Time seemed wrapped inside itself, sealed like a chest. At a crossroads, they finally saw a point of light a fruit shop with a bulb glowing inside. In the middle of the shop was a chair, and on it, a man. They came close. He was motionless no breath, no flutter of eyelids, no pulse in his neck.
One Friar bent over him and said, “A kind of death sits on him no decay, no soul leaving, only time stopped.”
“Let’s hurry and find someone alive,” the second Friar said. “Even one living person could tell us how to warn the stone-born that something is about to happen.”
They looked at the four roads and agreed to take separate ways. The dusty dog went with the first, then sniffed another direction, then chose. It wagged its tail slightly, and the first Friar followed.
The First Friar
He walked between tall stone pillars and high buildings. Wall clocks had stopped; all hands pointed to the same strange moment. Near a rusty railing a sign read: “Police Station Central.” He hesitated, then decided, “Not yet somewhere else first.”
The dog sniffed a blood-stained dagger on the ground, then lifted its nose to the air as if catching a fading scent. Suddenly it ran. The Friar followed. A grand building rose ahead, with marble steps, big glass doors, and a blue sign: “University.”
Inside, the echo said there had once been noise, whispers, questions. Now the columns were still and the halls empty. The dog raced down a corridor and scratched a large wooden door. It opened. Rows of chairs; on one of them, a man slumped, covered in blood. One arm of his glasses was broken; white powder clung to his hair perhaps lime dust. The Friar felt ice on his heart and drew back. The dog gave a low whine, as if it knew the dead man’s name and owed him an old loyalty.
The Friar ran out. This time he did not pause at the police entrance; he went straight in. A policeman sat by the door, cap tilted, weapon on his shoulder, eyes forward but lifeless. “Hey, man!” the Friar called. No answer. Room after room officers in chairs, guards by walls, clerks over desks all like wax figures dusted with ash. In the cells, prisoners behind bars, hands half raised, but even their gestures were silent. The Friar looked at the dog and hurried out. “They’ve turned to stone,” he muttered. “No one here can hear.”
The Second Friar
On his road, lawns lay before buildings; flowers that usually last the night frost were open and still, dew frozen on their petals. Guards stood at a large doorway long guns, black caps, alert eyes but no blink, no move. He went along the corridors into a great hall. Rows of chairs, people seated officers in black boots, advisors in white caps, a few citizens in plain clothes necks straight, eyes open, lips dry, and such deep silence that even one’s heartbeat could get lost.
He left and reached a building blazing with lamps, chandeliers, and glassy walls of light yet no one was there. Doors were not locked, but no footsteps inside. Then came a building with small domes like a seat of state, where a city’s decisions might be made. Armed sentries stood at the doors, eyes open, unblinking. Inside, many files lay open pages and pages, lists, orders, round stamps of seals but the people behind the desks were stiff and still. The Friar tried to turn one page; it would not move. The paper felt like rough stone under his finger. A cold wave of hopelessness passed through him. He stepped out.
The Third Friar
Here the air smelled of gunpowder. A ruined school sagged by the road. Iron windows lifted like twisted fingers to the sky; dust lay heavy across broken stone. Among the rubble were children’s bags, loose pages, a smashed water cup, a torn shoe with its lace like a small snake disappearing into dirt. He turned his eyes away and walked on. He needed a living breath, even a faint sigh.
He saw a dome of a place of worship and hurried there. A big lock hung on the door. Outside, a guard sat on a chair eyes open, gun on his thigh but frozen like the city. A quiet sadness settled inside the Friar. He shook it off and moved on.
Suddenly the dog sniffed hard at the roadside and ran. The Friar followed. A man lay on the ground. Beside his face, an empty liquor bottle; his glasses were broken one lens far away, the other stuck to his forehead. Papers were pinned under his hand. The Friar gently pulled them free. On one page were three lines of a poem raw but sharp, like bridges laid after a long silence to reach meaning far away. Reading them, the Friar felt the writer’s breath was near, but the body had given up.
Then he heard a voice from the direction of the graveyard someone was singing. Not sad, not cheerful more like a jasmine scent in light wind: faint, but true to its promise. He stood, signaled the dog, and said, “Let’s go.”
The Fourth Friar
This road was the emptiest. Fewer buildings, taller doors, rough wind in the bushes. Around a bend he saw a hospital sign: “City Hospital Emergency.” His steps quickened. Inside, long white hallways, charts on the walls, a stretcher fallen over no people. Beds were made in the wards; heart monitors were silent. A pale neon light trembled at one door. He entered: a maternity ward. Behind white curtains were beds blankets swollen in places, but still. A nurse sat on a chair, head bowed, pen in hand, notes open yet her pupils were stone.
At the far end, a door stood ajar. On a metal tray lay small cloth bundles delivery tools, tiny baby caps. He touched a quilt; the cloth was cold. He drew his hand back, as if the cold had teeth. He left the ward. Somewhere high near the ceiling, a ventilator light flickered once and went out. He did not see it, but the silence remembered the moment.
Back Together
The four Friares returned. Near the crossroads, they all heard the song from the graveyard. They met and stood in a deep ring of quiet, then told their stories: the bloody scholar in the university, the stone police, the frozen law halls, the dead files in offices, the burned school, the locked worship place, the poet by a broken bottle, the numb hospital. “We’re late,” they said. “What was to happen has happened. The city has turned to stone.”
Still, the song pulled them on. The road rose gently; the blackness among the trees grew thinner. By the graveyard gate was a small shrine green cloth with golden tassels; the lamps were out, but the bowls still smelled of oil. A tall, thin, dusty mendicant stood there; white dust in his beard glinted like snow melted and frozen again. He hummed a tune no set raga or meter, just an honest rhythm from within.
He fell silent when they came. He looked at them the way stones might look quiet, but piercing.
“We need to tell the city that something is about to happen,” the first Friar said. “Tell us how to wake these motionless people how to make them alive again.”
The mendicant smiled. “What must happen will happen. Waking them won’t change it. They will wake in their own time and live in their own time.”
“What we saw today,” the second said, “felt like a day of doom.”
“What is Doomsday?” the mendicant shrugged. “It comes every day and leaves every day. Each heart has its own shape of it sometimes for an hour, sometimes for years. But listen ” He tilted his head. “Do you hear anything?”
All four listened and heard it: faint, glass-fine, yet cutting through the whole world the cry of a newborn.
Following the Cry
It came from a lane behind the graveyard. The bricks were black with many seasons. A door hung half open, as if forced and left. In the small courtyard lay scattered leaves, a broken chair, and an old tiffin with dried milk stains on its rim. The dog went ahead, sat by a corner room, and thumped its tail softly. The crying came from inside.
The room was small. A dead bulb hung from the ceiling. The sky outside the window had not yet turned blue, but the darkness was thinning. On the floor lay an old blanket. In the middle was a bundle of cloth, and from it came the tiny sobbing sound. Beside it, a woman lay unconscious yellow face, a hand stretched toward the blanket but not reaching it. In the doorway stood a man, frozen eyes open, a phone in his hand whose screen had lit and then turned to stone with him.
The first Friar checked the woman’s wrist slow pulse, but there. The second opened the blanket gently. A newborn so new it seemed the world’s first breath had only just touched his lungs. His small fingers were clenched; his face was still warm with the color of living blood. His crying rose and dipped with life.
“There is life here,” the third whispered. In his eyes, for the first time, a small light appeared like a lamp set in a far window after a journey of centuries.
The fourth sprinkled water on the woman’s face. She groaned and opened heavy lids. “My baby…” she said weakly, as if the word lay on a line between sleep and waking. The first Friar placed the child in her arms. After a hiccup, the baby quieted and rested against his mother’s warm skin.
Outside, the trees’ darkness softened. Before-dawn birds began to stir in a way the heart hears before the ears do. The dusty dog went to the door, then returned and sat by the baby. Its breathing drew slow circles of calm in the room.
“The city has turned to stone,” the second Friar said softly, “but here… here a gentle breath continues.”
The mendicant was now in the doorway no one knew when he had arrived. The empty tune returned to his lips, but now there was a small new note in it. Looking at the baby, he said, “Every closed door opens one day. Every fixed eye blinks one day.”
“We wanted to warn the people,” the first Friar said.
“You already have,” the mendicant answered, stepping on the cracked bricks. “Your footsteps warned them. Stone can hear, but slowly.”
“And what about what has already happened?” the third asked. “The blood in the university, the ash of the school, the lock on the mosque, the rigid chairs of law who will repair these?”
“Time,” said the mendicant. “But time doesn’t stitch alone. Time brings the cloth. You must make the seams.”
“We?” the fourth said, surprised. He remembered the barren hospital the stone-eyed nurse, the dead ventilator lamp. “What can we sew? Our hands are wrapped in dust.”
“Where hands are tied, the tongue can stitch,” the mendicant smiled. “Where the tongue stops, the feet stitch. Where feet tire, the breath stitches. And when even the breath runs short, a baby cries. That cry is the first stitch the first knot.”
They fell silent. The mother’s eyes were now fully open. She held her child to her chest. Tears filled her eyes, not sweet, but bright with a spark of hope. The dog sniffed the baby’s scent and wagged its tail very gently, as if to say: “That was the sound.”
A Thin Line of Light
Above the lane, a thin white cut appeared in the sky like a needle prick in a black curtain with a thread of day pulling through. The branches still lamented, but now it sounded more like sleep breaking than grief. The shrine’s lamp bowls did not light by themselves, yet faint patches of morning slid across its walls. Leaves trembled like a small xylophone. Far away, a tiny metal click sounded inside a window latch tick as if the first lock in the stone city was trying to open.
The four Friares stepped out. The woman stood in the doorway with the child and a thin cloth over her shoulder. “Will everything be all right?” she asked an ordinary question, but her voice made the room wet again.
“Everything is never all right,” the first Friar said gently. “But some things do become right when someone hears the first sound. You heard it. We heard it. Keep this one sound safe.”
They went back into the lane. The dog chose the path by sniffing at each step. This time he led not to the graveyard but toward the city’s heart. The mendicant leaned on a pillar by the shrine, raised a hand after them, and said softly, “Doomsdays come and go every day. But each one leaves behind a child, whose cry reminds us we are still alive.”
The City’s First Movements
They reached the same crossroads with the fruit shop. The bulb flickered, like a short nap ending in a stretch. The man on the chair was still still, but at the root of his eyelash a thread-thin tremor appeared so slight a stronger wind would hide it. The first Friar noticed. “See?” he told the second. “Stone hears, but late. He is hearing.”
Far away, a junk cart’s wheel turned half an inch. A curtain stirred in a window. Through the keyhole of the locked place of worship, a hairline of light entered. By the burned school gate, a scrap of paper lifted, spun once in the air, and fell. In the university hall, at the edge of the blood stain, a tiny insect moved; perhaps morning comes for it too.
“What do we do now?” the third asked, brushing dust from his palms that refused to leave.
“Keep walking,” the fourth replied. “Where silence sits on a door, leave a breath there. Where a latch sleeps in a lane, knock softly just enough not to frighten the eyelids of sleep.”
The dog gave a small bark the same it gave at the serpent’s nest, but now without fear, only gentle warning. On the horizon, the thin line of morning brightened. The winds no longer cried; they passed over leaves with a quiet greeting.
The Serpent and the Eggs
In his mind, the first Friar saw again the serpent sitting on her eggs, deaf to the dog’s bark. A thought lit up in him: not every silence is death. Some silences protect new blood. As the serpent turned to stone to warm her eggs, perhaps the city too sits on a great egg an egg of a new season and will stay stone until the first beak, the first crack, the first soft shell-breaking is heard. Often that first sound is a baby’s cry, or a lamp’s first flicker, or the metal tick of a key turning.
The temperature of his eyelids changed with the thought. He did not smile, but his breathing softened light, yet clear. The second Friar saw and did not ask; they had learned that some truths speak in breath before they speak in words.
The Last Window
When they stepped into the city’s heart, they knew they did not need crowds. They only needed to guard the smallest signs of life wherever they found them. The fruit shop’s bulb did not need replacing at once only care so its flicker would not drown in dark. In the bleeding hall of the university, opening one window for morning air would be enough. Outside the police station, snapping one dead twig might make room for a new shoot. At the burned school’s gate, one day a child might draw the letter alif on the ground with a piece of chalk just one line, a slight tightening of lips. The light through the lock’s hole would grow a little wider. The poet’s three lines could rest like salt in one eye and that eye would blink again.
In the maternity ward, where the nurse sat like stone, someone should hang a small bulb. Maybe when the baby gets his first vaccine, that same nurse will blink. You can’t be sure but sometimes hope is stronger than certainty.
They walked on. The dusty dog moved sometimes ahead, sometimes behind, sometimes to the side wherever an unseen scent asked for a change in path. The stones of the city slowly drew moisture into themselves. In some places, a drop formed and fell; in others, only the smell of damp rose. It was enough. For this morning, it was enough.
By the shrine, the mendicant changed his tune. The rhythm now carried the newborn’s cry, a far-off call that sinks into stone, empty at first, then filled with meaning by the heart. Under his breath he said, “What must happen, happens… and what wants to happen arrives as a sound.”
The Friares looked back at the city high buildings, still signs, people like statues in chairs but among all this, a tiny tremor somewhere. As if light had just started learning how to spread. As if wind had just learned that crying and humming are close cousins. As if dust had decided not to leave the hands, but to give them a new scent the smell of truth, the steam of labor, the soft, lasting warmth of hope.
The four looked at one another. No words. The dusty dog opened its mouth, let its tongue fall out, and breathed in a way that felt like the day’s first comfort. The thin white line in the sky had widened. For the first time, the city’s ears heard one same distant sound together the newborn’s cry, practicing its name in the language of the world.
And so the dead fire in the cave, the quiet heat of the serpent’s eggs, the voiceless faces of the stone city, the mendicant by the shrine, and the four Friares all became parts of one breath. The next part of that breath was day, then work, then evening, then night. And in the last watch of every night, somewhere, another cry would be born reminding us that doomsdays come and go, but the thin vein of life keeps beating, somewhere, always.
About the Creator
Mansoor Afaq
Mansoor Afaq, a renowned Urdu and Saraiki poet, writer, and columnist, has authored 14 books and created 85 plays and 6 documentaries. His work bridges tradition and modernity, enriching South Asian literature and culture.



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