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When Stars Fell

When Stars Fell: Dreams Written in Light

By ABDU LLAHPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

The night it happened, the sky was clearer than anyone in the town of Elowen had ever seen. Not a single cloud dared smudge the velvet black canvas. The stars, for once, seemed closer—hung lower like silver fruits ready to be plucked.

Elowen was a forgotten town nestled at the edge of an old forest and bordered by hills that had long surrendered their names to time. Few people came, and fewer left. Life there was simple, predictable. Until the stars fell.

It began with a hum.

Not a loud, terrifying sound, but a gentle vibration in the bones, like the Earth was exhaling after centuries of holding its breath. Then, from the heavens, they came—slivers of light, bright and burning. They fell in silence, dozens at first, then hundreds. Trails of shimmering dust streaked the sky, so many that it no longer looked like night.

Children whooped in delight. Elders crossed themselves. The town priest wept openly on the church steps, mumbling prayers in a forgotten dialect. People stood in their doorways, looking up, unsure whether they were witnessing a miracle or the end of days.

But nothing burned. No craters were found. The stars landed softly, like snowflakes.

The first one to find one up close was a boy named Corin. He had wandered beyond the fields into the Hollow, where the tall grass swallowed the moonlight. There, nestled in the crook of an old tree root, lay something not quite a rock, not quite a jewel.

It pulsed faintly, like it was breathing. Corin, driven by some unseen force, reached out and touched it.

And everything changed.

Corin didn’t sleep that night. Instead, he sat wide-eyed at the edge of his bed, hands trembling. He could feel the heartbeat of the thing in his pocket—a rhythm that matched his own. When he blinked, the stars shifted position in his mind. He began to see constellations that didn’t exist in any book. He heard music in silence. Whispers in water. His dreams no longer belonged to him.

The next day, more children returned with stars of their own.

They called them "hearts," because they pulsed with warmth. Each was unique—some bright blue, others a dull amber, some almost transparent. The children didn't speak much of what the hearts did, but they walked differently now. With certainty. With purpose.

And then the adults began to worry.

The mayor convened a meeting. The priest condemned the stars as celestial temptations. A few parents tried to take the hearts from their children—but the hearts burned when touched by anyone not chosen.

Soon, the children stopped going to school. They stopped speaking to the grown-ups altogether, communicating instead in glances and shared dreams. At night, they gathered near the Hollow. They would sit in circles, their hearts glowing softly, hands outstretched, drawing symbols in the air that shimmered and dissolved.

Corin had become their leader, though no one declared it. He simply knew more. He saw further. He spoke with a voice that was not his own, but deeper, older.

“We are remembering,” he told them one night. “Not learning. These stars are pieces of what we were, what we lost when the world forgot the sky.”

Some believed him. Others feared him.

A storm came two weeks later—lightning without thunder, rain that fell upward, and clouds that changed color like oil on water. That night, the stars fell again.

But this time, they came in silence and disappeared before reaching the ground.

The next morning, the children were gone.

Not missing. Gone.

Their beds were made. Their shoes were neatly arranged. Some left notes—strange symbols, poems about flying and light, sketches of places no one recognized.

The townsfolk searched every inch of Elowen. The forest, the hills, the Hollow. Nothing. No footprints. No scent. No answers.

And then, for the first time in generations, Elowen was quiet.

Years passed.

No more stars fell. The trees crept slowly into the roads. Homes were boarded. Shops closed. Elowen became less a town and more a shadow of one.

But on certain nights—clear, starless nights—people say you can hear music drifting from the Hollow. And sometimes, just before dawn, strange lights dance at the forest’s edge. Those who see them speak of warmth, of a presence watching gently from above, or perhaps within.

Some believe the children were taken. Others believe they became something more. Carriers of ancient truths lost when the world turned its back on the stars.

Corin’s mother never left Elowen. Every night she sits on her porch, eyes to the sky, waiting.

And when people ask her why she never moved, never gave up, she only smiles and says,

"The stars aren’t done falling yet.

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ABDU LLAH

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