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What if I were in his shoes?

For Kayleigh Fraser's micro-fiction challenge

By Mo DarasiPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
What if I were in his shoes?
Photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash

I’ve finally found him. I chased him two miles, but that’s him there. He thought I would give up? How could he run on those tattered shoes? Who's that raggedy little girl? Why not take care of her instead of running around stea- oh.

Tires screech as he drives away.

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About the Creator

Mo Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.

Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶2 years ago

    Such a well written story about the sad plight of all too many of our less well off brothers and sisters.👍🏼

  • JBaz2 years ago

    I read the explanation and I get it.. nice one

  • I don't understand 😅 If you don't mind, can you please explain it to me? 😅

  • Donna Renee2 years ago

    Oooh nice one, Mohammed! I’d better check out this challenge 😁

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