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We Loved Each Other Until the House Took Sides

The house was never quiet after she died.

By aneesPublished about 14 hours ago 3 min read

By Anees Ul Ameen

Husband

The house was never quiet after she died.

People say empty homes echo, but this one whispered. Floorboards creaked where no one walked. Doors sighed open at night. Sometimes I could swear the walls were listening.

Sara loved this house. She said it felt alive.

I didn’t understand what she meant—until I was alone in it.

Wife

I never meant to stay.

Death wasn’t a choice. It was a sudden forgetting. One moment I was reaching for his hand in the kitchen, the next I was watching him kneel beside my body, screaming my name like it might stitch me back together.

The house held me.

It remembered me when my body couldn’t.

Husband

After the funeral, everyone told me to leave.

“New place, fresh start,” they said.

But every room still smelled like her shampoo. Her coffee mug sat where she left it. The dent in the couch remembered her weight.

I slept on her side of the bed.

That’s when I first heard breathing that wasn’t mine.

Wife

I learned how to move without being seen. Not walking—settling. I learned the language of creaks and drafts, how to brush against curtains so they shivered instead of screamed.

I didn’t want to scare him.

I just wanted him to stay.

Husband

Things started small.

Keys moved. Lights turned off by themselves. The bathroom mirror fogged even when no one showered.

Then I heard her voice.

Not clearly. Not words.

Just… presence.

I told myself grief does this. That love doesn’t die politely.

Wife

He talked to me at night.

Apologized for things I had already forgiven him for. For the arguments. For not noticing how tired I’d been. For being late the day I collapsed.

I wanted to tell him it wasn’t his fault.

But the house liked my silence.

Husband

One evening, I found her sweater folded on the bed.

I hadn’t touched it in weeks.

My chest tightened. “Sara?” I whispered.

The lights flickered once.

Yes.

That’s what it felt like.

Wife

I shouldn’t have done that.

The house warmed when he noticed me. Like it approved. Like it had been waiting for permission to keep me.

I felt stronger here.

Too strong.

Husband

I stopped inviting people over.

The house didn’t like company.

Doors slammed when guests laughed too loudly. Cold drafts followed them from room to room. One friend swore someone whispered her name.

“She’s still here, isn’t she?” my mother asked gently.

I didn’t answer.

Wife

Jealousy surprised me.

Every time he talked about moving on—even jokingly—the walls groaned. Pipes rattled. The house tightened around us like a fist.

I didn’t ask it to do that.

But I didn’t stop it either.

Husband

The night everything changed, I packed a suitcase.

I couldn’t breathe there anymore. Love had turned heavy. Watching the shadows felt like betrayal—of her, or myself. I didn’t know which.

“I have to go,” I said out loud.

The temperature dropped instantly.

Wife

Panic tore through me.

If he left, I would fade. I felt it. The house felt it too.

It locked the doors.

Husband

Every lock clicked at once.

The windows slammed shut.

The walls creaked—not whispering now, but warning.

“Sara,” I said, voice shaking. “This isn’t love.”

The floor beneath me trembled.

Wife

I never wanted to trap him.

But fear makes monsters out of devotion.

I gathered every ounce of myself, every memory, every echo of breath I had left.

I stood where he could finally see me.

Husband

She stood at the end of the hallway.

Not whole. Not broken.

Just… her.

“I can’t stay,” I said, crying. “You wouldn’t want this.”

She smiled sadly.

“I know.”

The house screamed.

Wife

Letting go felt like dying again.

But love isn’t possession.

It’s release.

I stepped back.

The house loosened its grip.

Husband

The doors unlocked.

The air warmed.

When I turned back, she was gone.

The house went silent for the first time since her death.

Wife

I left with the quiet.

Husband

I moved out a week later.

Sometimes, when I pass the old house, I swear it sighs—disappointed, but peaceful.

We loved each other enough to let go.

Not everyone does.

— Written by Anees Ul Ameen

Author’s Note:

This story was written with the assistance of AI and carefully edited, revised, and finalized by Anees Ul Ameen.

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